conclusion to 1-up's battle with vapor

1-up Salesman · 05-23-2008, 03:22 PM

The man came out of the portal he had just made. He layed Rael down on the ground. The man stood up completely silent. "You were lucky you survived, boy." The man had brought Rael to his own house.

The man turned to leave.

Rael's eyes slowly opened. The first thing he saw was the man.
"Who..are you?" The man turned around."Why must you need to know?" he said. Rael turned his head toward his arms and found that the man had bandaged him. "You.. healed me..?" The man started to go again.
"No, wait. Who are you?"
The man turned. "If you must know, it is Kanen." The man left.
Rael rose to follow, but he could find the man nowhere.

Seeking Attention · 05-23-2008, 03:28 PM

Did you really need to add a "conclusion" battle? I thought Galefore said not to flood the Gunjin.

1-up Salesman · 05-23-2008, 03:32 PM

sorry, it was just so I could introduce my new character. And so the end of my fight with vapor would almost make sense.

Vapor · 05-23-2008, 03:43 PM

Yeah, you don't need to make a "conclusion topic" for a battle. Or a topic for introducing a new character.

And I didn't really need that ending to make sense--nor did Zarjav, being a shaman...made of mercury nonetheless.

So for future reference, don't bother with topics like this.

05-23-2008, 03:22 PM	#1
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	conclusion to 1-up's battle with vapor The man came out of the portal he had just made. He layed Rael down on the ground. The man stood up completely silent. "You were lucky you survived, boy." The man had brought Rael to his own house. The man turned to leave. Rael's eyes slowly opened. The first thing he saw was the man. "Who..are you?" The man turned around."Why must you need to know?" he said. Rael turned his head toward his arms and found that the man had bandaged him. "You.. healed me..?" The man started to go again. "No, wait. Who are you?" The man turned. "If you must know, it is Kanen." The man left. Rael rose to follow, but he could find the man nowhere.

05-23-2008, 03:28 PM	#2
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Did you really need to add a "conclusion" battle? I thought Galefore said not to flood the Gunjin.

05-23-2008, 03:32 PM	#3
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	sorry, it was just so I could introduce my new character. And so the end of my fight with vapor would almost make sense.

05-23-2008, 03:43 PM	#4
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: WHERE IT'S AT Gender: Posts: 5,211 Thanks: 314 Thanked 413 Times in 249 Posts	Yeah, you don't need to make a "conclusion topic" for a battle. Or a topic for introducing a new character. And I didn't really need that ending to make sense--nor did Zarjav, being a shaman...made of mercury nonetheless. So for future reference, don't bother with topics like this.