1-up's training battle with Irby

1-up salesman · 05-27-2008, 03:26 PM

I'll be my character Kanen.

standard rules
battlefield: Dark World

Kanen appeared in a flash of light in a muddy swamp. He looked around, to see that he was alone. He kept walking along, expecting to find his opponent.
An arm reached up grabbing his leg. Kanen looked down to see the muck covered arm tugging at him.

"Disgusting vermin." Kanen pointed his finger at the creature. A bright beam shot out, burning away the arm. Disgusted at the slime and muck, the warrior walked away.

In the shadows, stared three sets of green, glowing eyes. Three wolves jumped out, howling. Kanen stepped forward, a gold sword appearing in his hand. One wolf leapt forward, with its claws pointing straight at Kanen's face.

Kanen slashed, killing two of the wolves. The next leapt forward, and was then stabbed through the chest.

Kanen threw his sword down in frustration. "You said that you would be here, challenger. Now come forth!"

Vapor · 05-27-2008, 03:34 PM

"Dark World"? what is "Dark World"? There is not a very in-depth description of "Dark World", except that it's a swamp containing muck and monsters. The size, atmosphere, amount of land even, are not covered.

And the sword and "bright beam" aren't covered in the bio. ...actually, hardly anything is covered in the bio. You just said he's a dragon/vampire/werewolf/elf. We have no idea what that looks like or what his abilities are specifically. In other words, this doesn't really make much sense so far.

1-up salesman · 05-27-2008, 03:59 PM

Look it up in the "book of battlefields" topic. And I said that the mixes of the species led to giving him new powers.

Vapor · 05-27-2008, 04:08 PM

Ah, alright--but it's much better practice to describe the battlefield in the battle topic itself. People won't expect something from the Book of Battlefields unless you say it is; otherwise there's confusion.

many of the "New powers" as you put it in the bio aren't really specified in the description, with the exception of a few.

But i'm gonna leave now, and let Irby do the rest.

1-up salesman · 05-27-2008, 04:15 PM

Thanks

Irby · 05-28-2008, 06:56 PM

"I am here..." a voice said. Kanen didn't know where the voice was coming from. Out of the bushes, a cloaked figure walked out to face Kanen.

"You have made a grave mistake in coming here, the darkness will consume you in the end!" Irby yelled. He threw his bloodstained sword into the murky waters. A twister appeared and Irby was nowhere to be seen.

"Where are you?!" Kanen yelled, he was even more angry then before. Irby returned wearing knight armour. Created by his pyro techniques.

"Now I am ready to defeat you." Irby picked his sword up and charged at Kanen. Irby slashed Kanen across the face, then proceeded to stab him in the leg. Kanen fell like a rag doll into the swampy waters.

1-up salesman · 05-28-2008, 07:12 PM

One minute passed. Irby stared at the waters, expecting for his opponent to return. "Ah, such a waste wasting energy on this weakling." Irby turned to leave. "Do not leave yet, vermin. There is still blood to be seen."
Irby turned around and saw Kanen shining.

While underwater, Kanen had charged up his energy and upgraded his strength and powers.

Kanen flew forward, ramming his elbow into Irby's chest with great strength and force, stronger than it would of been before.
Irby was sent flying through trees, breaking them in two the second his body touched them.
Kanen walked toward where Irby's body had went, avoiding the falling cracked trees.
"You'll pay for that, fool," said Irby, wiping away the blood from his lips.

Irby ran forward, and thrust his fist into Kanen's chest. Kanen leaned over in pain. "Urgh...." Kanen rose, and grabbed Irby by the neck. Irby gasped for air.

Kanen threw his arm upward, and released grip. Irby went flying up through the air. Kanen stepped to the side as Irby slammed with a loud *snap!* into the hard, rocky ground. "You weak,foolish idiot of a warrior," he said with a look of disgust.

Kanen stomped his foot onto Irby's back, and kept it there, pushing down against his spine.

Irby · 05-28-2008, 07:15 PM

^Good except Irby couldnt wipe any blood away seeing as he is wearing armour...

1-up salesman · 05-28-2008, 10:23 PM

oh, yeah. well, let's just say there was blood on his lips under his helmet. now you post what happens next.

Irby began to cry out. Kanen pushed down harder.

Irby struggled, and broke free. Breathing hard, he backed away.
"And now, for the beginning of your death," said Kanen.

A bright energy orb appeared between Kanen's hands, and grew larger by the minute. Kanen kept charging it up, putting much of his energy into this blast. He continued charging.
Irby was to tired and beaten to attack. "I've...got to..." he said, breathing hard. "Your time has come," said Kanen, in an apoctalyptic voice.

Irby struggled, walking forward, almost falling over every step. He was right in front of his enemy. In pain, he lifted up his sword, and tried to bring it down on Kanen."And now, you DIE!" Kanen released the energy blast, making an extremely loud noise, ringing in his ears. Kanen couldn't see what had now become of Irby, for now everything was too bright because of the light from the blast.

Kanen walked, feeling crushed objects beneath his feet. The attack had done more than just hurt or he hoped kill Irby, it had destroyed almost
Everything.

All that was left was the torn apart ground,shards of rock, and the blood red sky. All the trees, all the rocks, all the water, the creatures, gone.

But it did not matter to Kanen. All that mattered was that Irby had to be dead. He had basicly beaten the life out of him, with just his fists.
He never even had to use a weapon.

Deep, deep, down, there was a small thought that Irby had survived.
But Kanen was almost completely sure his opponent was dead.
Kanen walked along the now wasteland, slightly expecting his opponent to come out of nowhere and attack him. He opened up a portal, and was almost through it.
__________________________________________________ _______________
alright Irby, you decide whether your character died or not, but remember all those attacks, you have to be realistic.

The Joker · 05-29-2008, 01:27 PM

1-up salesman · 05-29-2008, 04:47 PM

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05-27-2008, 03:26 PM	#1
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05-27-2008, 03:34 PM	#2
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: She with a head of crimson flame and the heart of a decaying star shall lead the madman to paradise Gender: Posts: 3,342 Thanks: 104 Thanked 139 Times in 95 Posts Points: 3,170.77 Bank: 34,830.11 Total Points: 38,000.88 Donate	Maybe it's not my place to say but.. "Dark World"? what is "Dark World"? There is not a very in-depth description of "Dark World", except that it's a swamp containing muck and monsters. The size, atmosphere, amount of land even, are not covered. And the sword and "bright beam" aren't covered in the bio. ...actually, hardly anything is covered in the bio. You just said he's a dragon/vampire/werewolf/elf. We have no idea what that looks like or what his abilities are specifically. In other words, this doesn't really make much sense so far.

05-28-2008, 10:23 PM	#9
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I'm sitting in the corner ashamed. Gender: Posts: 1,472 Thanks: 417 Thanked 46 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 4,941.40 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 4,941.41 Donate	oh, yeah. well, let's just say there was blood on his lips under his helmet. now you post what happens next. Irby began to cry out. Kanen pushed down harder. Irby struggled, and broke free. Breathing hard, he backed away. "And now, for the beginning of your death," said Kanen. A bright energy orb appeared between Kanen's hands, and grew larger by the minute. Kanen kept charging it up, putting much of his energy into this blast. He continued charging. Irby was to tired and beaten to attack. "I've...got to..." he said, breathing hard. "Your time has come," said Kanen, in an apoctalyptic voice. Irby struggled, walking forward, almost falling over every step. He was right in front of his enemy. In pain, he lifted up his sword, and tried to bring it down on Kanen."And now, you DIE!" Kanen released the energy blast, making an extremely loud noise, ringing in his ears. Kanen couldn't see what had now become of Irby, for now everything was too bright because of the light from the blast. Kanen walked, feeling crushed objects beneath his feet. The attack had done more than just hurt or he hoped kill Irby, it had destroyed almost Everything. All that was left was the torn apart ground,shards of rock, and the blood red sky. All the trees, all the rocks, all the water, the creatures, gone. But it did not matter to Kanen. All that mattered was that Irby had to be dead. He had basicly beaten the life out of him, with just his fists. He never even had to use a weapon. Deep, deep, down, there was a small thought that Irby had survived. But Kanen was almost completely sure his opponent was dead. Kanen walked along the now wasteland, slightly expecting his opponent to come out of nowhere and attack him. He opened up a portal, and was almost through it. __________________________________________________ _______________ alright Irby, you decide whether your character died or not, but remember all those attacks, you have to be realistic. Last edited by 1-up salesman; 05-28-2008 at 10:23 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

05-29-2008, 01:27 PM	#10
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05-27-2008, 03:59 PM	#3
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I'm sitting in the corner ashamed. Gender: Posts: 1,472 Thanks: 417 Thanked 46 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 4,941.40 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 4,941.41 Donate	Look it up in the "book of battlefields" topic. And I said that the mixes of the species led to giving him new powers.

05-27-2008, 04:08 PM	#4
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: She with a head of crimson flame and the heart of a decaying star shall lead the madman to paradise Gender: Posts: 3,342 Thanks: 104 Thanked 139 Times in 95 Posts Points: 3,170.77 Bank: 34,830.11 Total Points: 38,000.88 Donate	Ah, alright--but it's much better practice to describe the battlefield in the battle topic itself. People won't expect something from the Book of Battlefields unless you say it is; otherwise there's confusion. many of the "New powers" as you put it in the bio aren't really specified in the description, with the exception of a few. But i'm gonna leave now, and let Irby do the rest.

05-27-2008, 04:15 PM	#5
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05-28-2008, 06:56 PM	#6
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,015 Thanks: 344 Thanked 122 Times in 103 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 44,257.55 Bank: 19,502.83 Total Points: 63,760.38 Donate	"I am here..." a voice said. Kanen didn't know where the voice was coming from. Out of the bushes, a cloaked figure walked out to face Kanen. "You have made a grave mistake in coming here, the darkness will consume you in the end!" Irby yelled. He threw his bloodstained sword into the murky waters. A twister appeared and Irby was nowhere to be seen. "Where are you?!" Kanen yelled, he was even more angry then before. Irby returned wearing knight armour. Created by his pyro techniques. "Now I am ready to defeat you." Irby picked his sword up and charged at Kanen. Irby slashed Kanen across the face, then proceeded to stab him in the leg. Kanen fell like a rag doll into the swampy waters.

05-28-2008, 07:12 PM	#7
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I'm sitting in the corner ashamed. Gender: Posts: 1,472 Thanks: 417 Thanked 46 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 4,941.40 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 4,941.41 Donate	One minute passed. Irby stared at the waters, expecting for his opponent to return. "Ah, such a waste wasting energy on this weakling." Irby turned to leave. "Do not leave yet, vermin. There is still blood to be seen." Irby turned around and saw Kanen shining. While underwater, Kanen had charged up his energy and upgraded his strength and powers. Kanen flew forward, ramming his elbow into Irby's chest with great strength and force, stronger than it would of been before. Irby was sent flying through trees, breaking them in two the second his body touched them. Kanen walked toward where Irby's body had went, avoiding the falling cracked trees. "You'll pay for that, fool," said Irby, wiping away the blood from his lips. Irby ran forward, and thrust his fist into Kanen's chest. Kanen leaned over in pain. "Urgh...." Kanen rose, and grabbed Irby by the neck. Irby gasped for air. Kanen threw his arm upward, and released grip. Irby went flying up through the air. Kanen stepped to the side as Irby slammed with a loud snap! into the hard, rocky ground. "You weak,foolish idiot of a warrior," he said with a look of disgust. Kanen stomped his foot onto Irby's back, and kept it there, pushing down against his spine.

05-28-2008, 07:15 PM	#8
Irby Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Canada, Eh. Gender: Posts: 7,015 Thanks: 344 Thanked 122 Times in 103 Posts Blog Entries: 5 Points: 44,257.55 Bank: 19,502.83 Total Points: 63,760.38 Donate	^Good except Irby couldnt wipe any blood away seeing as he is wearing armour...

05-29-2008, 04:47 PM	#11
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I'm sitting in the corner ashamed. Gender: Posts: 1,472 Thanks: 417 Thanked 46 Times in 36 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 4,941.40 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 4,941.41 Donate	Are you saying that you liked my post?