Creative Ideas that could be in The NC/SSS Crossover Mach 2 - VGF

yo478 · 08-04-2005, 07:28 AM

I had some ideas that I'd love to see in Jay or Lord Reid's comics. Maybe you've got some too that you can post here. Who knows if they'll use them, but I thought it would be fun to see everyone's ideas.

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My first idea is that some guy named Saber will come and help Donez and Jill on their part of the quest and become an official NC character. I'll get a picture of him soon. He looks like Quickman only he is yellow and he can do some sort of laser attack called cyber beam. He helps them by getting them out of the Forest of Illusions and trying to find Jay, who is trapped by the bad guys.

Glyph Phoenix · 08-04-2005, 09:55 AM

Your idea involves using a new character which doesn't sound half as funny as one of Jay's or one of Reid's or maybe even one of Sean's. And then you had him do the blandest, unfunniest, lamest thing. "OMG I'm teh new character N I will save U all!!!"

Sad. Just sad.

ludwigvan · 08-04-2005, 12:30 PM

This is along the lines of self-insertion stories, bad fanfic, and stories about mysterious vampyric part-elven half-angel half-demon demon slayers acting as messengers from the twelve gods, wearing long black trenchcoats and wielding dual flaming katanas.

Actually, it's along the line of self-insertion stories, where characters are added for almost no reason who are uber-powerful and save the day, or just bad fanfic, which is the same except sometimes with less of the author as a character.

Also, Saber. Nothing about the name or the character fits in the NC universe.

[ August 04, 2005, 12:34 PM: Message edited by: LvK ]

yo478 · 08-04-2005, 01:24 PM

Do you guys have to be so hard?

Anyway, 4 new ideas.

1. General Magruder joins Vgf's army.
2. The Guru of vegtables (Bob i'll call him) will summon some dark minion to do something evil.
3. When Citrus Man uses The Crystal Of Restop on Peach and Daisy, Peach will call herself Milk Maid, who stands for all milk related stuff, and Daisy will call herself The Neglected Women, Who stands for all NC characters.
4. Citrus Man will attempt to turn Wario into a super hero but because Wario is so dumb, he will just stay the same.

That's my ideas for now.

Glyph Phoenix · 08-04-2005, 03:44 PM

1. Not bad, I guess. Magruder's a bit serious and VGW's a bit... idiot, though... don't know how they'd team up.

2. First, BOB? Gah. He even says his name in the comic. And the only thing Carter was ever good at was giving Fred poisonous tacos.

3. Well, the first one is just weird... I suppose it'd be wacky enough to make the cut, but only if Jay or Reid couldn't think of anything else. The second isn't wacky in the least.

4. Lame. Wario's not even dumb in NC, he's just greedy.

And sure, we could be less hard on your ideas... but your ideas are really bad and we don't want to.

yo478 · 08-04-2005, 05:19 PM

Idea update

1. Donez and Jill and Saber(if possible) will take a shortcut to the cave of death and agony by going to funky town [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] (okay may seem strange but they Jay and Lord Reid could work it out I think).

2. Fred will (because of his stupidity) join Vgf's army.

3. LvK will try to get Pat back onto Vgf's army.

4. Jay will bring back Sven's commentary.

Well those are my ideas for now but I kinda wanted more people to post some ideas so if anybody have some, bring 'em in

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Alph · 08-04-2005, 06:22 PM

When writing a story it is unwise to simply stick a bunch of random characters and events (many of which being copies of earlier ones) in at certain places. Instead, you must come up with unexpected yet clever plot twists that are laced with plenty of dry humor (at least, I enjoy dry humor, although it in itself isn't totally necessary).

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[ August 04, 2005, 06:24 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

RMC · 08-04-2005, 09:42 PM

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Originally posted by yo478:
Idea update

1. Donez and Jill and Saber(if possible) will take a shortcut to the cave of death and agony by going to funky town [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] (okay may seem strange but they Jay and Lord Reid could work it out I think).

2. Fred will (because of his stupidity) join Vgf's army.

3. LvK will try to get Pat back onto Vgf's army.

4. Jay will bring back Sven's commentary.

Well those are my ideas for now but I kinda wanted more people to post some ideas so if anybody have some, bring 'em in .

Please reffer to this topic alright

Same rulez apply.

ludwigvan · 08-04-2005, 10:11 PM

Also, yo478, stop trying to put or get all your ideas in other people's comics, unless it's something small. Most authors already have the story planned just a little bit, they don't need you insisting to put Magicman X or whatever into it, upsetting the plot and writing that they've already developed. Especially when it's obvious and/or not-so-creative, like a set of Megaman robot masters... except they're X style or something.

When you have a comic about bringing in said robot masters as X versions, I'm sure you don't want fan submissions asking you for Clownman X, because you were probably gonna get to that anyways.

When you have a comic about strange creatures, all of whom have low levels in varying standard human thought, you don't want fan submissions that are completely out of character, a'ight?

Now, not trying to offend, but you wanna enact all these plot-changing things, either make your own comic or flesh them out more. Or find out that Jay hasn't made any forthcoming plot yet, and bug him until he puts something almost slightly like yours in. Then you can sue him for all he's worth.

Lord Reid · 08-04-2005, 10:48 PM

You could always put me in the story. I'm a pretty cool character.

Alph · 08-04-2005, 11:45 PM

But are YOU a cyborg!?

Ha! Nothing compares to my coolness.

yo478 · 08-05-2005, 08:42 AM

Oh, sorry, I hope I didn't offend anybody. I was hoping that ideas and predictions for the next comic could be posted here, kind of like talking about a new Star Wars movie. Just some creative fan fiction brainstorming from everybody Is there a forum or a way to do that without upsetting or offending Jay?

Alph · 08-05-2005, 11:20 AM

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Originally posted by yo478:
Is there a forum or a way to do that without upsetting or offending Jay?

You must make animal sacrifice whilst performing the proper incantations. It is the only way to appease the wrath of Jay.

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08-04-2005, 07:28 AM	#1
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,461.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,961.00 Donate	I had some ideas that I'd love to see in Jay or Lord Reid's comics. Maybe you've got some too that you can post here. Who knows if they'll use them, but I thought it would be fun to see everyone's ideas. [img]smile.gif[/img] My first idea is that some guy named Saber will come and help Donez and Jill on their part of the quest and become an official NC character. I'll get a picture of him soon. He looks like Quickman only he is yellow and he can do some sort of laser attack called cyber beam. He helps them by getting them out of the Forest of Illusions and trying to find Jay, who is trapped by the bad guys.

08-04-2005, 09:55 AM	#2
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,553.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,053.00 Donate	Your idea involves using a new character which doesn't sound half as funny as one of Jay's or one of Reid's or maybe even one of Sean's. And then you had him do the blandest, unfunniest, lamest thing. "OMG I'm teh new character N I will save U all!!!" Sad. Just sad.

08-04-2005, 12:30 PM	#3
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 10,548.44 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,048.44 Donate	This is along the lines of self-insertion stories, bad fanfic, and stories about mysterious vampyric part-elven half-angel half-demon demon slayers acting as messengers from the twelve gods, wearing long black trenchcoats and wielding dual flaming katanas. Actually, it's along the line of self-insertion stories, where characters are added for almost no reason who are uber-powerful and save the day, or just bad fanfic, which is the same except sometimes with less of the author as a character. Also, Saber. Nothing about the name or the character fits in the NC universe. [ August 04, 2005, 12:34 PM: Message edited by: LvK ]

08-04-2005, 01:24 PM	#4
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,461.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,961.00 Donate	Do you guys have to be so hard? Anyway, 4 new ideas. 1. General Magruder joins Vgf's army. 2. The Guru of vegtables (Bob i'll call him) will summon some dark minion to do something evil. 3. When Citrus Man uses The Crystal Of Restop on Peach and Daisy, Peach will call herself Milk Maid, who stands for all milk related stuff, and Daisy will call herself The Neglected Women, Who stands for all NC characters. 4. Citrus Man will attempt to turn Wario into a super hero but because Wario is so dumb, he will just stay the same. That's my ideas for now.

08-04-2005, 03:44 PM	#5
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 6,553.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 7,053.00 Donate	1. Not bad, I guess. Magruder's a bit serious and VGW's a bit... idiot, though... don't know how they'd team up. 2. First, BOB? Gah. He even says his name in the comic. And the only thing Carter was ever good at was giving Fred poisonous tacos. 3. Well, the first one is just weird... I suppose it'd be wacky enough to make the cut, but only if Jay or Reid couldn't think of anything else. The second isn't wacky in the least. 4. Lame. Wario's not even dumb in NC, he's just greedy. And sure, we could be less hard on your ideas... but your ideas are really bad and we don't want to.

08-04-2005, 05:19 PM	#6
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,461.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,961.00 Donate	Idea update 1. Donez and Jill and Saber(if possible) will take a shortcut to the cave of death and agony by going to funky town [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] (okay may seem strange but they Jay and Lord Reid could work it out I think). 2. Fred will (because of his stupidity) join Vgf's army. 3. LvK will try to get Pat back onto Vgf's army. 4. Jay will bring back Sven's commentary. Well those are my ideas for now but I kinda wanted more people to post some ideas so if anybody have some, bring 'em in .

08-04-2005, 06:22 PM	#7
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,868.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,598.33 Donate	When writing a story it is unwise to simply stick a bunch of random characters and events (many of which being copies of earlier ones) in at certain places. Instead, you must come up with unexpected yet clever plot twists that are laced with plenty of dry humor (at least, I enjoy dry humor, although it in itself isn't totally necessary). ------------------------ Check out Mushroom Wars Part Three & Part Five Special Edition! [ August 04, 2005, 06:24 PM: Message edited by: Alph ]

08-04-2005, 10:11 PM	#9
ludwigvan Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The well of wishes. Gender: Posts: 5,444 Thanks: 3 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Points: 10,548.44 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 11,048.44 Donate	Also, yo478, stop trying to put or get all your ideas in other people's comics, unless it's something small. Most authors already have the story planned just a little bit, they don't need you insisting to put Magicman X or whatever into it, upsetting the plot and writing that they've already developed. Especially when it's obvious and/or not-so-creative, like a set of Megaman robot masters... except they're X style or something. When you have a comic about bringing in said robot masters as X versions, I'm sure you don't want fan submissions asking you for Clownman X, because you were probably gonna get to that anyways. When you have a comic about strange creatures, all of whom have low levels in varying standard human thought, you don't want fan submissions that are completely out of character, a'ight? Now, not trying to offend, but you wanna enact all these plot-changing things, either make your own comic or flesh them out more. Or find out that Jay hasn't made any forthcoming plot yet, and bug him until he puts something almost slightly like yours in. Then you can sue him for all he's worth.

08-04-2005, 10:48 PM	#10
Lord Reid Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Posts: 152 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Points: 3,527.54 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 4,027.54 Donate	You could always put me in the story. I'm a pretty cool character.

08-04-2005, 11:45 PM	#11
Alph Member Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: MWAHAHAHHAHAHAAAA!!!ha. Gender: Posts: 1,294 Thanks: 21 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts Points: 12,868.64 Bank: 729.69 Total Points: 13,598.33 Donate	But are YOU a cyborg!? Ha! Nothing compares to my coolness.

08-05-2005, 08:42 AM	#12
yo478 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: kentucky Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,461.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 1,961.00 Donate	Oh, sorry, I hope I didn't offend anybody. I was hoping that ideas and predictions for the next comic could be posted here, kind of like talking about a new Star Wars movie. Just some creative fan fiction brainstorming from everybody Is there a forum or a way to do that without upsetting or offending Jay?