Donkey Kong Grand Adventures - Page 2 - VGF

TyFACE · 09-23-2007, 08:03 PM

Eddie, you gotta think about these things before you post them.

Lord Kenny · 09-23-2007, 08:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dylan

This is bad, man! Rrrl bad!

I guess he forgort to port. I mean, I guess he forgat to prat. I mean, gorka fa pork!

TyFACE · 09-23-2007, 08:10 PM

^What?

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 09-23-2007, 08:16 PM

JAERB

Lord Kenny · 09-23-2007, 08:19 PM

This comic is like a great sports play.

Insert unfunny meme here · 09-23-2007, 08:33 PM

Who let the rapping old person in the internet?

Smarmy Vent · 09-23-2007, 10:52 PM

I even made it appropriate for the forum.

SephirothKirby · 09-24-2007, 04:21 PM

I...

Well...

Is this a member who made a second account to play a prank on us? Because I get the feeling it is, for some reason.

Tazy_10 · 09-24-2007, 05:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Kenny

This comic is like a great sports play.

Coach Kenny, you say everything is like a great sports play.

TyFACE · 09-24-2007, 05:28 PM

^^I think so.

Lord Kenny · 09-24-2007, 06:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tazy 10

Coach Kenny, you say everything is like a great sports play.

Oh.

...Mouthwarsh?

TyFACE · 09-24-2007, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Valigarmander

I even made it appropriate for the forum.

How can one website have so many of those?

Wait, you do find all of those on 4chan, don't you?

Smarmy Vent · 09-24-2007, 06:43 PM

^ For the most part.

TyFACE · 09-24-2007, 07:02 PM

I went there a few minutes ago. I can see why it has a disclaimer.

The Eddie Stilson · 09-25-2007, 09:34 PM

Ok, i'd liek to thanke veryone for their good and negative criticism. My father said I should accept even negative criticism for he siad it only makes us better so I'm thanking you guys to, but relaly thanks for the postivie too. The second episode of Donkey Kong Grand Adventures was made before I read your posts guys,so thats why episode 3 looks better then episode 2.

Lord Kenny · 09-25-2007, 10:11 PM

You really need to work on the writing. They're all talking like robots.

"Boy it's really dark in this jungle I wonder if I will be able to find Donkey Kong in this dark"? Seriously.

**Dylan** · 09-25-2007, 11:05 PM

- Work on the dialogue. I talked better than that when I was 11. I have no idea why you can't.

- It's great if you want to put your sprites on real-life backgrounds, but it doesn't make sense if DK is standing in MID-AIR.

- Why did you get rid of backgrounds in the last two panels of each comic? Did you just get lazy? Man up and put some effort into this.

- Beat? What beat?

- It obviously isn't dark in that jungle. Quit trying to fool us.

It needs work. And I mean a ton of it. Get to work and quit being so goddamn bad at this.

-Dylan

YOU ARE MY FRIENDS · 09-25-2007, 11:12 PM

Don't save as jpg. Jpgs hurt the picture.

Text boxes would also help.

Try getting equal sized panels with straight lines.

Try working on your grammar.

Why is it just Funky's head? I know he has sprites.

If the word "Diddy" wasn't in the second to last panel, I wouldn't know who was saying what.

What Dylan said.

Metal Man · 09-26-2007, 02:04 AM

Actually, this comic's hilarious as-is. Maybe not in the way you intended, but... yeah.

Keep up the good work. Alternatively, improve it a lot so that it makes me laugh over the dialogue, instead of the image of Funky's head stretched sideways to the extent it looks like a giant smashed it flat.

Also,

**Dylan** · 09-26-2007, 08:05 AM

^ ...Who let you back in the house?

-Dylan

09-23-2007, 08:16 PM	#24
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09-25-2007, 11:12 PM	#38
YOU ARE MY FRIENDS JESUS SAID Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: ON A FRIENDSHIP TREK (Panfan) Gender: Posts: 11,161 Thanks: 481 Thanked 842 Times in 602 Posts Blog Entries: 12 Points: 4,225.01 Bank: 21,897.47 Total Points: 26,122.48 Donate	Don't save as jpg. Jpgs hurt the picture. Text boxes would also help. Try getting equal sized panels with straight lines. Try working on your grammar. Why is it just Funky's head? I know he has sprites. If the word "Diddy" wasn't in the second to last panel, I wouldn't know who was saying what. What Dylan said. __________________ L2R: Alex, Max, Bitch, Ethan, I'm not sure she has a name.

09-26-2007, 02:04 AM	#39
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,712 Thanks: 74 Thanked 191 Times in 131 Posts Points: 8,344.22 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,344.22 Donate	Actually, this comic's hilarious as-is. Maybe not in the way you intended, but... yeah. Keep up the good work. Alternatively, improve it a lot so that it makes me laugh over the dialogue, instead of the image of Funky's head stretched sideways to the extent it looks like a giant smashed it flat. Also, Last edited by Metal Man; 09-26-2007 at 02:20 AM. Reason: EVIL FUNKY

09-23-2007, 08:03 PM	#21
TyFACE Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 3,557 Thanks: 221 Thanked 76 Times in 54 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 630.73 Bank: 7,597.23 Total Points: 8,227.96 Donate	Eddie, you gotta think about these things before you post them.

09-23-2007, 08:10 PM	#23
TyFACE Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 3,557 Thanks: 221 Thanked 76 Times in 54 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 630.73 Bank: 7,597.23 Total Points: 8,227.96 Donate	^What?

09-23-2007, 08:19 PM	#25
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,332.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,457.26 Donate	This comic is like a great sports play.

09-23-2007, 08:33 PM	#26
Insert unfunny meme here Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,810 Thanks: 278 Thanked 182 Times in 128 Posts Points: 23,666.75 Bank: 40,660.18 Total Points: 64,326.92 Donate	Who let the rapping old person in the internet?

09-23-2007, 10:52 PM	#27
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,680 Thanks: 730 Thanked 1,147 Times in 606 Posts Points: 28.98 Bank: 117,932.15 Total Points: 117,961.13 Donate	I even made it appropriate for the forum.

09-24-2007, 04:21 PM	#28
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,771 Thanks: 190 Thanked 255 Times in 155 Posts Points: 649.05 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,960.38 Donate	I... Well... Is this a member who made a second account to play a prank on us? Because I get the feeling it is, for some reason.

09-24-2007, 05:28 PM	#30
TyFACE Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 3,557 Thanks: 221 Thanked 76 Times in 54 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 630.73 Bank: 7,597.23 Total Points: 8,227.96 Donate	^^I think so.

09-24-2007, 06:43 PM	#33
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,680 Thanks: 730 Thanked 1,147 Times in 606 Posts Points: 28.98 Bank: 117,932.15 Total Points: 117,961.13 Donate	^ For the most part.

09-24-2007, 07:02 PM	#34
TyFACE Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 3,557 Thanks: 221 Thanked 76 Times in 54 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 630.73 Bank: 7,597.23 Total Points: 8,227.96 Donate	I went there a few minutes ago. I can see why it has a disclaimer.

09-25-2007, 09:34 PM	#35
The Eddie Stilson Newbie Join Date: Aug 2007 Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 164.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 164.00 Donate	Ok, i'd liek to thanke veryone for their good and negative criticism. My father said I should accept even negative criticism for he siad it only makes us better so I'm thanking you guys to, but relaly thanks for the postivie too. The second episode of Donkey Kong Grand Adventures was made before I read your posts guys,so thats why episode 3 looks better then episode 2.

09-25-2007, 10:11 PM	#36
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Minnesota Gender: Posts: 1,974 Thanks: 218 Thanked 205 Times in 90 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 1,332.96 Bank: 129,124.30 Total Points: 130,457.26 Donate	You really need to work on the writing. They're all talking like robots. "Boy it's really dark in this jungle I wonder if I will be able to find Donkey Kong in this dark"? Seriously.

09-25-2007, 11:05 PM	#37
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,107 Thanks: 860 Thanked 880 Times in 402 Posts Points: 31,010.58 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 31,010.59 Donate	- Work on the dialogue. I talked better than that when I was 11. I have no idea why you can't. - It's great if you want to put your sprites on real-life backgrounds, but it doesn't make sense if DK is standing in MID-AIR. - Why did you get rid of backgrounds in the last two panels of each comic? Did you just get lazy? Man up and put some effort into this. - Beat? What beat? - It obviously isn't dark in that jungle. Quit trying to fool us. It needs work. And I mean a ton of it. Get to work and quit being so goddamn bad at this. -Dylan

09-26-2007, 08:05 AM	#40
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,107 Thanks: 860 Thanked 880 Times in 402 Posts Points: 31,010.58 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 31,010.59 Donate	^ ...Who let you back in the house? -Dylan