Short 47 (Hah!Beat you all to it!) - VGF

Super N · 01-12-2005, 06:37 PM

Post comments here.

I,personally,thought this was the best Short we've seen in a long time.Very clever ending.In short...

[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

Chunky Kong12345 · 01-12-2005, 06:42 PM

Shy vs. Shy 5. Hooray.

Kholdstare · 01-13-2005, 02:09 AM

I agree, it's defenitly one of your better ones Jay. I actually understood this one without having to reread it a few times.

Super N · 01-13-2005, 05:42 PM

I just noticed that in the first panel, there is an error. The white "Shy" text is above the Black Shy, and Visa Versa. Shouldn't it be the other way around?

Neglected Charcter A · 01-13-2005, 10:47 PM

Shy versus Shy Lay rely does listen now Jay I demand more updates and and more updetes with Captian Churo

Romplayer · 01-14-2005, 05:35 AM

Yeah, it's nice.
And the white shy won! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Jonathan Resop · 01-14-2005, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Sarcasm can't think of a good name:
I just noticed that in the first panel, there is an error. The white "Shy" text is above the Black Shy, and Visa Versa. Shouldn't it be the other way around?

That's...um...er...a metaphor.-jay

(Although I did do that intentionally)

P.S. Glad everyone enjoyed it.

[ January 14, 2005, 10:30 AM: Message edited by: Perrin Aybara ]

Yoshinator · 01-15-2005, 05:25 PM

It says the domain smbhq.com has expired. My ****ing computer.

Jonathan Resop · 01-15-2005, 10:59 PM

No...it's not you. A lot of people are having that problem.-jay

**Sean P Kelly** · 01-18-2005, 04:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Romplayer:
Yeah, it's nice.
And the white shy won! [img]smile.gif[/img]

For those of you who think this is only the second time White Shy has won - http://www.smbhq.com/nc/lotw6.html

Super N · 01-18-2005, 05:31 PM

^So,the score is tied.Who shall win in the end?!

Take your bets!

Tonberry2k · 01-19-2005, 11:12 PM

Grey Spy. Duh.

01-12-2005, 06:37 PM	#1
Super N Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: A secret underground base near your house Posts: 1,663 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 10,373.50 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,873.50 Donate	Post comments here. I,personally,thought this was the best Short we've seen in a long time.Very clever ending.In short... [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

01-12-2005, 06:42 PM	#2
Chunky Kong12345 BEEP BEEP I'M A JEEP Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: ogmftwbqq Gender: Posts: 16,412 Thanks: 61 Thanked 210 Times in 153 Posts Points: 2,316.12 Bank: 80,535.77 Total Points: 82,851.89 Donate	Shy vs. Shy 5. Hooray.

01-13-2005, 02:09 AM	#3
Kholdstare Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Ice Palace Gender: Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 839.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,339.00 Donate	I agree, it's defenitly one of your better ones Jay. I actually understood this one without having to reread it a few times.

01-13-2005, 05:42 PM	#4
Super N Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: A secret underground base near your house Posts: 1,663 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 10,373.50 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,873.50 Donate	I just noticed that in the first panel, there is an error. The white "Shy" text is above the Black Shy, and Visa Versa. Shouldn't it be the other way around?

01-13-2005, 10:47 PM	#5
Neglected Charcter A Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: some where Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,120.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,620.00 Donate	Shy versus Shy Lay rely does listen now Jay I demand more updates and and more updetes with Captian Churo

01-14-2005, 05:35 AM	#6
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,219.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,719.01 Donate	Yeah, it's nice. And the white shy won! [img]smile.gif[/img]

01-15-2005, 05:25 PM	#8
Yoshinator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: Amherst, MA Posts: 6,778 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,232.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,732.00 Donate	It says the domain smbhq.com has expired. My ****ing computer.

01-15-2005, 10:59 PM	#9
Jonathan Resop Banned Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 34,037.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 34,537.00 Donate	No...it's not you. A lot of people are having that problem.-jay

01-18-2005, 05:31 PM	#11
Super N Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: A secret underground base near your house Posts: 1,663 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 10,373.50 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 10,873.50 Donate	^So,the score is tied.Who shall win in the end?! Take your bets!

01-19-2005, 11:12 PM	#12
Tonberry2k Senior Member Join Date: May 2001 Location: Pensacola, FL Gender: Posts: 5,177 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 16,294.81 Bank: 530.66 Total Points: 16,825.47 Donate	Grey Spy. Duh.