Preview for my new story

Black hat · 09-16-2007, 10:18 AM

Hello, all. My name is Black Hat, and I am a writer. I have searched the internet for a good Mario forum to post my story, and found this one. My story isn't exactly ready yet, but the basic plot, chapters, and characters are. This story is called, "Super Paper Mario 2: Mission - Power Orb", and it features all-new characters and eight all-new chapters.

Here's an excerpt from one of the chapters.

Bloober looked at his watch, then at their busted van. He then slapped his tentacle to his forehead in frustration. "I can't BELIEVE we don't have spare tires!" he complained. "I mean, we're FAMOUS for goodness sake!"
"Don't worry, man..." said Koopid. "I'm sure those guys'll bring back the other ones. Just hang tight..."
"Still, we don't wanna miss this gig," Big G chimed in. "I hear even people from other kindgoms'll be waiting for us!"
"Lenny, you see them up there?" asked Koopid, calling out into the sky.
"Nope, all I see is... well, not them," replied Lenny.
Lenny's eyes then perked up as he saw a small red and blue speck in the distance.
"HEY, you guys!" said Lenny, floating back down to the others. "I can see them! I can see them!"
"What? Really?" asked Koopid, shading his eyes with his hand as he looked off into the distance. Surely enough, he saw Mario and the other four approaching.
"Sweet! They're on their way!" he shouted enthusiastically.

Mario, Peach, Bowser, and Luigi returned to the B-Loops' busted van, each holding a tire. Crystal floated alongside the group as they approached the eager band members.
"Haha, yes!" rejoiced Bloober. "Sweet! We'll be out of here in no time!"
"Where do you want us to put these?" asked Luigi.
"Just lay 'em beside the Bloopwagon. Buzz is a car buff; he'll take it form here," answered Bloober.
The four then dropped the tires on the ground as Buzz came scurrying up to them. He then took a tire over to where he set his tools down near the van and used them to reattach it.
After about 15 minutes, all four tires were reattached, and the Bloopwagon was up and running again.
"Okay, guys! The Bloopwagon's ready!" called out Buzz. "Hop in!"
Everyone then quickly entered the large, colorful van. Koopid grabbed the wheel, shifted gears, then stomped on the gas! The Bloopwagon then zipped over the horizon at a surprising speed.

"Ciò non è buona!" shouted a voice that came from a creature hiding behind a rock. The creature angrily watched as the van speeded off.
"They fixed... van?!" he shouted. "This angers Ballerino! Di tutta la fortuna difettosa!"
The creature then rose off the ground on a small, floating stagelike platform and followed closely after the van.

My story should start sometime soon. I hope you are as excited about reading it as I am about writing it!

Thanks for reading!

Black hat · 09-16-2007, 10:16 PM

Looks like I'll be able to post this story sooner than I thought! Expect to see it up tomorrow.

***Cosmonautical*** · 09-18-2007, 11:38 PM

It's nice to see you've chosen our forums to post on. I might also suggest the Mario forum in specific, as this one is frequented more by fans of general art and writing.

Black hat · 09-19-2007, 09:33 AM

Oh, okay. I'll just move it there, then...

Black hat · 09-19-2007, 03:05 PM

I have a small question: How do I avoid my posts merging together due to double posting?

Rainbow Dash · 09-19-2007, 03:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by We Have to Amputate Your Face

It's nice to see you've chosen our forums to post on. I might also suggest the Mario forum in specific, as this one is frequented more by fans of general art and writing.

You seem to be forgetting the "Living Mario" and "Mario Kart: The Story" topics.

***Cosmonautical*** · 09-21-2007, 07:58 PM

I don't mind anyone's Mario stories being posted here. It could get wider exposure in both forums.

Black Hat: You can avoid double-posting by waiting a longer amount of time between posts. Or, just put a bunch of spaces between your stories, and use the edit button. There's not a lot you can do to get around it, here.

09-16-2007, 10:18 AM	#1
Black hat Newbie Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Eastern USA Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Preview for my new story Hello, all. My name is Black Hat, and I am a writer. I have searched the internet for a good Mario forum to post my story, and found this one. My story isn't exactly ready yet, but the basic plot, chapters, and characters are. This story is called, "Super Paper Mario 2: Mission - Power Orb", and it features all-new characters and eight all-new chapters. Here's an excerpt from one of the chapters. Bloober looked at his watch, then at their busted van. He then slapped his tentacle to his forehead in frustration. "I can't BELIEVE we don't have spare tires!" he complained. "I mean, we're FAMOUS for goodness sake!" "Don't worry, man..." said Koopid. "I'm sure those guys'll bring back the other ones. Just hang tight..." "Still, we don't wanna miss this gig," Big G chimed in. "I hear even people from other kindgoms'll be waiting for us!" "Lenny, you see them up there?" asked Koopid, calling out into the sky. "Nope, all I see is... well, not them," replied Lenny. Lenny's eyes then perked up as he saw a small red and blue speck in the distance. "HEY, you guys!" said Lenny, floating back down to the others. "I can see them! I can see them!" "What? Really?" asked Koopid, shading his eyes with his hand as he looked off into the distance. Surely enough, he saw Mario and the other four approaching. "Sweet! They're on their way!" he shouted enthusiastically. Mario, Peach, Bowser, and Luigi returned to the B-Loops' busted van, each holding a tire. Crystal floated alongside the group as they approached the eager band members. "Haha, yes!" rejoiced Bloober. "Sweet! We'll be out of here in no time!" "Where do you want us to put these?" asked Luigi. "Just lay 'em beside the Bloopwagon. Buzz is a car buff; he'll take it form here," answered Bloober. The four then dropped the tires on the ground as Buzz came scurrying up to them. He then took a tire over to where he set his tools down near the van and used them to reattach it. After about 15 minutes, all four tires were reattached, and the Bloopwagon was up and running again. "Okay, guys! The Bloopwagon's ready!" called out Buzz. "Hop in!" Everyone then quickly entered the large, colorful van. Koopid grabbed the wheel, shifted gears, then stomped on the gas! The Bloopwagon then zipped over the horizon at a surprising speed. "Ciò non è buona!" shouted a voice that came from a creature hiding behind a rock. The creature angrily watched as the van speeded off. "They fixed... van?!" he shouted. "This angers Ballerino! Di tutta la fortuna difettosa!" The creature then rose off the ground on a small, floating stagelike platform and followed closely after the van. My story should start sometime soon. I hope you are as excited about reading it as I am about writing it! Thanks for reading!

09-16-2007, 10:16 PM	#2
Black hat Newbie Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Eastern USA Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Looks like I'll be able to post this story sooner than I thought! Expect to see it up tomorrow.

09-18-2007, 11:38 PM	#3
*Cosmonautical* Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 28,100 Thanks: 2,151 Thanked 5,338 Times in 2,433 Posts	It's nice to see you've chosen our forums to post on. I might also suggest the Mario forum in specific, as this one is frequented more by fans of general art and writing.

09-19-2007, 09:33 AM	#4
Black hat Newbie Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Eastern USA Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Oh, okay. I'll just move it there, then...

09-19-2007, 03:05 PM	#5
Black hat Newbie Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Eastern USA Gender: Posts: 17 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	I have a small question: How do I avoid my posts merging together due to double posting?

09-21-2007, 07:58 PM	#7
*Cosmonautical* Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 28,100 Thanks: 2,151 Thanked 5,338 Times in 2,433 Posts	I don't mind anyone's Mario stories being posted here. It could get wider exposure in both forums. Black Hat: You can avoid double-posting by waiting a longer amount of time between posts. Or, just put a bunch of spaces between your stories, and use the edit button. There's not a lot you can do to get around it, here.