Tales of Ani

PONIES · 12-17-2009, 06:25 PM

Part - 1

“Man, I really wish I had something to do.” I had no clue that this would be the final normal conversation I would ever have, “Two weeks off from school and nothing to do with it.” “Don’t feel so bad Jake, at least I’m not going anywhere.” “I guess your right”, I said, “but Jeff, Jesse, Kyle, and even Sean are going places over winter break.” The bell rang and the class sprinted out of the room as if they had escaped from prison, leaving Me, David, and Mr. Roberts in the classroom alone.
“So, you kids doing anything exciting over the break?” “No”, I said, “nothing interesting ever happens to me.” “I have no plans either” says David. “Well, that’s awfully disappointing, isn’t it?” “Meh, not really”, the truth is that I was really getting depressed at how boring my life was.
As we left for home, I said my good-byes to everyone since I walk to school I try to hurry when it’s cold outside, but today, as I was about half-way home I thought I heard a noise. I played it off as nothing, then I heard it again, but this time I recognized words, it sounded like “so C-c-cold, I Immediately tried to locate the source and lend some help. What I found was amazing, In front of me was something I had never seen before, but before I could get lost in amazement it realized it was unconscious, I quickly rushed home with it in my backpack so that no one would see. When I got home, I rapped a blanket around its body, after that, I spent my time trying to identify the creature. I eventually gave up and started watching TV, when she, as I would soon find out, woke up.
“Wha-, where am I? *gasps* Oh no!” “Please Pekoponian! Please don’t hurt me, I mean no harm.” “Don’t worry, I’m not going to hurt you, I’m friendly. But what do you mean Pekoponian? I’m a human, and more importantly, who are you?” “I am Anini from planet Keron, I came here to pekopon for an adventure, but didn’t pick the best time of year, did I?” “Yeah, so, judging from the light pink body and sky blue cap, you are a girl correct?” “Yes sir!” as I was about to ask another question, my phone rang, I answered it to see if it was important. “Jake? Can I come over? I need to give you something.” “Sure”, I said. After I hung up I realized that David didn’t know about Anini. “Someone is coming over soon; you might want to stay in the shadows while they’re here. I don’t think other people will react the same way as I did if they see you.” “OK”, she said, “as long as you don’t put me back outside, I don’t care.”
Several minutes later, David arrived. “Uhm, Jake? I found this on the ground near the bus stop; I believe this is your iPhone.” “Oh! Thank you so much, it must have fallen out of my pocket on my way home!” "I heard Jeff is giving away Ice cream down at DQ, you commin’?” I looked back at the house, “sure, why not.” As soon as we got around the corner, we heard a loud scream.

thoughts? comments?

Redshirt · 12-17-2009, 06:33 PM

As good start to a story as any.

More description of the "thing" you found would be it's nice though, size, shape, how many heads it has ect... not too detailed but not everyone knows what this is.

PONIES · 12-17-2009, 07:31 PM

* More details await you in part 2...

12-17-2009, 06:25 PM	#1
PONIES Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Griffon village Gender: Posts: 2,508 Thanks: 680 Thanked 54 Times in 45 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Tales of Ani Part - 1 “Man, I really wish I had something to do.” I had no clue that this would be the final normal conversation I would ever have, “Two weeks off from school and nothing to do with it.” “Don’t feel so bad Jake, at least I’m not going anywhere.” “I guess your right”, I said, “but Jeff, Jesse, Kyle, and even Sean are going places over winter break.” The bell rang and the class sprinted out of the room as if they had escaped from prison, leaving Me, David, and Mr. Roberts in the classroom alone. “So, you kids doing anything exciting over the break?” “No”, I said, “nothing interesting ever happens to me.” “I have no plans either” says David. “Well, that’s awfully disappointing, isn’t it?” “Meh, not really”, the truth is that I was really getting depressed at how boring my life was. As we left for home, I said my good-byes to everyone since I walk to school I try to hurry when it’s cold outside, but today, as I was about half-way home I thought I heard a noise. I played it off as nothing, then I heard it again, but this time I recognized words, it sounded like “so C-c-cold, I Immediately tried to locate the source and lend some help. What I found was amazing, In front of me was something I had never seen before, but before I could get lost in amazement it realized it was unconscious, I quickly rushed home with it in my backpack so that no one would see. When I got home, I rapped a blanket around its body, after that, I spent my time trying to identify the creature. I eventually gave up and started watching TV, when she, as I would soon find out, woke up. “Wha-, where am I? gasps Oh no!” “Please Pekoponian! Please don’t hurt me, I mean no harm.” “Don’t worry, I’m not going to hurt you, I’m friendly. But what do you mean Pekoponian? I’m a human, and more importantly, who are you?” “I am Anini from planet Keron, I came here to pekopon for an adventure, but didn’t pick the best time of year, did I?” “Yeah, so, judging from the light pink body and sky blue cap, you are a girl correct?” “Yes sir!” as I was about to ask another question, my phone rang, I answered it to see if it was important. “Jake? Can I come over? I need to give you something.” “Sure”, I said. After I hung up I realized that David didn’t know about Anini. “Someone is coming over soon; you might want to stay in the shadows while they’re here. I don’t think other people will react the same way as I did if they see you.” “OK”, she said, “as long as you don’t put me back outside, I don’t care.” Several minutes later, David arrived. “Uhm, Jake? I found this on the ground near the bus stop; I believe this is your iPhone.” “Oh! Thank you so much, it must have fallen out of my pocket on my way home!” "I heard Jeff is giving away Ice cream down at DQ, you commin’?” I looked back at the house, “sure, why not.” As soon as we got around the corner, we heard a loud scream. thoughts? comments?

12-17-2009, 06:33 PM	#2
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,698 Thanks: 703 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	As good start to a story as any. More description of the "thing" you found would be it's nice though, size, shape, how many heads it has ect... not too detailed but not everyone knows what this is. Last edited by Redshirt; 04-19-2012 at 07:12 PM.

12-17-2009, 07:31 PM	#3
PONIES Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Griffon village Gender: Posts: 2,508 Thanks: 680 Thanked 54 Times in 45 Posts Blog Entries: 9	* More details await you in part 2...