Stranded Mario World - VGF

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:27 PM

SO this is my first post and my first chapter

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it looks like luigi is flipin mario off on the advance part

MUSHMAN · 11-09-2007, 04:42 PM

what's with the Advance?

They're off the island now so what's the next story about

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:47 PM

i cant do any more unless my other 2 are deleted........my comp is gay and made 3 of the same threads

MUSHMAN · 11-09-2007, 04:54 PM

Dylan's not goingto like that 3 of the same threads

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:55 PM

i know!!! i didnt try to make them i want 2 deleted how do u delete them
?

MUSHMAN · 11-09-2007, 04:59 PM

i don't think you can

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 05:02 PM

ah shoot!!! cant the mods and admins delete them?!!!

MUSHMAN · 11-09-2007, 05:04 PM

I think so, but if they could wouldn't they do that when theres an off topic thread instead of locking them off?

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 05:29 PM

ya i guess....but heres chapter 2

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this one is pretty cool

**FACE K. POLK** · 11-09-2007, 05:46 PM

THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now?

-Dylan

SephirothKirby · 11-09-2007, 05:48 PM

^ You're my favorite mod now.

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 05:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dylan

THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now?

-Dylan

srry my computer is gay and it made 3 i didnt mean to!!

Lord Kenny · 11-09-2007, 05:51 PM

This is horrible.

-The first comic is almost unreadable. You NEED word balloons. Are you writing this with a cell phone? IDK what you were thinking with that.
-Both comics are not funny. At all. You just sprite-comic your way to a not-punch line.
-What the hell is the plot? They go from getting on a helicopter to playing tag on a beach! And where did those clones come from? A better question: Where did they go?? They did nothing and were there for no reason! It was just like they happened to be walking by!
-"IDK but whatever were on here for im no superman". What does this mean?? Thats not even a sentence! Gah!
-Did I mention its not funny?

You NEED to work harder on these. You can still save it. Try writing the script before you make the comic. Remember to spell check it, too.

***Ace Mercury*** · 11-09-2007, 05:51 PM

Based on his spelling, grammar, and overall attitude, he's probably, like, thirteen years old. He's just trying to have some fun. Some... annoying fun.

**FACE K. POLK** · 11-09-2007, 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SephirothKirby

^ You're my favorite mod now.

2007 VGF Mod of the Year, baby.

-Dylan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 06:01 PM

w/e man i am 13 and i like to write stupid stuff..................anywayz here is number 3 and dont petronize me and stuff

Valigarmander · 11-09-2007, 06:08 PM

That one... didn't make any sense at all.

I am nobody · 11-09-2007, 06:12 PM

What was that?

**FACE K. POLK** · 11-09-2007, 06:13 PM

It's like the acid trip in the movie I saw when I was on that acid trip.

-Dylan

TheEvilDM · 11-09-2007, 07:43 PM

^That was just "Fear and Loating in Las Vegas," and it made a lot of sense on that acid...

11-09-2007, 04:27 PM	#1
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	Stranded Mario World SO this is my first post and my first chapter [IMG] it looks like luigi is flipin mario off on the advance part

11-09-2007, 05:29 PM	#9
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	ya i guess....but heres chapter 2[IMG] this one is pretty cool

11-09-2007, 04:42 PM	#2
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere in the solar system of the star Sol Gender: Posts: 2,736 Thanks: 73 Thanked 77 Times in 63 Posts Points: 778.70 Bank: 10,304.03 Total Points: 11,082.73 Donate	what's with the Advance? They're off the island now so what's the next story about -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 04:47 PM	#3
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	i cant do any more unless my other 2 are deleted........my comp is gay and made 3 of the same threads

11-09-2007, 04:54 PM	#4
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere in the solar system of the star Sol Gender: Posts: 2,736 Thanks: 73 Thanked 77 Times in 63 Posts Points: 778.70 Bank: 10,304.03 Total Points: 11,082.73 Donate	Dylan's not goingto like that 3 of the same threads -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 04:55 PM	#5
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	i know!!! i didnt try to make them i want 2 deleted how do u delete them ?

11-09-2007, 04:59 PM	#6
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere in the solar system of the star Sol Gender: Posts: 2,736 Thanks: 73 Thanked 77 Times in 63 Posts Points: 778.70 Bank: 10,304.03 Total Points: 11,082.73 Donate	i don't think you can -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 05:02 PM	#7
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	ah shoot!!! cant the mods and admins delete them?!!!

11-09-2007, 05:04 PM	#8
MUSHMAN Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere in the solar system of the star Sol Gender: Posts: 2,736 Thanks: 73 Thanked 77 Times in 63 Posts Points: 778.70 Bank: 10,304.03 Total Points: 11,082.73 Donate	I think so, but if they could wouldn't they do that when theres an off topic thread instead of locking them off? -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 05:46 PM	#10
FACE K. POLK Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 5,982 Thanks: 805 Thanked 807 Times in 372 Posts Points: 34,314.65 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 34,314.66 Donate	THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now? -Dylan

11-09-2007, 05:48 PM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: **** YEAH SEAKING! Gender: Posts: 3,689 Thanks: 185 Thanked 226 Times in 142 Posts Points: 2,009.33 Bank: 80,446.58 Total Points: 82,455.91 Donate	^ You're my favorite mod now.

11-09-2007, 05:51 PM	#13
Lord Kenny Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: YES Gender: Posts: 1,968 Thanks: 216 Thanked 201 Times in 89 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 980.77 Bank: 113,767.57 Total Points: 114,748.34 Donate	This is horrible. -The first comic is almost unreadable. You NEED word balloons. Are you writing this with a cell phone? IDK what you were thinking with that. -Both comics are not funny. At all. You just sprite-comic your way to a not-punch line. -What the hell is the plot? They go from getting on a helicopter to playing tag on a beach! And where did those clones come from? A better question: Where did they go?? They did nothing and were there for no reason! It was just like they happened to be walking by! -"IDK but whatever were on here for im no superman". What does this mean?? Thats not even a sentence! Gah! -Did I mention its not funny? You NEED to work harder on these. You can still save it. Try writing the script before you make the comic. Remember to spell check it, too.

11-09-2007, 05:51 PM	#14
*Ace Mercury* Marshmallow Knight ☆ Supermod Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Southern Ontario Gender: Posts: 18,860 Thanks: 356 Thanked 1,464 Times in 767 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 93,993.30 Bank: 10,210,130.19 Total Points: 10,304,123.49 Donate	Based on his spelling, grammar, and overall attitude, he's probably, like, thirteen years old. He's just trying to have some fun. Some... annoying fun.

11-09-2007, 06:01 PM	#16
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: at my house Gender: Posts: 79 Thanks: 8 Thanked 8 Times in 2 Posts Points: 667.24 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 667.24 Donate	w/e man i am 13 and i like to write stupid stuff..................anywayz here is number 3 and dont petronize me and stuff

11-09-2007, 06:08 PM	#17
Valigarmander RADDA RADDA RADDA! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Radda, radda. Gender: Posts: 12,431 Thanks: 692 Thanked 1,069 Times in 569 Posts Points: 313.62 Bank: 128,946.39 Total Points: 129,260.01 Donate	That one... didn't make any sense at all.

11-09-2007, 06:12 PM	#18
I am nobody Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Here's a hint: There are people here. Gender: Posts: 3,000 Thanks: 105 Thanked 92 Times in 61 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 3,646.91 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,646.91 Donate	What was that?

11-09-2007, 06:13 PM	#19
FACE K. POLK Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 5,982 Thanks: 805 Thanked 807 Times in 372 Posts Points: 34,314.65 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 34,314.66 Donate	It's like the acid trip in the movie I saw when I was on that acid trip. -Dylan

11-09-2007, 07:43 PM	#20
TheEvilDM Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 462 Thanks: 12 Thanked 22 Times in 9 Posts Points: 2,929.68 Bank: 5,123.88 Total Points: 8,053.56 Donate	^That was just "Fear and Loating in Las Vegas," and it made a lot of sense on that acid...