NC/SSS Mach 2, Part 11 - VGF

**Sean P Kelly** · 02-14-2006, 08:13 AM

IT SUCKS! IT'S TERRIBLE! THE AUTHOR SHOULD BE SHOT!

Now that your expectations are down - http://www.smbhq.com/nc/nsdos12.html

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-14-2006, 12:04 PM

I've started reading it. It's actually surprisingly good. The only thing missing is the stick people.

And now I know why Jay didn't update until now. A Valantines' Day Treat! -CSM

Romplayer · 02-14-2006, 03:00 PM

Woo, back on NC boards ^^

Well, I like the new part. It is better than the part before, but it has the same problem: THE PLOT HAS TO GO ON. I mean it. Seriously.
What has happened in this part? Pat has gone to moon and Donez visits Minus World 2 with Jill.
Okay... so now?

Don't get me wrong - I really liked the part and the jokes. I really wonder what Donez and Jill will do with the Goomba King

I don't remember SMBHQ told us how to defeat him. So our NCs will have to find an own way

And I loved the part with the 99 red balloons. I don't know whether many of you know that it was made in Germany first and after the big success Nena translated her song to English. But heh, at least Sean knows it

99 Red Balloons is my favorite song of the 80s.

So, to sum it up - great work again. But please think of the story the next time. The adventure has to lead to somewhere. Don't forget it.

**Sean P Kelly** · 02-14-2006, 03:28 PM

Since Jay and Lord Reid already have a plan on how the things going to end, I made sure not to advance things TOO much.

Though the end is coming soon (or it better be).

Romplayer · 02-14-2006, 03:45 PM

"coming soon"... means "just a few episodes" or "just a few months"?

**Sean P Kelly** · 02-14-2006, 04:16 PM

BTW, did anyone get the joke with the monkey or was I being too vague?

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-14-2006, 04:24 PM

I've heard the term "Mutant Space Monkeys" before, but I forget where. I'll need to know if you want me to update the Wiki. -CSM

**Sean P Kelly** · 02-14-2006, 04:28 PM

No the OTHER joke with the monkey (Evil Mutant Space Monkeys were from LNSOG Part 3)

Luigi III · 02-14-2006, 06:09 PM

I remembered that.

But for God's cake, six months and you give us something SHORT!? I guess it's better than holding back Harmeet's rage telling him that the next part isn't up yet.

Lord_Zack · 02-14-2006, 07:10 PM

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Sarai and Samiel · 02-14-2006, 07:35 PM

The question is... how severe is the addiction?

Curly Brace · 02-14-2006, 10:25 PM

I lol'd.

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-14-2006, 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gimpy

No the OTHER joke with the monkey (Evil Mutant Space Monkeys were from LNSOG Part 3)

Why don't you finish up LNSOG? I actually liked it, believe it or not.

Oh, and do another LOTW. We're overdue, and you do a good job with those. -CSM

Metal Man · 02-14-2006, 10:42 PM

Eh. In a way you didn't lose the spirit of the comix, however certain parts were better than others.

The "Other Girl", for example, wasn't quite wacky enough. Also, Fred didn't quite get a funny quip, despite the strange/absurd nature of his 99 red balloon appearance.

The minus world thing was the best part, though you sorta messed up with black boxes in the last part. The font wasn't quite the right one either. Also, at least one of the Poser/What's his face duel needed to be shouting like some guy on those car destruction derbies. As for VG and Pat, that was pretty much spot on...

It's taken so long to make, though, this crossover, that in the time span so far, I've bounced between being an SP and not being one over five times.

If it hits another month+ lull, though, I may just have to try a part of it for myself. *Stares at red phone on his desk labeled "Jay"*

Luigi III · 02-15-2006, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crazyswordsman

Why don't you finish up LNSOG? I actually liked it, believe it or not.

Oh, and do another LOTW. We're overdue, and you do a good job with those. -CSM

LOTW wasn't cancelled? Well then, it's the record holder for "Longest Time Without an Update".

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-15-2006, 07:16 PM

Jay was supposed to write an episode, but got sidetracked for some reason. Maybe grad school. -CSM

Romplayer · 02-17-2006, 07:20 AM

Or girls

**Crazyswordsman** · 02-18-2006, 12:59 AM

Or he decided to start up another game of CT. -CSM

**Perrin Aybara** · 02-18-2006, 01:25 AM

Heh. I wish the reason was girls.

But good work, Sean. It was really funny.-jay

UltraLuigi · 02-18-2006, 07:09 PM

I'd have to give this one a 8 ot of 10. Pretty good comic Sean did. J

02-14-2006, 08:13 AM	#1
Sean P Kelly SMBHQ Mod Movies Mod Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada Gender: Posts: 3,242 Thanks: 9 Thanked 41 Times in 32 Posts Points: 177,108.11 Bank: 63,759.26 Total Points: 240,867.37 Donate	NC/SSS Mach 2, Part 11 IT SUCKS! IT'S TERRIBLE! THE AUTHOR SHOULD BE SHOT! Now that your expectations are down - http://www.smbhq.com/nc/nsdos12.html

02-14-2006, 10:25 PM	#12
Curly Brace THE ALL AROUND YUMMIEST. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Maryland Gender: Posts: 5,772 Thanks: 127 Thanked 116 Times in 82 Posts Points: 15,826.93 Bank: 37,251.94 Total Points: 53,078.88 Donate	I lol'd. __________________ WHAT HAS SCIENCE DONE?!

02-14-2006, 12:04 PM	#2
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02-14-2006, 03:00 PM	#3
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,219.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,719.01 Donate	Woo, back on NC boards ^^ Well, I like the new part. It is better than the part before, but it has the same problem: THE PLOT HAS TO GO ON. I mean it. Seriously. What has happened in this part? Pat has gone to moon and Donez visits Minus World 2 with Jill. Okay... so now? Don't get me wrong - I really liked the part and the jokes. I really wonder what Donez and Jill will do with the Goomba King I don't remember SMBHQ told us how to defeat him. So our NCs will have to find an own way And I loved the part with the 99 red balloons. I don't know whether many of you know that it was made in Germany first and after the big success Nena translated her song to English. But heh, at least Sean knows it 99 Red Balloons is my favorite song of the 80s. So, to sum it up - great work again. But please think of the story the next time. The adventure has to lead to somewhere. Don't forget it.

02-14-2006, 03:28 PM	#4
Sean P Kelly SMBHQ Mod Movies Mod Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada Gender: Posts: 3,242 Thanks: 9 Thanked 41 Times in 32 Posts Points: 177,108.11 Bank: 63,759.26 Total Points: 240,867.37 Donate	Since Jay and Lord Reid already have a plan on how the things going to end, I made sure not to advance things TOO much. Though the end is coming soon (or it better be).

02-14-2006, 03:45 PM	#5
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,219.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,719.01 Donate	"coming soon"... means "just a few episodes" or "just a few months"?

02-14-2006, 04:16 PM	#6
Sean P Kelly SMBHQ Mod Movies Mod Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada Gender: Posts: 3,242 Thanks: 9 Thanked 41 Times in 32 Posts Points: 177,108.11 Bank: 63,759.26 Total Points: 240,867.37 Donate	BTW, did anyone get the joke with the monkey or was I being too vague?

02-14-2006, 04:24 PM	#7
Crazyswordsman RPG Mod Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 7,979 Thanks: 537 Thanked 373 Times in 256 Posts Points: 126,405.27 Bank: 26,171.80 Total Points: 152,577.07 Donate	I've heard the term "Mutant Space Monkeys" before, but I forget where. I'll need to know if you want me to update the Wiki. -CSM

02-14-2006, 04:28 PM	#8
Sean P Kelly SMBHQ Mod Movies Mod Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Toronto, ON, Canada Gender: Posts: 3,242 Thanks: 9 Thanked 41 Times in 32 Posts Points: 177,108.11 Bank: 63,759.26 Total Points: 240,867.37 Donate	No the OTHER joke with the monkey (Evil Mutant Space Monkeys were from LNSOG Part 3)

02-14-2006, 06:09 PM	#9
Luigi III Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Who really cares? Gender: Posts: 70 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 1,607.23 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 2,107.23 Donate	I remembered that. But for God's cake, six months and you give us something SHORT!? I guess it's better than holding back Harmeet's rage telling him that the next part isn't up yet.

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Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 752 Thanks: 22 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Points: 11,849.55 Bank: 2,539.69 Total Points: 14,389.24 Donate	Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahaha!

02-14-2006, 07:35 PM	#11
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02-14-2006, 10:42 PM	#14
Metal Man Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: Gender: Posts: 6,701 Thanks: 74 Thanked 190 Times in 130 Posts Points: 7,983.89 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 7,983.89 Donate	Eh. In a way you didn't lose the spirit of the comix, however certain parts were better than others. The "Other Girl", for example, wasn't quite wacky enough. Also, Fred didn't quite get a funny quip, despite the strange/absurd nature of his 99 red balloon appearance. The minus world thing was the best part, though you sorta messed up with black boxes in the last part. The font wasn't quite the right one either. Also, at least one of the Poser/What's his face duel needed to be shouting like some guy on those car destruction derbies. As for VG and Pat, that was pretty much spot on... It's taken so long to make, though, this crossover, that in the time span so far, I've bounced between being an SP and not being one over five times. If it hits another month+ lull, though, I may just have to try a part of it for myself. Stares at red phone on his desk labeled "Jay"

02-15-2006, 07:16 PM	#16
Crazyswordsman RPG Mod Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 7,979 Thanks: 537 Thanked 373 Times in 256 Posts Points: 126,405.27 Bank: 26,171.80 Total Points: 152,577.07 Donate	Jay was supposed to write an episode, but got sidetracked for some reason. Maybe grad school. -CSM

02-17-2006, 07:20 AM	#17
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,219.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,719.01 Donate	Or girls

02-18-2006, 12:59 AM	#18
Crazyswordsman RPG Mod Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 7,979 Thanks: 537 Thanked 373 Times in 256 Posts Points: 126,405.27 Bank: 26,171.80 Total Points: 152,577.07 Donate	Or he decided to start up another game of CT. -CSM

02-18-2006, 01:25 AM	#19
Perrin Aybara LLLUUUCCCCCCAAA!!! Ban HotD Join Date: Apr 1999 Location: Alone....so terribly alone... Some... where... out... there... dies Gender: Posts: 11,766 Thanks: 169 Thanked 325 Times in 174 Posts Points: 61,074.65 Bank: 137,056.02 Total Points: 198,130.67 Donate	Heh. I wish the reason was girls. But good work, Sean. It was really funny.-jay

02-18-2006, 07:09 PM	#20
UltraLuigi Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: House that has a computer Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 4,883.00 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 5,383.00 Donate	I'd have to give this one a 8 ot of 10. Pretty good comic Sean did. J