Open challenge NEW

1-up salesman · 06-04-2008, 10:33 PM

Rules:
1.minor healing allowed
2. Members must use two characters at the same time
3. You don't have to do long summaries
I'll be my characters Rael and Nokoara.
Member that accepts my challenge does opening summary and chooses battlefield.

Metal Man · 06-04-2008, 10:35 PM

Ok, I accept this challenge. Prepare to die.

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It was a sunny day at the peanut factory. A constant line of peanuts were being packed into boxes by machines, the occasional few workers making sure to clean up any machine-based errors and keep it all running. The smell of peanut butter was in the air, too.

Yet all was not right, for a machine shuddered, and then, suddenly shut down. A man in a white lab coat walked up to it, adjusting his glasses. But before he could even check the dial, the machine violently shook, and a loud 'POP' noise occurred. Out of it came... Metal Man.. ...and Metal Man again? No, it couldn't be! There were two of them!

But there was. They both got up in sync, brushing themselves off. The first pointed at the man. "I am afraid to say that we must take this place for battle. For you see--" The other one suddenly picked up the scientist and hurled him into a box, which was then carried out of the factory via a conveyor belt it was on. He spoke too. "Bah! Why waste time with morons? It's smashing time!" He banged his metal fists together. The remaining non-insane workers fled... while a few crazy ones stayed to watch.

The dynamic self-duo then proceeded to walk into the center of the arena and get out folding chairs. There, they sat down, and began reading identical newspapers, discussing amongst one another the sports column, of all things. "It's about time the Yankees--" "SILENCE! I MUST FIND OUT WHERE THE WRESTLING IS TALKED ABOUT!" "But there isn't any such column..." "YES THERE IS! SHUT UP!"

It would continue on like this until their foes appeared... the two men, by the way, were both shiny, metallic, 6'4", and made loud clanking noises everywhere they went. Their suits both hummed at a subtle level, and both had blue eyes. They moved only slightly differently... how could anyone tell them apart?

1-up salesman · 06-04-2008, 10:39 PM

SIGH please post your summary and battlefield.

Metal Man · 06-04-2008, 10:50 PM

See above; edit in your attack to your current pose and I shall follow suit.

1-up salesman · 06-04-2008, 11:16 PM

Rael appeared with his old friend, Nokoara. Rael's sword was unsheathed.
"Nokoara, let me warn you. I've fought this guy before. He's stronger than anything I've ever faced."

Rael and Nokoara walked along, hearing loud crashing noises.
"He's near," whispered Rael. They continued walking along.

The Metal Men heard the footsteps. "Ah, the victims are here," they said at the same time. They exchanged looks, and began running toward where they heard the footsteps.
They appeared in front of Nokoara and Rael.
Rael's eyes widened and his mouth dropped open.
"Two....how...?"

Rael stepped back in fear of the sight of the two. Nokoara's keyblade appeared in hand.
Nokoara jumped forward and swung his keyblade at the Metal Man to the right.
There was a loud CLANK.
Metal Man stayed right where he was, unharmed.

Metal Man · 06-04-2008, 11:30 PM

"Ha ha ha, puny man is trying that failure tactic again. Let's beat him up!"

The Metal Man who had been hit shoved the Keyblade away, proceeding to try to grab or tackle Nokoara. In the meantime, the other one picked up boxes of peanuts and began hurling them at both of them--but especially Nokoara, whom his other half was trying to grab and hold up so as to make him easy to smash boxes of peanuts into. Once the floor was covered in them, the burly one would drop Nokoara (if he grabbed him), rip out some component, and soon enough, the floor would be covered in machine oil???

"Fancy a smoke?" "Nope." "Too bad, I guess I'll have to light the floor on fire."

FWOOSH! He dropped a match he lit shortly after taking out of his pocket. The deadly smell of sulfur, oil, peanuts, and burning soon filled the room.

1-up salesman · 06-05-2008, 02:30 PM

Nokoara and Rael jumped away from the fire, unharmed.
The Metal Men walked forward, one grabbing Nokoara, the other Rael.
The one that grabbed Nokoara threw him against a wall, the one that had Rael throwing him against the floor. Rael got up and pulled out the elemental staff, and using the power of earth, lifted up the ground that both Metal Men were standing on, and sent it through the wall.

Metal Man · 06-07-2008, 01:50 AM

The wall was the one takin' the damage, as flaming Metal Men pierced it and reduced it to rubble. The men helped one another up, and then, surveying the wobbly, flaming warehouse with their foes inside it, they both pointed.

"Oh my. Your position is... unstable."

"Ha-ha! I'm gonna give them quite a pain! Nothing will top THIS!"

The more brutal of the Metal Men violently kicked the remaining portion of wall, and then leaped up and STOMPED on the roof. He did this in a way precisely calculated to bring down the roof... bring down the roof???

"Aww... I was going to snipe them with thrown peanuts."

"Idiot! They'd dodge those!"

The roof collapsed noisily, and dangerously, atop the would-be elemental heroes Rael and some guy whose name starts with an M.

But the less brute Metal Man was going to do his part in, too. They hadn't been sure whether or not their enemy team had been hit or dodged, but one way or another they wound up outside of the rubble. The other Metal Man stepped up. A useless sword strike was thrown at his face, only for him to sidestep. Once between the two, he stood, meditative in pose. Then he waggled a finger.

"Bet you both can't hit me at once!"

The wind blew as the last firery bits of the former factory winked out, and the smell of burnt peanuts filled the atmosphere...

1-up salesman · 06-08-2008, 04:45 PM

Rael knew from his past battle that he couldn't ever damage Metal Man by doing sword strikes or magic. But he had one more idea.
"Nokoara, stand back."

Rael pointed his Elemental Staff at the two Metal Men, shooting ice out of the tip. Nokoara looked up to see the Metal Men frozen in their tracks.

1-up salesman · 06-12-2008, 05:31 PM

canceled because Metal Man hasn't posted on this thread in a while.

06-04-2008, 10:33 PM	#1
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	Open challenge NEW Rules: 1.minor healing allowed 2. Members must use two characters at the same time 3. You don't have to do long summaries I'll be my characters Rael and Nokoara. Member that accepts my challenge does opening summary and chooses battlefield.

06-04-2008, 10:35 PM	#2
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,932 Thanks: 77 Thanked 226 Times in 157 Posts Points: 15,014.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,014.81 Donate	Ok, I accept this challenge. Prepare to die. --------------------------------------------------- It was a sunny day at the peanut factory. A constant line of peanuts were being packed into boxes by machines, the occasional few workers making sure to clean up any machine-based errors and keep it all running. The smell of peanut butter was in the air, too. Yet all was not right, for a machine shuddered, and then, suddenly shut down. A man in a white lab coat walked up to it, adjusting his glasses. But before he could even check the dial, the machine violently shook, and a loud 'POP' noise occurred. Out of it came... Metal Man.. ...and Metal Man again? No, it couldn't be! There were two of them! But there was. They both got up in sync, brushing themselves off. The first pointed at the man. "I am afraid to say that we must take this place for battle. For you see--" The other one suddenly picked up the scientist and hurled him into a box, which was then carried out of the factory via a conveyor belt it was on. He spoke too. "Bah! Why waste time with morons? It's smashing time!" He banged his metal fists together. The remaining non-insane workers fled... while a few crazy ones stayed to watch. The dynamic self-duo then proceeded to walk into the center of the arena and get out folding chairs. There, they sat down, and began reading identical newspapers, discussing amongst one another the sports column, of all things. "It's about time the Yankees--" "SILENCE! I MUST FIND OUT WHERE THE WRESTLING IS TALKED ABOUT!" "But there isn't any such column..." "YES THERE IS! SHUT UP!" It would continue on like this until their foes appeared... the two men, by the way, were both shiny, metallic, 6'4", and made loud clanking noises everywhere they went. Their suits both hummed at a subtle level, and both had blue eyes. They moved only slightly differently... how could anyone tell them apart? Last edited by Metal Man; 06-04-2008 at 10:44 PM.

06-04-2008, 10:39 PM	#3
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	SIGH please post your summary and battlefield.

06-04-2008, 10:50 PM	#4
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,932 Thanks: 77 Thanked 226 Times in 157 Posts Points: 15,014.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,014.81 Donate	See above; edit in your attack to your current pose and I shall follow suit.

06-04-2008, 11:16 PM	#5
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	Rael appeared with his old friend, Nokoara. Rael's sword was unsheathed. "Nokoara, let me warn you. I've fought this guy before. He's stronger than anything I've ever faced." Rael and Nokoara walked along, hearing loud crashing noises. "He's near," whispered Rael. They continued walking along. The Metal Men heard the footsteps. "Ah, the victims are here," they said at the same time. They exchanged looks, and began running toward where they heard the footsteps. They appeared in front of Nokoara and Rael. Rael's eyes widened and his mouth dropped open. "Two....how...?" Rael stepped back in fear of the sight of the two. Nokoara's keyblade appeared in hand. Nokoara jumped forward and swung his keyblade at the Metal Man to the right. There was a loud CLANK. Metal Man stayed right where he was, unharmed.

06-04-2008, 11:30 PM	#6
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,932 Thanks: 77 Thanked 226 Times in 157 Posts Points: 15,014.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,014.81 Donate	"Ha ha ha, puny man is trying that failure tactic again. Let's beat him up!" The Metal Man who had been hit shoved the Keyblade away, proceeding to try to grab or tackle Nokoara. In the meantime, the other one picked up boxes of peanuts and began hurling them at both of them--but especially Nokoara, whom his other half was trying to grab and hold up so as to make him easy to smash boxes of peanuts into. Once the floor was covered in them, the burly one would drop Nokoara (if he grabbed him), rip out some component, and soon enough, the floor would be covered in machine oil??? "Fancy a smoke?" "Nope." "Too bad, I guess I'll have to light the floor on fire." FWOOSH! He dropped a match he lit shortly after taking out of his pocket. The deadly smell of sulfur, oil, peanuts, and burning soon filled the room.

06-05-2008, 02:30 PM	#7
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	Nokoara and Rael jumped away from the fire, unharmed. The Metal Men walked forward, one grabbing Nokoara, the other Rael. The one that grabbed Nokoara threw him against a wall, the one that had Rael throwing him against the floor. Rael got up and pulled out the elemental staff, and using the power of earth, lifted up the ground that both Metal Men were standing on, and sent it through the wall.

06-07-2008, 01:50 AM	#8
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,932 Thanks: 77 Thanked 226 Times in 157 Posts Points: 15,014.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 15,014.81 Donate	The wall was the one takin' the damage, as flaming Metal Men pierced it and reduced it to rubble. The men helped one another up, and then, surveying the wobbly, flaming warehouse with their foes inside it, they both pointed. "Oh my. Your position is... unstable." "Ha-ha! I'm gonna give them quite a pain! Nothing will top THIS!" The more brutal of the Metal Men violently kicked the remaining portion of wall, and then leaped up and STOMPED on the roof. He did this in a way precisely calculated to bring down the roof... bring down the roof??? "Aww... I was going to snipe them with thrown peanuts." "Idiot! They'd dodge those!" The roof collapsed noisily, and dangerously, atop the would-be elemental heroes Rael and some guy whose name starts with an M. But the less brute Metal Man was going to do his part in, too. They hadn't been sure whether or not their enemy team had been hit or dodged, but one way or another they wound up outside of the rubble. The other Metal Man stepped up. A useless sword strike was thrown at his face, only for him to sidestep. Once between the two, he stood, meditative in pose. Then he waggled a finger. "Bet you both can't hit me at once!" The wind blew as the last firery bits of the former factory winked out, and the smell of burnt peanuts filled the atmosphere...

06-08-2008, 04:45 PM	#9
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	Rael knew from his past battle that he couldn't ever damage Metal Man by doing sword strikes or magic. But he had one more idea. "Nokoara, stand back." Rael pointed his Elemental Staff at the two Metal Men, shooting ice out of the tip. Nokoara looked up to see the Metal Men frozen in their tracks.

06-12-2008, 05:31 PM	#10
1-up salesman Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Well I'm on VGF right now, aren't I?...right? Gender: Posts: 1,676 Thanks: 719 Thanked 66 Times in 50 Posts Blog Entries: 6 Points: 12,664.13 Bank: 0.01 Total Points: 12,664.14 Donate	canceled because Metal Man hasn't posted on this thread in a while.