Defend Your Castle Journal: Entry 1

vinjhup · 06-28-2010, 05:27 PM

I was playing Defend Your Castle when I wondered what it would be like to be one of those stick figures trying to get in. This is what I thought of.

Day One 6:28 am
My name is Lieutenant Jonathan Hansford. I am currently the captain of the 16th Batallion of the United Stickfigure Army. Our mission is to set out at Day 10 of this battle to try and infiltrate the enemy stronghold. My superiors have told me nothing about our foe, but they've assured me that it is as strong as one hundred of our best men. I am not intimidated. It destroyed my home and killed my family. Poor Anna, poor Joseph. They never stood a chance. Tomorrow will be the one-year anniversary of when they died. Oh, the 1st Batallion has returned. I will be back with mroe news later.

12:45 pm
Terrible news. Of the fifty men that they sent out, only ten remain. The 1st Batallion doesn't want to talk about what happened but, in due time, they will. They keep saying the same thing, "Please don't click me." I don't know what this means, but it must be important. I swear, when my batallion is sent out. We will surely slay this almost unbeatable foe. This is all I can write for now, i volunteered to heal the wounded. I will write more tomorrow.

***Cosmonautical*** · 06-29-2010, 10:32 AM

MAY 12TH, 1833: MARY DIED OF TYPHOID FEVER

vinjhup · 06-29-2010, 02:07 PM

lol...but seriously, no Oregon Trail references. I'd really appreciate opinions.

***Cosmonautical*** · 06-30-2010, 12:48 AM

Too late for that.

Well, not bad overall. I didn't get bored through reading it, although the entries are incredibly short. I like the diary-entry style. I'd recommend using spell-check, btw. Or just use Firefox - it's built in. It's even not totally wrong sometimes.

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06-28-2010, 05:27 PM	#1
vinjhup Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: USA Gender: Posts: 29 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Defend Your Castle Journal: Entry 1 I was playing Defend Your Castle when I wondered what it would be like to be one of those stick figures trying to get in. This is what I thought of. Day One 6:28 am My name is Lieutenant Jonathan Hansford. I am currently the captain of the 16th Batallion of the United Stickfigure Army. Our mission is to set out at Day 10 of this battle to try and infiltrate the enemy stronghold. My superiors have told me nothing about our foe, but they've assured me that it is as strong as one hundred of our best men. I am not intimidated. It destroyed my home and killed my family. Poor Anna, poor Joseph. They never stood a chance. Tomorrow will be the one-year anniversary of when they died. Oh, the 1st Batallion has returned. I will be back with mroe news later. 12:45 pm Terrible news. Of the fifty men that they sent out, only ten remain. The 1st Batallion doesn't want to talk about what happened but, in due time, they will. They keep saying the same thing, "Please don't click me." I don't know what this means, but it must be important. I swear, when my batallion is sent out. We will surely slay this almost unbeatable foe. This is all I can write for now, i volunteered to heal the wounded. I will write more tomorrow.

06-30-2010, 12:48 AM	#4
*Cosmonautical* Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 28,100 Thanks: 2,151 Thanked 5,338 Times in 2,433 Posts	Too late for that. Well, not bad overall. I didn't get bored through reading it, although the entries are incredibly short. I like the diary-entry style. I'd recommend using spell-check, btw. Or just use Firefox - it's built in. It's even not totally wrong sometimes. Last edited by Cosmonautical; 06-30-2010 at 12:56 AM.

06-29-2010, 10:32 AM	#2
*Cosmonautical* Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: I rub my tilde all over your asterisk Gender: Posts: 28,100 Thanks: 2,151 Thanked 5,338 Times in 2,433 Posts	MAY 12TH, 1833: MARY DIED OF TYPHOID FEVER

06-29-2010, 02:07 PM	#3
vinjhup Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: USA Gender: Posts: 29 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	lol...but seriously, no Oregon Trail references. I'd really appreciate opinions.