The X-facter - VGF

Cluelesscat · 08-24-2007, 11:54 PM

I'll be putting more panels up periodicly.

Bomby · 08-25-2007, 12:00 AM

1. You spelled "factor" wrong.
2. The beginning is not intriguing enough to capture the viewer's attention.
3. It seems a bit on the homophobic side.

**Dylan** · 08-25-2007, 11:12 AM

Some text boxes would be nice.

-Dylan

The Eddie Stilson · 09-09-2007, 02:43 PM

Very short.

Chunky Kong12345 · 09-09-2007, 04:19 PM

I don't get it.

Also, stop using the cliched "LOL X AND ZERO ARE GAY OR ARE THEY".

t3hDarkness · 09-10-2007, 04:44 PM

The original version was female. Then the American version was written as a male. The Japanese version gets retconned as a male.

08-24-2007, 11:54 PM	#1
Cluelesscat Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Gender: Posts: 42 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,230.00 Bank: 1,061.20 Total Points: 2,291.20 Donate	The X-facter I'll be putting more panels up periodicly.

08-25-2007, 12:00 AM	#2
Bomby All I Ever Wanted Was To Pick Apart the Day & Put the Pieces Back Together My Way Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: The People's Republic of Madison, WI Gender: Posts: 14,713 Thanks: 203 Thanked 460 Times in 319 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 4,934.79 Bank: 1,971,248.97 Total Points: 1,976,183.76 Donate	1. You spelled "factor" wrong. 2. The beginning is not intriguing enough to capture the viewer's attention. 3. It seems a bit on the homophobic side.

08-25-2007, 11:12 AM	#3
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,107 Thanks: 860 Thanked 880 Times in 402 Posts Points: 31,010.58 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 31,010.59 Donate	Some text boxes would be nice. -Dylan

09-09-2007, 02:43 PM	#4
The Eddie Stilson Newbie Join Date: Aug 2007 Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 163.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 163.00 Donate	Very short.

09-09-2007, 04:19 PM	#5
Chunky Kong12345 BEEP BEEP I'M A JEEP Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: ogmftwbqq Gender: Posts: 16,436 Thanks: 61 Thanked 212 Times in 155 Posts Points: 300.05 Bank: 84,672.20 Total Points: 84,972.25 Donate	I don't get it. Also, stop using the cliched "LOL X AND ZERO ARE GAY OR ARE THEY".

09-10-2007, 04:44 PM	#6
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I've been lost here before Gender: Posts: 4,153 Thanks: 43 Thanked 109 Times in 87 Posts Points: 12,287.81 Bank: 84,629.27 Total Points: 96,917.07 Donate	The original version was female. Then the American version was written as a male. The Japanese version gets retconned as a male.