the bar

1-up Salesman · 05-17-2008, 11:06 PM

this is a story that takes place in a bar that my character..er..(hold on let me think)Erke owns. members will post where their characters come in and discuss with the other characters. it may turn into a bar fight, but let's not do that right at the beginning.ok. here goes:

rael and rilan walked into their uncle erke's bar. rael immediately sat down, tired from his gunjin match that he'd just fought.
"well hello, rael!you too, rilan. what can i get you?" said erke cleaning a mug.

"...oh, thanks.just get me a root beer" said rael.(i don't feel like making him drunken.) "anything for you, rilan?" said erke. " a glass of wine, please."

rilan leaned over towards rael."hey, rael. you okay? you don't look good."
"ugh... i barely made it alive out of that battle.metal man almost had me beat. and all those metal body parts! it's so shocking..and his strength..it was inhuman!" said rael.

"wait, you made it out alive against metal man?! he eats people like me and you for breakfast! just surviving against him would give you a great reputation! that's amazing that you survived!"

erke walked up to them with two glasses."here you go." "thank you."

Vapor · 05-18-2008, 10:04 AM

Something like this already exists. This topic is unnecessary.

1-up Salesman · 05-18-2008, 10:10 AM

well i'm still doing it. i looked at the other thing and it didn't look any good.

Vapor · 05-18-2008, 10:36 AM

But nobody will really care about this topic if there's another one already existing. And I don't see how that one's bad; it really has more interesting setting and writing than this one.

1-up Salesman · 05-18-2008, 10:41 AM

rael and rilan were still at the bar."it's-a-me!"
then coming through the door was super luigi.(luigi turned superhero.)
rael stared at him."wait, is that, luigi?!" whispered rael.
"um..you haven't heard?whenever luigi eats the supershroom he turns into superluigi," said rilan. "but..why not mario?" said rael.
"well i heard that luigi stole all the supershrooms for himself."

"well, hello, er...whoever you are, what can i get you?" said erke.
"you don't know who i am?!?!don't you read the newspaper?do you watch the news?! i'm-a-super luigi, hero of the mushroom kingdom! how can you not know who i am?!" "well, i guess that's because you aren't mario," said erke.
"aargh!!why does my brother get all the fame?!?!aaahhh!!"
"er..well can i get you anything?"
"a bottle of beer,please."
"here you go, er...whoever you are."
"raaagggrhhrhrhrhfhrrhr!!!!" super luigi broke the beer bottle on erke's head.

05-17-2008, 11:06 PM	#1
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	the bar this is a story that takes place in a bar that my character..er..(hold on let me think)Erke owns. members will post where their characters come in and discuss with the other characters. it may turn into a bar fight, but let's not do that right at the beginning.ok. here goes: rael and rilan walked into their uncle erke's bar. rael immediately sat down, tired from his gunjin match that he'd just fought. "well hello, rael!you too, rilan. what can i get you?" said erke cleaning a mug. "...oh, thanks.just get me a root beer" said rael.(i don't feel like making him drunken.) "anything for you, rilan?" said erke. " a glass of wine, please." rilan leaned over towards rael."hey, rael. you okay? you don't look good." "ugh... i barely made it alive out of that battle.metal man almost had me beat. and all those metal body parts! it's so shocking..and his strength..it was inhuman!" said rael. "wait, you made it out alive against metal man?! he eats people like me and you for breakfast! just surviving against him would give you a great reputation! that's amazing that you survived!" erke walked up to them with two glasses."here you go." "thank you."

05-18-2008, 10:04 AM	#2
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: WHERE IT'S AT Gender: Posts: 5,211 Thanks: 314 Thanked 413 Times in 249 Posts	Something like this already exists. This topic is unnecessary.

05-18-2008, 10:10 AM	#3
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	well i'm still doing it. i looked at the other thing and it didn't look any good.

05-18-2008, 10:36 AM	#4
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: WHERE IT'S AT Gender: Posts: 5,211 Thanks: 314 Thanked 413 Times in 249 Posts	But nobody will really care about this topic if there's another one already existing. And I don't see how that one's bad; it really has more interesting setting and writing than this one.

05-18-2008, 10:41 AM	#5
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	rael and rilan were still at the bar."it's-a-me!" then coming through the door was super luigi.(luigi turned superhero.) rael stared at him."wait, is that, luigi?!" whispered rael. "um..you haven't heard?whenever luigi eats the supershroom he turns into superluigi," said rilan. "but..why not mario?" said rael. "well i heard that luigi stole all the supershrooms for himself." "well, hello, er...whoever you are, what can i get you?" said erke. "you don't know who i am?!?!don't you read the newspaper?do you watch the news?! i'm-a-super luigi, hero of the mushroom kingdom! how can you not know who i am?!" "well, i guess that's because you aren't mario," said erke. "aargh!!why does my brother get all the fame?!?!aaahhh!!" "er..well can i get you anything?" "a bottle of beer,please." "here you go, er...whoever you are." "raaagggrhhrhrhrhfhrrhr!!!!" super luigi broke the beer bottle on erke's head.