Star Trek/NC - Page 6 - VGF

DarkZero · 03-31-2008, 05:50 AM

Um... OK.

**Dylan** · 03-31-2008, 07:07 AM

You guys are a well of feedback.

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Cool... sorta.

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Originally Posted by SpaceNose

Um...Yay?

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Originally Posted by DarkZero

Um... OK.

If you guys don't have anything useful to say, then don't post at all.

Anyway, good job, Mushman. The NC installments are very NC.

MUSHMAN · 04-15-2008, 04:31 PM

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Part#15 Out of out league.

Wow, I can't believe I did that and didn't notice till now. fixed

Sorry for the delay, I've been doing more comics for science class. For some reason my teacher thinks they’re good.

MUSHMAN · 05-02-2008, 05:29 PM

Yayz If finally got a new comic done.

Part#16 This is Madness!

DarkZero · 05-03-2008, 04:41 AM

Oh, crap, it's SMB!

Good job, Mush.

MUSHMAN · 05-08-2008, 08:01 PM

Part17 As if you couldn't guess.

DarkZero · 05-09-2008, 05:35 AM

Nice.

**Dylan** · 05-09-2008, 12:11 PM

Just a quick question: Why is the negative space that weird green color?

MUSHMAN · 05-09-2008, 02:17 PM

I don't know, that's just the way I've always done it.

MUSHMAN · 06-06-2008, 10:21 AM

Part#18 A Revelation

Metal Man · 06-07-2008, 03:06 AM

Interesting. It's almost like you've both continued NC and managed to stick Star Trek into it.

When I think of what could be used to continue NC, this pops in mind.

Now if only there was some way it could be extended and put on NC proper...

My main suggestion is to be careful with the grammar. Some characters are missing commas in their sentences. This makes them sound more monotone to me than they really are. I like the touch of keeping the NC stuff with the NC style, too--almost to often people don't do that. They might criticize you, but that criticism is incorrect. I know this well, having maintained the NC style in a comic I made and having Tigt freak out over it.

Then Jay went "But wait, that's my style, what are you so upset about?" It was very awkward.

Anyway. It's pretty rare somebody can continue in an NC fashion and add in a new thing without overwriting it. (HINT HINT, SEAN KELLY) You should probably keep doing this....

1-up SalesFACEman · 06-07-2008, 10:35 PM

This is the best sprite comic I have ever seen on this forum. I'TS AMAZING!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! I'll make sure to keep checking back for new issues.

MUSHMAN · 06-08-2008, 12:15 PM

^^After finnishing this, I was planing on doing an all NC comic.

1-up SalesFACEman · 06-08-2008, 12:21 PM

cool.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 02:21 AM

....ooooooh boy, I think I see what will happen next....O_O

EDIT: Jay is the original creator of NC, right? Oh crap...

DarkZero · 06-09-2008, 04:41 AM

Xhorr? XHORR!!!

I, too, like this series. It really stretches the definition of a fan comix.

MUSHMAN · 06-09-2008, 07:55 AM

^^yes he is.

^You should see some of the novels. E.G. Star Trek meets the X-Men in "Planet X"

LuWEEGEEman · 06-09-2008, 06:41 PM

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^^After finnishing this, I was planing on doing an all NC comic.

yes.

MUSHMAN · 06-13-2008, 05:35 PM

Part#19 Mistakes made...

DarkZero · 06-14-2008, 07:07 AM

Nice. The Xhorr-Jay looks... well, weird. Good job.

06-09-2008, 02:21 AM	#115
Tubba@Blubba Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my own little world... Gender: Posts: 77 Thanks: 28 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,866.73 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,866.73 Donate	....ooooooh boy, I think I see what will happen next....O_O EDIT: Jay is the original creator of NC, right? Oh crap... Last edited by Tubba@Blubba; 06-09-2008 at 02:23 AM. Reason: needed to add a comment in.

03-31-2008, 05:50 AM	#101
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 17,275.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 17,275.34 Donate	Um... OK.

05-02-2008, 05:29 PM	#104
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	Yayz If finally got a new comic done. Part#16 This is Madness!

05-03-2008, 04:41 AM	#105
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 17,275.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 17,275.34 Donate	Oh, crap, it's SMB! Good job, Mush.

05-08-2008, 08:01 PM	#106
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	Part17 As if you couldn't guess.

05-09-2008, 05:35 AM	#107
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 17,275.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 17,275.34 Donate	Nice.

05-09-2008, 12:11 PM	#108
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,093 Thanks: 851 Thanked 874 Times in 400 Posts Points: 30,408.99 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 30,409.00 Donate	Just a quick question: Why is the negative space that weird green color?

05-09-2008, 02:17 PM	#109
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	I don't know, that's just the way I've always done it.

06-06-2008, 10:21 AM	#110
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	Part#18 A Revelation

06-07-2008, 03:06 AM	#111
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,701 Thanks: 74 Thanked 189 Times in 129 Posts Points: 7,958.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,958.89 Donate	Interesting. It's almost like you've both continued NC and managed to stick Star Trek into it. When I think of what could be used to continue NC, this pops in mind. Now if only there was some way it could be extended and put on NC proper... My main suggestion is to be careful with the grammar. Some characters are missing commas in their sentences. This makes them sound more monotone to me than they really are. I like the touch of keeping the NC stuff with the NC style, too--almost to often people don't do that. They might criticize you, but that criticism is incorrect. I know this well, having maintained the NC style in a comic I made and having Tigt freak out over it. Then Jay went "But wait, that's my style, what are you so upset about?" It was very awkward. Anyway. It's pretty rare somebody can continue in an NC fashion and add in a new thing without overwriting it. (HINT HINT, SEAN KELLY) You should probably keep doing this....

06-07-2008, 10:35 PM	#112
1-up SalesFACEman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Poot Gender: Posts: 958 Thanks: 55 Thanked 16 Times in 12 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 9,987.35 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 9,987.36 Donate	This is the best sprite comic I have ever seen on this forum. I'TS AMAZING!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! I'll make sure to keep checking back for new issues.

06-08-2008, 12:15 PM	#113
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	^^After finnishing this, I was planing on doing an all NC comic.

06-08-2008, 12:21 PM	#114
1-up SalesFACEman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Poot Gender: Posts: 958 Thanks: 55 Thanked 16 Times in 12 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 9,987.35 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 9,987.36 Donate	cool.

06-09-2008, 04:41 AM	#116
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 17,275.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 17,275.34 Donate	Xhorr? XHORR!!! I, too, like this series. It really stretches the definition of a fan comix.

06-09-2008, 07:55 AM	#117
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	^^yes he is. ^You should see some of the novels. E.G. Star Trek meets the X-Men in "Planet X"

06-13-2008, 05:35 PM	#119
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Being ignored by That Guy. Gender: Posts: 3,063 Thanks: 75 Thanked 82 Times in 68 Posts Points: 1,372.65 Bank: 15,367.81 Total Points: 16,740.46 Donate	Part#19 Mistakes made...

06-14-2008, 07:07 AM	#120
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: In the refrigerator, behind the mayonaise, next to the ketchup, and to the left of the coleslaw. Gender: Posts: 2,574 Thanks: 196 Thanked 94 Times in 72 Posts Points: 17,275.34 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 17,275.34 Donate	Nice. The Xhorr-Jay looks... well, weird. Good job.