The Mushroom Wars Special Edition Part 3. - VGF

Alph · 07-18-2005, 08:26 PM

MUSHROOM WARS SPECIAL EDITION PART 3

[ September 26, 2005, 03:13 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

Glyph Phoenix · 07-18-2005, 08:56 PM

Gah. There isn't even a part 2 yet! You lose.

And then there's the matter of which forum this belongs in. I mean, it's a comic, which reeks of fan-comic-forumness. But it's still NC related.

Yoshinator · 07-18-2005, 10:18 PM

I liked the Donez joke.

Galefore · 07-18-2005, 10:28 PM

^^He's referring to the part two Jay originally made, unless you knew that.

Alph · 07-18-2005, 10:45 PM

Yeah, only the text based episodes actually need remaking. The new editions fit in between the comix-based episodes that Jay made.

With this, you can now read 1, 2, 3, and 4 in succession.

Chunky Kong12345 · 07-19-2005, 03:40 PM

Is everyone speaking through telepathy or something?

Alph · 07-19-2005, 08:56 PM

No, the speach bubbles are used because that's what Jay used in the Mushroom Wars that he made. It's for continuity and stuff. I told ya, you gotta read them in order.

Alph · 07-21-2005, 11:19 PM

Jay, have you seen it?

Jonathan Resop · 07-21-2005, 11:54 PM

Hey. Yeah, I just read it now. Pretty good.

-The Donez joke was awesome. Funny.
-It doesn't really follow the Part 3 text at all. Oh well. The stuff you did was good. Should some of those scenes from the text version be added?
-If I remember, the Koopa Kids didn't form DAD, Bowser and Luigi did.
-You probably could get rid of those thought bubbles...they just look bad. Heh. A bad remnant of my early comic days. But Reid didn't use them in the Part 1 Special Edition, so you can probably get rid of them
-If I'm going to put this on the site (I may), you'll need to break it up into frames.

Anyone else have any comments?-jay

Alph · 07-23-2005, 01:15 PM

Yeah, I realise D.A.D is formed by Bowser and Luigi in the original text, but I'm taking a few creative liberties with it, similar to how Lord Reid did. Anyway, I needed the Koopa Kids to send Phone, in order to fit with the flow of the story. I sorta have a general idea of what will happen stored in my brain.

BTW, I have them all saved as individual frames, but I can only post eight images at once on the forums, which is why I combined some into one frame.

[ July 23, 2005, 01:23 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

UltraLuigi · 07-23-2005, 05:09 PM

Super Kooky [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

Jonathan Resop · 07-24-2005, 09:02 PM

Yeah...but that's a little bit bigger than a creative liberty...it just doesn't fit with the entire rest of the story. I mean, I refer to Bowser and Luigi as "DAD" for the rest of the comic. Plus, it doesn't make any sense for the Koopa Kids to send Phone the Clone after Mario. They're fighting Bowser, not Mario. Bowser and Luigi (DAD) are the ones fighting Mario. That's the whole point of the stupid story. Heh.-jay

Alph · 07-24-2005, 10:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Perrin Aybara:
Yeah...but that's a little bit bigger than a creative liberty...it just doesn't fit with the entire rest of the story. I mean, I refer to Bowser and Luigi as "DAD" for the rest of the comic. Plus, it doesn't make any sense for the Koopa Kids to send Phone the Clone after Mario. They're fighting Bowser, not Mario. Bowser and Luigi (DAD) are the ones fighting Mario. That's the whole point of the stupid story. Heh.-jay

Just wait till after part five. It's gonna be out soon. Things will make sense...or at least, as much sense as a comix is supposed to make.

Romplayer · 10-05-2005, 02:56 PM

Okay, I hope it doesn't matter that I post here although the thread's old.
I like the Special Edition! It's great. And the best part was the Donez joke. Great!
I just can't wait for the other parts to read...

Lord_Zack · 10-05-2005, 04:35 PM

All of the special editions have been posted.

07-18-2005, 08:26 PM	#1
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,888.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,618.33 Donate	MUSHROOM WARS SPECIAL EDITION PART 3 [ September 26, 2005, 03:13 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

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Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,558.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,058.00 Donate	Gah. There isn't even a part 2 yet! You lose. And then there's the matter of which forum this belongs in. I mean, it's a comic, which reeks of fan-comic-forumness. But it's still NC related.

07-18-2005, 10:18 PM	#3
Yoshinator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: Amherst, MA Posts: 6,778 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 3,238.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,738.00 Donate	I liked the Donez joke.

07-18-2005, 10:28 PM	#4
Galefore Gunjinkeeper Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Dry land. Gender: Posts: 5,544 Thanks: 602 Thanked 335 Times in 268 Posts Blog Entries: 2 Points: 4,445.25 Bank: 34,721.88 Total Points: 39,167.13 Donate	^^He's referring to the part two Jay originally made, unless you knew that.

07-18-2005, 10:45 PM	#5
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,888.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,618.33 Donate	Yeah, only the text based episodes actually need remaking. The new editions fit in between the comix-based episodes that Jay made. With this, you can now read 1, 2, 3, and 4 in succession.

07-19-2005, 03:40 PM	#6
Chunky Kong12345 BEEP BEEP I'M A JEEP Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: ogmftwbqq Gender: Posts: 16,424 Thanks: 61 Thanked 210 Times in 153 Posts Points: 9.00 Bank: 84,672.20 Total Points: 84,681.20 Donate	Is everyone speaking through telepathy or something?

07-19-2005, 08:56 PM	#7
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,888.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,618.33 Donate	No, the speach bubbles are used because that's what Jay used in the Mushroom Wars that he made. It's for continuity and stuff. I told ya, you gotta read them in order.

07-21-2005, 11:19 PM	#8
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,888.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,618.33 Donate	Jay, have you seen it?

07-21-2005, 11:54 PM	#9
Jonathan Resop Banned Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 34,094.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 34,594.00 Donate	Hey. Yeah, I just read it now. Pretty good. -The Donez joke was awesome. Funny. -It doesn't really follow the Part 3 text at all. Oh well. The stuff you did was good. Should some of those scenes from the text version be added? -If I remember, the Koopa Kids didn't form DAD, Bowser and Luigi did. -You probably could get rid of those thought bubbles...they just look bad. Heh. A bad remnant of my early comic days. But Reid didn't use them in the Part 1 Special Edition, so you can probably get rid of them -If I'm going to put this on the site (I may), you'll need to break it up into frames. Anyone else have any comments?-jay

07-23-2005, 01:15 PM	#10
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,888.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,618.33 Donate	Yeah, I realise D.A.D is formed by Bowser and Luigi in the original text, but I'm taking a few creative liberties with it, similar to how Lord Reid did. Anyway, I needed the Koopa Kids to send Phone, in order to fit with the flow of the story. I sorta have a general idea of what will happen stored in my brain. BTW, I have them all saved as individual frames, but I can only post eight images at once on the forums, which is why I combined some into one frame. [ July 23, 2005, 01:23 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

07-23-2005, 05:09 PM	#11
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07-24-2005, 09:02 PM	#12
Jonathan Resop Banned Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 34,094.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 34,594.00 Donate	Yeah...but that's a little bit bigger than a creative liberty...it just doesn't fit with the entire rest of the story. I mean, I refer to Bowser and Luigi as "DAD" for the rest of the comic. Plus, it doesn't make any sense for the Koopa Kids to send Phone the Clone after Mario. They're fighting Bowser, not Mario. Bowser and Luigi (DAD) are the ones fighting Mario. That's the whole point of the stupid story. Heh.-jay

10-05-2005, 02:56 PM	#14
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,221.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,721.01 Donate	Okay, I hope it doesn't matter that I post here although the thread's old. I like the Special Edition! It's great. And the best part was the Donez joke. Great! I just can't wait for the other parts to read...

10-05-2005, 04:35 PM	#15
Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,859.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,399.24 Donate	All of the special editions have been posted.