I make comics

Eric · 11-19-2007, 06:53 PM

I make Ericman comics
spoiler
enemys include shadow,aliens,ryan,and ???

I can type them up in the forums later and upload some pictures.

**Galefore** · 11-19-2007, 07:17 PM

Congratulations!

Are you potty trained too?

Eric · 11-19-2007, 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Galefore

Congratulations!your really good at art!!!

thanks.

**Galefore** · 11-19-2007, 07:20 PM

Wow, you countered. Most guys just get mad and obstinate, but you countered.

I congratulate you.

Eric · 11-19-2007, 07:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Galefore

CRAP.

sorry,new to this trick

Panfan · 11-19-2007, 08:08 PM

Uh... good for you.

**Galefore** · 11-19-2007, 08:35 PM

^^That was okay the first time. But don't do it again, bro.

I recommend you post one of these comics or explain when and where they will be posted, or I am going to lock this...

...With Great Vengeance.

***Cosmonautical*** · 11-19-2007, 11:54 PM

..Was this moved here or something?

Anyway, it's cool for supermods to be TOUGH ON CRIME, but I wouldn't say this topic needs locking. Thanks for the stand-in, Galefore.

kingeric: I agree with Galefore that you need to actually post something, else I'm afraid we cannot partake in the sheer excitement of your MAD COMIC SKILLZ.

To specify my preference, as well as what I'm assuming is Galefore's:
Don't post a topic about about the topic you are about to post. Just post the actual topic.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 03:35 PM

I can't scan them up because I don't have a scanner,but I'll type the stories.

Episode #1 attack the shadows

1.One day,Ericman was walking when he was sucked into a black hole."HOLY SH......."2..he was falling and a bunch of dark hands reached out for him.3.BOOM!!!!!!4."That FREAKIN' kills!"said Eric.5.There was a dark castle in the distance."where the hell am I?6.well better start walking".7-9.he lifted his foot and put it down and a dark hand grabbed his leg.10.he blacked out.11.he woke up in a dungeon hanging from chains.11.He saw a person that looked like him only pitch black with yellow eyes.12."who the hell are you!?!".13."I'm shadow and this is my palace"shadow said.15."let me go now dammit!"said Eric."no."shadow said.16-19Eric closed his eyes and when he opened them in his pupels place was ember.20-21.He broke the chains and charged up an energy ball.22.shadow charged up a shadow ball.23-28.when the 2 colided it made a tare in the universe thus taking Eric to his own demension.

THE END

what do you think?

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 03:38 PM

Well, it depends.

Do you want the short version or the long version? The long version is a lot of effort on my part, and I don't want to write it if you're going to ignore it.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 03:43 PM

pretend it's in comic book form

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 03:46 PM

If you're going to be in comic book form, I suggest writing it in script format. You might do it a little something like this.

PANEL 1

Ericman (the hero of our story) is walking along one day against a fairly generic background, maybe just plain white space. Nothing indicative of what's going to happen. Maybe he's whistling to himself.

Panel 2

Cue a black hole popping up out of nowhere.

Eric: WHAT THE CRAP

Panel 3

Ericman is sucked into the black hole.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH-

Panel 4

Ericman is falling down a long tube lines with black hands that are reaching for him - this frame should be very visually full, an assault on the senses to contrast with the first three panels.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH-

You could keep going on like this.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 03:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wyborn

If you're going to be in comic book form, I suggest writing it in script format. You might do it a little something like this.

PANEL 1

Ericman (the hero of our story) is walking along one day against a fairly generic background, maybe just plain white space. Nothing indicative of what's going to happen. Maybe he's whistling to himself.

Panel 2

Cue a black hole popping up out of nowhere.

Eric: WHAT THE CRAP

Panel 3

Ericman is sucked into the black hole.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH-

Panel 4

Ericman is falling down a long tube lines with black hands that are reaching for him - this frame should be very visually full, an assault on the senses to contrast with the first three panels.

Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH-

You could keep going on like this.

funny.I don't like putting a narrater
in my comics

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 03:52 PM

Well, see, that's not a narrator. That's you, describing what's going on in the panels, because we aren't there to see it. That part is basically you saying what the panel will look like.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 03:54 PM

very true.I was going to add the swearing but if the kids are watching I might get banned.

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 03:55 PM

Go ahead. Any swear words that are too harsh are automatically filtered out anyway. Just use your better judgement.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 03:56 PM

oh.in that case I'll edit.

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 04:04 PM

Hm. You certainly didn't make it worse, but if you really want to improve it then write it out in panel form kind of like I did. Take the actual comics and describe, separately, what's in each panel.

Eric · 11-20-2007, 04:12 PM

just did.

Wyborn · 11-20-2007, 04:21 PM

I'll separate it for you so it's easier to read.

11-20-2007, 03:35 PM	#9
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	I can't scan them up because I don't have a scanner,but I'll type the stories. Episode #1 attack the shadows 1.One day,Ericman was walking when he was sucked into a black hole."HOLY SH......."2..he was falling and a bunch of dark hands reached out for him.3.BOOM!!!!!!4."That FREAKIN' kills!"said Eric.5.There was a dark castle in the distance."where the hell am I?6.well better start walking".7-9.he lifted his foot and put it down and a dark hand grabbed his leg.10.he blacked out.11.he woke up in a dungeon hanging from chains.11.He saw a person that looked like him only pitch black with yellow eyes.12."who the hell are you!?!".13."I'm shadow and this is my palace"shadow said.15."let me go now dammit!"said Eric."no."shadow said.16-19Eric closed his eyes and when he opened them in his pupels place was ember.20-21.He broke the chains and charged up an energy ball.22.shadow charged up a shadow ball.23-28.when the 2 colided it made a tare in the universe thus taking Eric to his own demension. THE END what do you think? Last edited by Eric; 11-20-2007 at 04:24 PM.

11-19-2007, 06:53 PM	#1
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	I make comics I make Ericman comics spoiler enemys include shadow,aliens,ryan,and ??? I can type them up in the forums later and upload some pictures.

11-19-2007, 07:17 PM	#2
Galefore EXPLOSION GOD OF MUSIC Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Some studio somewhere Gender: Posts: 8,275 Thanks: 1,361 Thanked 826 Times in 535 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Congratulations! Are you potty trained too?

11-19-2007, 07:20 PM	#4
Galefore EXPLOSION GOD OF MUSIC Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Some studio somewhere Gender: Posts: 8,275 Thanks: 1,361 Thanked 826 Times in 535 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Wow, you countered. Most guys just get mad and obstinate, but you countered. I congratulate you.

11-19-2007, 08:08 PM	#6
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,805 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,247 Times in 1,337 Posts Blog Entries: 15	Uh... good for you.

11-19-2007, 08:35 PM	#7
Galefore EXPLOSION GOD OF MUSIC Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Some studio somewhere Gender: Posts: 8,275 Thanks: 1,361 Thanked 826 Times in 535 Posts Blog Entries: 5	^^That was okay the first time. But don't do it again, bro. I recommend you post one of these comics or explain when and where they will be posted, or I am going to lock this... ...With Great Vengeance.

11-19-2007, 11:54 PM	#8
*Cosmonautical* Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 28,100 Thanks: 2,151 Thanked 5,338 Times in 2,433 Posts	..Was this moved here or something? Anyway, it's cool for supermods to be TOUGH ON CRIME, but I wouldn't say this topic needs locking. Thanks for the stand-in, Galefore. kingeric: I agree with Galefore that you need to actually post something, else I'm afraid we cannot partake in the sheer excitement of your MAD COMIC SKILLZ. To specify my preference, as well as what I'm assuming is Galefore's: Don't post a topic about about the topic you are about to post. Just post the actual topic.

11-20-2007, 03:38 PM	#10
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	Well, it depends. Do you want the short version or the long version? The long version is a lot of effort on my part, and I don't want to write it if you're going to ignore it.

11-20-2007, 03:43 PM	#11
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	pretend it's in comic book form

11-20-2007, 03:46 PM	#12
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	If you're going to be in comic book form, I suggest writing it in script format. You might do it a little something like this. PANEL 1 Ericman (the hero of our story) is walking along one day against a fairly generic background, maybe just plain white space. Nothing indicative of what's going to happen. Maybe he's whistling to himself. Panel 2 Cue a black hole popping up out of nowhere. Eric: WHAT THE CRAP Panel 3 Ericman is sucked into the black hole. Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH- Panel 4 Ericman is falling down a long tube lines with black hands that are reaching for him - this frame should be very visually full, an assault on the senses to contrast with the first three panels. Eric: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH- You could keep going on like this.

11-20-2007, 03:52 PM	#14
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	Well, see, that's not a narrator. That's you, describing what's going on in the panels, because we aren't there to see it. That part is basically you saying what the panel will look like.

11-20-2007, 03:54 PM	#15
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	very true.I was going to add the swearing but if the kids are watching I might get banned.

11-20-2007, 03:55 PM	#16
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	Go ahead. Any swear words that are too harsh are automatically filtered out anyway. Just use your better judgement.

11-20-2007, 03:56 PM	#17
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	oh.in that case I'll edit.

11-20-2007, 04:04 PM	#18
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	Hm. You certainly didn't make it worse, but if you really want to improve it then write it out in panel form kind of like I did. Take the actual comics and describe, separately, what's in each panel.

11-20-2007, 04:12 PM	#19
Eric Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Up your arse and around the corner. Gender: Posts: 1,343 Thanks: 236 Thanked 65 Times in 51 Posts	just did.

11-20-2007, 04:21 PM	#20
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	I'll separate it for you so it's easier to read.