Ultra Mario Bros. - VGF

DarkZero · 10-18-2007, 03:59 PM

Here is my first sprite comic, Ultra Mario Bros. It's kinda cheesy, but it's the first issue.

**L007 is Undecided** · 10-19-2007, 08:53 PM

Where the hell is the credit for the sprites?

DarkZero · 10-21-2007, 01:17 PM

I will add on to this every time a new sprite is used.

Nintendo: Mario, Toad, background 1, Cheep-Cheep, Boo, Papa, Peach
DarkZero: Luigi, plane, ladder, phone, "SOON..." panel, bed, dresser, TV, bowl, fishing rod, bowser, C.O.M.P., Racoon Man
X Gamer 66: Wario
Jay Resop: Bill, Fred

DarkZero · 10-22-2007, 04:59 AM

TheEvilDM · 10-22-2007, 05:45 PM

^
edit: bitchslap

MUSHMAN · 10-23-2007, 06:31 PM

I like it better then the first one.

DarkZero · 10-25-2007, 09:17 PM

Don't worry. Once the plot develops, they'll get better.

DarkZero · 10-26-2007, 09:55 AM

Here's number 3. Go ahead and insult me. I'm used to it.

The Ultimate Kakashi Charizard · 10-26-2007, 10:36 AM

Make the comedy just a little bit better. Good comics though.

DarkZero · 10-26-2007, 10:42 AM

I try to, but I'm not that funny. I've heard that 5 is my best one, so we'll just have to wait.

Ultragamer · 10-26-2007, 11:37 PM

I like it!

**L007 is Undecided** · 10-27-2007, 07:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkZero

DarkZero: Luigi,

Bull****. The NES sprite of Luigi was just a recolor of Mario. You're telling me you got the correct body of Luigi with perfect 8-bit colors?

DarkZero · 10-27-2007, 07:38 AM

It's a custom sprite.

the bobs · 10-27-2007, 10:30 AM

His comics are pretty good. I just got done with #17.

DarkZero · 10-27-2007, 10:36 AM

It's hard to make a funny comic without cussing, sexual humor, gore, etc.

the bobs · 10-27-2007, 10:50 AM

Jay does it.

DarkZero · 10-27-2007, 11:01 AM

I'm not Jay.

X-3 · 10-27-2007, 01:57 PM

It's okay, but it REALLY needs text boxes of some sort. Or Luigi's talking color needs to be changed. It seriously took me a while to actually read what they were saying.

Other then that, it's not bad at all.

Microphone_Kirby · 10-27-2007, 02:03 PM

Not bad for your first one. I like to see how far this goes...

DarkZero · 10-27-2007, 02:19 PM

10-21-2007, 01:17 PM	#3
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	Credits I will add on to this every time a new sprite is used. Nintendo: Mario, Toad, background 1, Cheep-Cheep, Boo, Papa, Peach DarkZero: Luigi, plane, ladder, phone, "SOON..." panel, bed, dresser, TV, bowl, fishing rod, bowser, C.O.M.P., Racoon Man X Gamer 66: Wario Jay Resop: Bill, Fred Last edited by DarkZero; 11-09-2007 at 10:06 PM. Reason: cuz i wanna.

10-22-2007, 04:59 AM	#4
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	Last edited by DarkZero; 10-26-2007 at 03:04 PM. Reason: cuz i wanna.

10-22-2007, 05:45 PM	#5
TheEvilDM Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 463 Thanks: 12 Thanked 22 Times in 9 Posts Points: 3,324.36 Bank: 5,546.25 Total Points: 8,870.61 Donate	^ edit: bitchslap Last edited by TheEvilDM; 10-22-2007 at 09:28 PM.

10-25-2007, 09:17 PM	#7
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	Don't worry. Once the plot develops, they'll get better. Last edited by DarkZero; 10-25-2007 at 09:37 PM. Reason: cuz i wanna.

10-18-2007, 03:59 PM	#1
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	Ultra Mario Bros. Here is my first sprite comic, Ultra Mario Bros. It's kinda cheesy, but it's the first issue. Last edited by DarkZero; 10-27-2007 at 10:33 AM. Reason: cuz i wanna.

10-19-2007, 08:53 PM	#2
L007 is Undecided Axe Shreddin' Mod Join Date: May 2001 Location: Farmerland. Gender: Posts: 7,343 Thanks: 90 Thanked 292 Times in 172 Posts Points: 2,404.50 Bank: 16,603.91 Total Points: 19,008.41 Donate	Where the hell is the credit for the sprites?

10-23-2007, 06:31 PM	#6
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Trekkin' Gender: Posts: 3,128 Thanks: 75 Thanked 86 Times in 72 Posts Points: 366.36 Bank: 15,471.16 Total Points: 15,837.52 Donate	I like it better then the first one.

10-26-2007, 09:55 AM	#8
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	Here's number 3. Go ahead and insult me. I'm used to it.

10-26-2007, 10:36 AM	#9
The Ultimate Kakashi Charizard Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West Virginia Gender: Posts: 657 Thanks: 27 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Points: 97.00 Bank: 4,603.13 Total Points: 4,700.13 Donate	Make the comedy just a little bit better. Good comics though.

10-26-2007, 10:42 AM	#10
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	I try to, but I'm not that funny. I've heard that 5 is my best one, so we'll just have to wait.

10-26-2007, 11:37 PM	#11
Ultragamer Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 0.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 0 Donate	I like it!

10-27-2007, 07:38 AM	#13
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	It's a custom sprite.

10-27-2007, 10:30 AM	#14
the bobs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: old mcdonald's farm Gender: Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 62.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 62.00 Donate	His comics are pretty good. I just got done with #17.

10-27-2007, 10:36 AM	#15
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	It's hard to make a funny comic without cussing, sexual humor, gore, etc.

10-27-2007, 10:50 AM	#16
the bobs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: old mcdonald's farm Gender: Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 62.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 62.00 Donate	Jay does it.

10-27-2007, 11:01 AM	#17
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate	I'm not Jay.

10-27-2007, 01:57 PM	#18
X-3 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brigade HQ Gender: Posts: 9,068 Thanks: 265 Thanked 281 Times in 210 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Points: 6,749.10 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 6,749.10 Donate	It's okay, but it REALLY needs text boxes of some sort. Or Luigi's talking color needs to be changed. It seriously took me a while to actually read what they were saying. Other then that, it's not bad at all.

10-27-2007, 02:03 PM	#19
Microphone_Kirby Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Gender: Posts: 4,966 Thanks: 259 Thanked 79 Times in 70 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 19.00 Bank: 18,763.98 Total Points: 18,782.98 Donate	Not bad for your first one. I like to see how far this goes...

10-27-2007, 02:19 PM	#20
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 18,030.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 18,030.34 Donate