Im a Mancubus...

Kenori · 12-06-2007, 10:33 PM

So, I was at work and had access to a few sprite sheets and decided to do these, in the vein of the Mac/PC commercials, here are the first two:

So what do you think?

**Dylan** · 12-06-2007, 11:10 PM

Not bad at all, really, but a decent background would be nice. No one's really a fan of MS Paint backgrounds.

Other than that, good job. Keep up the good work.

-Dylan

The Scatmanson · 12-06-2007, 11:57 PM

Nice. Much better and well-planned than most comics here today.

Bravo, please continue.

Kenori · 12-07-2007, 12:08 AM

Thanks, I really appreciate the kind words, unfortunately Paint is all i have at the moment, ill try to get photshop one day. Anyway here is number 3 of this "story arc" im changing the background for the next one:

**Dylan** · 12-07-2007, 12:32 AM

Actually man, I meant you should get some better backgrounds than just drawing one in MS Paint.

Still, not bad. I'd love to see more.

-Dylan

Kenori · 12-07-2007, 12:50 AM

Ah, ok thats what I thought, but with that, the only thing I could thing to use for it would be a doom background, and those are pretty pixellated, especially with the closeups, so i opted for a created background. Anyway, hopefully the next one will look a little better, i should have it up in about 15-20 minutes.

The Scatmanson · 12-07-2007, 12:53 AM

Doesn't really matter what background you use. Hell, use photographic ones for comedic effect, or even Mario backgrounds. Anything's better than a two-toned Paint background.

**Dylan** · 12-07-2007, 12:53 AM

^^ Well, your characters already look rather pixelated. That's just part of spriting, man.

Keep playing around with it; you'll get it down eventually.

-Dylan

Kenori · 12-07-2007, 01:10 AM

Ok here is number 3, new background, i may actually use the real background thing after this arc. Warning, slight profanity:

***ZeldaGirl*** · 12-07-2007, 01:17 AM

^Be careful with censors and stuff... I advise you to edit a word.

Other than that, really good work thus far.

Kenori · 12-07-2007, 01:26 AM

Did a change with my own personal censor bar.

12-06-2007, 10:33 PM	#1
Kenori Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 33 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 380.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 380.00 Donate	Im a Mancubus... So, I was at work and had access to a few sprite sheets and decided to do these, in the vein of the Mac/PC commercials, here are the first two: So what do you think?

12-07-2007, 01:10 AM	#9
Kenori Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 33 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 380.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 380.00 Donate	Ok here is number 3, new background, i may actually use the real background thing after this arc. Warning, slight profanity: Last edited by Kenori; 12-07-2007 at 01:16 AM.

12-06-2007, 11:10 PM	#2
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,280 Thanks: 951 Thanked 944 Times in 435 Posts Points: 32,834.76 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 32,834.77 Donate	Not bad at all, really, but a decent background would be nice. No one's really a fan of MS Paint backgrounds. Other than that, good job. Keep up the good work. -Dylan

12-06-2007, 11:57 PM	#3
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12-07-2007, 12:08 AM	#4
Kenori Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 33 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 380.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 380.00 Donate	Thanks, I really appreciate the kind words, unfortunately Paint is all i have at the moment, ill try to get photshop one day. Anyway here is number 3 of this "story arc" im changing the background for the next one:

12-07-2007, 12:32 AM	#5
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,280 Thanks: 951 Thanked 944 Times in 435 Posts Points: 32,834.76 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 32,834.77 Donate	Actually man, I meant you should get some better backgrounds than just drawing one in MS Paint. Still, not bad. I'd love to see more. -Dylan

12-07-2007, 12:50 AM	#6
Kenori Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 33 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 380.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 380.00 Donate	Ah, ok thats what I thought, but with that, the only thing I could thing to use for it would be a doom background, and those are pretty pixellated, especially with the closeups, so i opted for a created background. Anyway, hopefully the next one will look a little better, i should have it up in about 15-20 minutes.

12-07-2007, 12:53 AM	#7
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12-07-2007, 01:17 AM	#10
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12-07-2007, 01:26 AM	#11
Kenori Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 33 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 380.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 380.00 Donate	Did a change with my own personal censor bar.