Close Encounters with the 5ifth Kind

[Random User]

My friend from school made this up, so I thought I'd share it here. Enjoy.

>My sister and I are best friends
>We share everything together
>She has a new boyfriend
>He's coming over today
>I'm watching TV when
>She knocks open the door
>"Hi brother!"
>"Hey sis, where's the guy?"
>"...Here"
>It was a low voice
>A black figure appeared at the door
>I thought the clouds had covered the sun
>This guy had long black hair
>Black clothes
>And souless black eyes
>This isn't my sister's type
>"We're going up to my room, okay?"
>"Have fun..."
>What the ****
>Oh well
>I watched TV for the rest of the evening
>My sister came downstairs
>"Hey bro"
>"Are you gonna leave him up there by himself?"
>"Huh? He left an hour ago"
>I don't remember him leaving
>Next day
>I'm playing Xbox
>My sister calls
>He's coming over again
>When she came home
>It wasn't the same guy
>"Who's...?"
>I saw his reflection in a mirror
>The mirror showed the guy from yesterday
>I double-took
>The mirror showed the new guy now
>"Something a matter, bro?"
>"What happened to the guy from yesterday?"
>"This is the guy from yesterday, it's Chet"
>"I guess I got too much much stress from school yesterday"
>"Haha okay, we're going upstairs!"
>I could hear them whispering as they walked up
>He said "Is your brother high?"
>She laughed
>Is something wrong with my eyes?
>I blinked a few times
>Well at least it's not that scary guy
>I heard noises from upstairs
>Are they ****ing?
>"Hey! Keep it down!"
>The noises stop
>Next day
>I don't remember him leaving again
>I'm in my room today
>Her room is down the hall
>I heard them coming up the stairs
>I looked out my room
>I saw the dark guy close the door
>Ah, I'm probably hallucinating again
>I look at my hands
>10 fingers
>I hear noises from her room again
>I walk down the hall
>The noises stop when I reach her door
>I peek through the keyhole
>Her room
>A layer of dripping crimson blood all over
>Then blackness
>His eye is looking back at me
>I step back and blink
>I'm laying in my bed
>I hear the doorbell ring
>What the heck happened to my sister?!
>I run down the hallway and throw open her door
>Everything's normal
>Must've been a dream
>The bell rings again
>I answer the door
>It's a cop!
>"Can I help you officer?"
>"Does this girl live here?"
>It's a picture of my sister!
>"Yeah, I'm her brother, what's wrong?"
>"Somethings... happened, please follow me to the cruiser"
>His car still has lights on
>I follow him
>Kicking in the front seat
>Sitting in the back seat
>Gotta make my mind up
>Which seat can I take?

[Rainbow Dash]

does it really need the > before each line

[X-3]

Not really a good transition. It just goes from 'I follow him' to 'lyrics', which just seems odd to me.

[Random User]

^It was intended to be a story that built up into nothing.

[Rainbow Dash]

so random !!