The Adventures Of Link And Mario! (Comic!) - VGF

SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs · 10-08-2007, 09:27 PM

This is my second comic. Heres the first comic strip!

Do you like it?

**Crazyswordsman** · 10-08-2007, 09:53 PM

Dylan is sad you didn't put it in his forum, and so am I.

-CSM

***ZeldaGirl*** · 10-08-2007, 10:43 PM

^ZG has hopefully amended that.

Smarmy Vent · 10-08-2007, 10:50 PM

1) Why is there a second Mario in the fifth panel?

2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs · 10-09-2007, 07:16 AM

Oh, ill get rid of the second mario. I was deciding what to do for the last panel. T'was an accident.

Tazy_10 · 10-09-2007, 07:30 AM

....I like that tilting word bubble...

Though....is that Jpeg? cause you're sprites are really blurry.

Nice Punchline though.

Smarmy Vent · 10-09-2007, 09:16 AM

Yeah, Jpegs are a big no-no for sprite comics. Save them as GIFs or PNGs instead, it'll preserve the quality of the picture much better.

speed is OVER 9000 · 10-09-2007, 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Valigarmander

2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

May I say that was mean and uncalled for

TyFACE · 10-09-2007, 09:35 PM

^This is a forum. Live with it.

**Dylan** · 10-09-2007, 09:48 PM

^^ and ^: Both of you shut up.

This comic is bad. Why does the background keep changing sizes?

Why doesn't Mario stay in one spot? He keeps moving on top of the block, then...his feet are inside it? What?

And why isn't it funny? I should be laughing, but I'm not.

C'mon, kid. You can do better.

-Dylan

ISA56 2.0 · 10-18-2007, 10:50 AM

Lemme see....
1. It looks JPEG'd.
2. Why is the second Mario in the panel not removed yet?
3. Mario moved in two of the diffrent panels.

4. The joke at the end isn't that funny.
These comics have the potential to be good comics. All you have to do is put more effort into it.

SephirothKirby · 10-18-2007, 05:39 PM

^ Number 4 isn't presented correctly. It's not even criticism. It's your opinion, so don't try to pull it off as a fact.

I'd like to see more of these, though. It could have an interesting story, but you have to continue it for it to have one at all, eh?

10-08-2007, 09:27 PM	#1
SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 183.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 183.00 Donate	The Adventures Of Link And Mario! (Comic!) This is my second comic. Heres the first comic strip! Do you like it?

10-08-2007, 09:53 PM	#2
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10-08-2007, 10:43 PM	#3
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10-08-2007, 10:50 PM	#4
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,633 Thanks: 727 Thanked 1,137 Times in 600 Posts Points: 29.31 Bank: 116,362.15 Total Points: 116,391.46 Donate	1) Why is there a second Mario in the fifth panel? 2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

10-09-2007, 07:16 AM	#5
SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 183.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 183.00 Donate	Oh, ill get rid of the second mario. I was deciding what to do for the last panel. T'was an accident.

10-09-2007, 07:30 AM	#6
Tazy_10 Forum Host Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Tazy is a bad Mafia Player. I'm Serious. Gender: Posts: 7,554 Thanks: 156 Thanked 267 Times in 207 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 18,950.45 Bank: 27,192.19 Total Points: 46,142.63 Donate	....I like that tilting word bubble... Though....is that Jpeg? cause you're sprites are really blurry. Nice Punchline though.

10-09-2007, 09:16 AM	#7
Smarmy Vent The night is darkest just before the dawn. Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Gotham Gender: Posts: 12,633 Thanks: 727 Thanked 1,137 Times in 600 Posts Points: 29.31 Bank: 116,362.15 Total Points: 116,391.46 Donate	Yeah, Jpegs are a big no-no for sprite comics. Save them as GIFs or PNGs instead, it'll preserve the quality of the picture much better.

10-09-2007, 09:35 PM	#9
TyFACE Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Nowhere. And everywhere. It's a gift. Gender: Posts: 3,522 Thanks: 215 Thanked 73 Times in 51 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 74.96 Bank: 7,597.23 Total Points: 7,672.19 Donate	^This is a forum. *Live with it.*

10-09-2007, 09:48 PM	#10
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,102 Thanks: 856 Thanked 876 Times in 400 Posts Points: 30,721.92 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 30,721.93 Donate	^^ and ^: Both of you shut up. This comic is bad. Why does the background keep changing sizes? Why doesn't Mario stay in one spot? He keeps moving on top of the block, then...his feet are inside it? What? And why isn't it funny? I should be laughing, but I'm not. C'mon, kid. You can do better. -Dylan

10-18-2007, 10:50 AM	#11
ISA56 2.0 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Fred's House Gender: Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 404.37 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 404.37 Donate	Lemme see.... 1. It looks JPEG'd. 2. Why is the second Mario in the panel not removed yet? 3. Mario moved in two of the diffrent panels. 4. The joke at the end isn't that funny. These comics have the potential to be good comics. All you have to do is put more effort into it.

10-18-2007, 05:39 PM	#12
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,768 Thanks: 190 Thanked 253 Times in 153 Posts Points: 526.19 Bank: 91,311.33 Total Points: 91,837.52 Donate	^ Number 4 isn't presented correctly. It's not even criticism. It's your opinion, so don't try to pull it off as a fact. I'd like to see more of these, though. It could have an interesting story, but you have to continue it for it to have one at all, eh?