Mario's Diabolical Plan of Kinda Unstoppable Evil!

Random User · 06-30-2009, 07:51 AM

Alright, here's my first coimc. I tried to fix the blurriness but couldn't. Either way, it's still readable, so enjoy!

Redshirt · 06-30-2009, 08:04 AM

Save as PNG.

HippieLand · 06-30-2009, 08:06 AM

Meh. It's okay.
But I like how you made that Mario bot!

DarkZero · 06-30-2009, 08:10 AM

1. The Mario sprite in the periscope looks like it's unevenly stretched.
2. It wasn't all that humorous, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and let you build your plot more before claiming anything.
3. That building Mario's on looks too much like a Paint drawing. Add just a little detail next time.
4. The giant Mario is an extremely stretched. Maybe use some bigger sprites for it. Like that Lou Albano sheet at the Shyguy Kingdom.
5. ...Heh, a BFAA reference. Just make sure you give credit to the original spriters if you use their sprites.

As for the blurriness, did you save as a PNG? If that doesn't work, then you might want to use a different image host, like Slide.

Random User · 06-30-2009, 10:46 AM

Whattaya know? Saving my coimc as a PNG worked. Thnks

DarkZero · 06-30-2009, 10:49 AM

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGRUDER!!!

Nicely done. And the graphics are noticably sharper. But make Kamek's text a darker color.

Random User · 07-01-2009, 09:16 AM

Oh yeah; Here's that sprite of Jay when he was leaving on the plane in #2;

Gabriel · 07-02-2009, 09:16 PM

Neat. That Mario robot's pretty cool. I wonder if you'll ever put in any other giant robots of mass destruction.

Black Belt Tazy · 07-02-2009, 10:09 PM

Um, remove the white space please.

It's unsightly

Random User · 07-03-2009, 04:54 PM

^k, i'll make sure to do that next comic

Random User · 07-03-2009, 06:32 PM

Oooooo... suspense!

Gabriel · 07-03-2009, 09:09 PM

Let it be known now that Donez has a weird looking brain.

Redshirt · 07-22-2009, 10:14 PM

Mmm brains...

Gabriel · 07-22-2009, 11:25 PM

Also, you should maybe separate the panels, 'cause it was getting kinda hard to differentiate halfway through. Otherwise, good job!

Invalid Username · 07-23-2009, 09:59 AM

Yeah, use a black line or something.

06-30-2009, 07:51 AM	#1
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06-30-2009, 08:04 AM	#2
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06-30-2009, 08:06 AM	#3
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06-30-2009, 08:10 AM	#4
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Between a pair of shoes and a pair of headphones. Gender: Posts: 8,570 Thanks: 1,040 Thanked 596 Times in 426 Posts Blog Entries: 34 Points: 7,274.86 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,274.86 Donate	1. The Mario sprite in the periscope looks like it's unevenly stretched. 2. It wasn't all that humorous, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and let you build your plot more before claiming anything. 3. That building Mario's on looks too much like a Paint drawing. Add just a little detail next time. 4. The giant Mario is an extremely stretched. Maybe use some bigger sprites for it. Like that Lou Albano sheet at the Shyguy Kingdom. 5. ...Heh, a BFAA reference. Just make sure you give credit to the original spriters if you use their sprites. As for the blurriness, did you save as a PNG? If that doesn't work, then you might want to use a different image host, like Slide.

06-30-2009, 10:46 AM	#5
Random User Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Everytime I go to where I really wanna be, it`s already where I am. `CAUSE I`M ALREADY THERE!!! Gender: Posts: 995 Thanks: 130 Thanked 47 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 9,691.94 Bank: 0.25 Total Points: 9,692.19 Donate	Whattaya know? Saving my coimc as a PNG worked. Thnks

06-30-2009, 10:49 AM	#6
DarkZero Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Between a pair of shoes and a pair of headphones. Gender: Posts: 8,570 Thanks: 1,040 Thanked 596 Times in 426 Posts Blog Entries: 34 Points: 7,274.86 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,274.86 Donate	MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGRUDER!!! Nicely done. And the graphics are noticably sharper. But make Kamek's text a darker color.

07-01-2009, 09:16 AM	#7
Random User Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Everytime I go to where I really wanna be, it`s already where I am. `CAUSE I`M ALREADY THERE!!! Gender: Posts: 995 Thanks: 130 Thanked 47 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 9,691.94 Bank: 0.25 Total Points: 9,692.19 Donate	Oh yeah; Here's that sprite of Jay when he was leaving on the plane in #2;

07-02-2009, 09:16 PM	#8
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Anyone up for a little double entendre? Gender: Posts: 742 Thanks: 45 Thanked 44 Times in 33 Posts Points: 1,257.32 Bank: 25,943.80 Total Points: 27,201.12 Donate	Neat. That Mario robot's pretty cool. I wonder if you'll ever put in any other giant robots of mass destruction.

07-02-2009, 10:09 PM	#9
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07-03-2009, 04:54 PM	#10
Random User Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Everytime I go to where I really wanna be, it`s already where I am. `CAUSE I`M ALREADY THERE!!! Gender: Posts: 995 Thanks: 130 Thanked 47 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 9,691.94 Bank: 0.25 Total Points: 9,692.19 Donate	^k, i'll make sure to do that next comic

07-03-2009, 06:32 PM	#11
Random User Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Everytime I go to where I really wanna be, it`s already where I am. `CAUSE I`M ALREADY THERE!!! Gender: Posts: 995 Thanks: 130 Thanked 47 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 4 Points: 9,691.94 Bank: 0.25 Total Points: 9,692.19 Donate	Oooooo... suspense!

07-03-2009, 09:09 PM	#12
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Anyone up for a little double entendre? Gender: Posts: 742 Thanks: 45 Thanked 44 Times in 33 Posts Points: 1,257.32 Bank: 25,943.80 Total Points: 27,201.12 Donate	Let it be known now that Donez has a weird looking brain.

07-22-2009, 10:14 PM	#13
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07-22-2009, 11:25 PM	#14
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Anyone up for a little double entendre? Gender: Posts: 742 Thanks: 45 Thanked 44 Times in 33 Posts Points: 1,257.32 Bank: 25,943.80 Total Points: 27,201.12 Donate	Also, you should maybe separate the panels, 'cause it was getting kinda hard to differentiate halfway through. Otherwise, good job!

07-23-2009, 09:59 AM	#15
Invalid Username Refresh your page and try again. Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: 404 file not found Gender: Posts: 15,391 Thanks: 771 Thanked 771 Times in 587 Posts Blog Entries: 8 Points: 39,428.55 Bank: 979,072.20 Total Points: 1,018,500.75 Donate	Yeah, use a black line or something.