Mario and Kirby: The Comic

Irby · 05-06-2008, 04:44 PM

Hi everyone. It's great to be back. I've brought a new comic series with me that will involve many characters. I'm not sure really what it's about yet but here it is.

I haven't sprited in a while so the first few will probably suck.

A Scatmanson · 05-06-2008, 04:56 PM

Not a big comic critic, but...
- You might want to get backgrounds of the same size.
- Red text box doesn't really look good
- Large gaps in the text box don't either
- And I know it's an intro, but it was just kinda "blah"

Irby · 05-06-2008, 05:07 PM

Ok thanks. I wasn't sure what to put for the intro. And ill fix all bubbles for later.

Irby · 05-06-2008, 06:44 PM

Sorry for double posting.
New comic.

Dr. Zero · 05-06-2008, 07:59 PM

What... was that?!

Irby · 05-06-2008, 08:02 PM

A comic.

**Dylan** · 05-06-2008, 08:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Irby

A terrible comic.

Fixed.

Seriously, the background you used is awful. It's hard to tell where the separation between the ground and the wall is. It didn't help that you blended some of the panels together. And it made no sense at all. Where's the transition between the first and second parts? I have no idea what's going on.

Irby · 05-06-2008, 08:27 PM

Can you delete the thread please. Ill just make a different comic or something.

Delete now please.

**Dylan** · 05-06-2008, 08:54 PM

I have a better idea: I'll just lock it.

05-06-2008, 04:44 PM	#1
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,003 Thanks: 344 Thanked 118 Times in 100 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 43,179.83 Bank: 17,317.96 Total Points: 60,497.79 Donate	Mario and Kirby: The Comic Hi everyone. It's great to be back. I've brought a new comic series with me that will involve many characters. I'm not sure really what it's about yet but here it is. I haven't sprited in a while so the first few will probably suck.

05-06-2008, 08:27 PM	#8
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,003 Thanks: 344 Thanked 118 Times in 100 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 43,179.83 Bank: 17,317.96 Total Points: 60,497.79 Donate	Can you delete the thread please. Ill just make a different comic or something. Delete now please. Last edited by Irby; 05-06-2008 at 08:39 PM. Reason: Stupid comic.

05-06-2008, 04:56 PM	#2
A Scatmanson REPEAT AFTER ME! IT'S A OASOFBASPOMELODY Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Scatting (Panfan) Gender: Posts: 11,498 Thanks: 516 Thanked 900 Times in 632 Posts Blog Entries: 13 Points: 971.00 Bank: 21,302.91 Total Points: 22,273.91 Donate	Not a big comic critic, but... - You might want to get backgrounds of the same size. - Red text box doesn't really look good - Large gaps in the text box don't either - And I know it's an intro, but it was just kinda "blah"

05-06-2008, 05:07 PM	#3
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,003 Thanks: 344 Thanked 118 Times in 100 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 43,179.83 Bank: 17,317.96 Total Points: 60,497.79 Donate	Ok thanks. I wasn't sure what to put for the intro. And ill fix all bubbles for later.

05-06-2008, 06:44 PM	#4
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,003 Thanks: 344 Thanked 118 Times in 100 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 43,179.83 Bank: 17,317.96 Total Points: 60,497.79 Donate	Sorry for double posting. New comic.

05-06-2008, 07:59 PM	#5
Dr. Zero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: My false memories. Gender: Posts: 2,694 Thanks: 232 Thanked 127 Times in 94 Posts Points: 7,421.31 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,421.31 Donate	What... was that?!

05-06-2008, 08:02 PM	#6
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,003 Thanks: 344 Thanked 118 Times in 100 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 43,179.83 Bank: 17,317.96 Total Points: 60,497.79 Donate	A comic.

05-06-2008, 08:54 PM	#9
Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,282 Thanks: 952 Thanked 944 Times in 435 Posts Points: 32,935.78 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 32,935.78 Donate	I have a better idea: I'll just lock it.