I moved my story again.

mario maniac man · 07-01-2002, 08:39 PM

Those of you who enjoyed my story here, It has been moved to http://www.crowleytool.com/mario. Go there if you would like to read the rest of it.

[ July 02, 2002, 06:43 PM: Message edited by: U CANOT UDNERSTAN MY 1337 MISPELING ]

07-01-2002, 10:47 PM

The link doesn't work.

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imported_Parrakarry · 07-02-2002, 08:36 AM

^Take the period off the end of it. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

07-02-2002, 06:50 PM

Oh, okay. I edited it so that the link works now.

Good story, although...
1. Kirby looks like he doesn't have shoes (all white) in his first game. He can fly, but he cannot copy abilities.
2. I think it'd be pretty cool if you used Orange Ocean instead of "Aquatica" since the Orange Ocean is actually in the games.

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[ July 02, 2002, 06:58 PM: Message edited by: U CANOT UDNERSTAN MY 1337 MISPELING ]

mario maniac man · 07-09-2002, 06:30 PM

I made it a hundred years since Kirby's Adventure for the purpose of starting a fresh world. Let's just say Orange Ocean was poluted and then dried up during the falling out period.

07-01-2002, 08:39 PM	#1
mario maniac man Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Those of you who enjoyed my story here, It has been moved to http://www.crowleytool.com/mario. Go there if you would like to read the rest of it. [ July 02, 2002, 06:43 PM: Message edited by: U CANOT UDNERSTAN MY 1337 MISPELING ]

07-01-2002, 10:47 PM	#2
KirbyKing Guest Posts: n/a	The link doesn't work. ----- - Remember: If you don't wanna Donate, Click the Ads!! Join the Duel Monsters League if you wanna play the great game from Yu-Gi-Oh!

07-02-2002, 08:36 AM	#3
imported_Parrakarry 1337 H4xx0rzerz Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Mars. I own it. Period. Posts: 9,529 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	^Take the period off the end of it. [img]tongue.gif[/img]

07-02-2002, 06:50 PM	#4
KirbyKing Guest Posts: n/a	Oh, okay. I edited it so that the link works now. Good story, although... 1. Kirby looks like he doesn't have shoes (all white) in his first game. He can fly, but he cannot copy abilities. 2. I think it'd be pretty cool if you used Orange Ocean instead of "Aquatica" since the Orange Ocean is actually in the games. ----- - Remember: If you don't wanna Donate, Click the Ads!! Join the Duel Monsters League if you wanna play the great game from Yu-Gi-Oh! [ July 02, 2002, 06:58 PM: Message edited by: U CANOT UDNERSTAN MY 1337 MISPELING ]

07-09-2002, 06:30 PM	#5
mario maniac man Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I made it a hundred years since Kirby's Adventure for the purpose of starting a fresh world. Let's just say Orange Ocean was poluted and then dried up during the falling out period.