MY NC comic! -The S! - VGF

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:08 PM

Here it is...It's a bit good...I want to improve it...Tell me what you think...

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:11 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:14 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:17 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:20 PM

**Dylan** · 09-10-2006, 12:20 AM

1. You said it would be good. Liar.
2. Posting five times in a row? Seriously now...
3. It's called the FANCOMICS Forum for a reason.

-Dylan

**Crazyswordsman** · 09-10-2006, 12:46 AM

Saeed, you've improved a lot as a VGFer. Don't mispell. And use the Comix Forum.

Dylan, he posted five times in a row due to image restrictions. Although, to be fair, he could have made the entire comic an image.

Also, the comic isn't THAT bad... It's funny in its own way. It could have been a bit cleverer, though. -CSM

Codiekitty · 09-10-2006, 10:24 AM

WTF, mate, don't use bitmaps.

Arm? I thought that was a whip or something. Seriously.

Didn't Jay already make the "staring at a blank piece of paper" gag?

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Mikhail Gorbachev · 09-10-2006, 12:13 PM

Yeah, this should really go in the fancomics section.
Even the lines aren't done well. The outline of the table has holes in it, and the line in the background isn't even straight. Then is randomly changes to a line that is slanted and doesn't even go all the way to the left side of the panel. Seriously, how hard is it to make a line correctly? And what is with that disfigured arm? It's not even the same pixel density as the rest of Jay's body.
These should be .GIFs, they're 150-230 KB each with .GIF quality and color depth. They would be about 4-5KB each if you saved as .GIF.

Bandit · 09-10-2006, 02:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The S!

Here it is...It's a bit good...I want to improve it...Tell me what you think...

It wasnt an NC production. Liar! Anyway...that completley blew. Stick to the VGF comics. At least those are slightly enjoyable.

Crazybirdanimations · 09-10-2006, 03:05 PM

I KNOW it wasnt good. -_-
I wanted to know what was BAD about it.
I know the line wasnt straight. and I know it had alot flaws to it.
Anything else about the comic that's not good?

Mikhail Gorbachev · 09-10-2006, 04:14 PM

It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

Romplayer · 09-11-2006, 07:39 AM

I liked it.
But you really have to improve your graphic abilities!
I mean, NC never was a page with complex graphics. But more than a white background!
It's not hard to make it look better. Just put more time into your work.

Crazybirdanimations · 09-12-2006, 11:57 AM

Ok. I'll start making version 2. (No ketchup in eye, better background...And... more parts, I'll spend more time on it)

Codiekitty · 09-12-2006, 12:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by unrealistic cereal! OMG

It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

What he said.

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Bandit · 09-14-2006, 09:35 AM

Version 2? SWEET JESUS NO!

LuWEEGEEman · 11-11-2006, 05:47 PM

do it!

Lord_Zack · 11-11-2006, 05:59 PM

Well, not completely bad.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 11-11-2006, 05:59 PM

^^Don't bump old topics.

Insert unfunny meme here · 11-12-2006, 12:44 PM

09-09-2006, 09:08 PM	#1
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Dylan Banned Mod Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 6,107 Thanks: 860 Thanked 880 Times in 402 Posts Points: 30,983.58 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 30,983.59 Donate	1. You said it would be good. Liar. 2. Posting five times in a row? Seriously now... 3. It's called the FANCOMICS Forum for a reason. -Dylan

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Crazyswordsman RPG Mod Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 538 Thanked 374 Times in 257 Posts Points: 127,275.75 Bank: 26,695.24 Total Points: 153,970.98 Donate	Saeed, you've improved a lot as a VGFer. Don't mispell. And use the Comix Forum. Dylan, he posted five times in a row due to image restrictions. Although, to be fair, he could have made the entire comic an image. Also, the comic isn't THAT bad... It's funny in its own way. It could have been a bit cleverer, though. -CSM

09-10-2006, 10:24 AM	#8
Codiekitty Just Another Face in Red Jumpsuit Join Date: May 2001 Location: Lemmingland Gender: Posts: 19,143 Thanks: 121 Thanked 173 Times in 119 Posts Points: 43,752.72 Bank: 3,021,450.74 Total Points: 3,065,203.46 Donate	WTF, mate, don't use bitmaps. Arm? I thought that was a whip or something. Seriously. Didn't Jay already make the "staring at a blank piece of paper" gag? Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

09-10-2006, 12:13 PM	#9
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,490 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 152.14 Bank: 23,930.81 Total Points: 24,082.95 Donate	Yeah, this should really go in the fancomics section. Even the lines aren't done well. The outline of the table has holes in it, and the line in the background isn't even straight. Then is randomly changes to a line that is slanted and doesn't even go all the way to the left side of the panel. Seriously, how hard is it to make a line correctly? And what is with that disfigured arm? It's not even the same pixel density as the rest of Jay's body. These should be .GIFs, they're 150-230 KB each with .GIF quality and color depth. They would be about 4-5KB each if you saved as .GIF.

09-10-2006, 03:05 PM	#11
Crazybirdanimations Platinum Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,625 Thanks: 233 Thanked 197 Times in 165 Posts Points: 10,695.47 Bank: 8,786.99 Total Points: 19,482.46 Donate	I KNOW it wasnt good. -_- I wanted to know what was BAD about it. I know the line wasnt straight. and I know it had alot flaws to it. Anything else about the comic that's not good? __________________

09-10-2006, 04:14 PM	#12
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,490 Thanks: 25 Thanked 60 Times in 45 Posts Points: 152.14 Bank: 23,930.81 Total Points: 24,082.95 Donate	It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

09-11-2006, 07:39 AM	#13
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 643 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Points: 3,225.01 Bank: 500.00 Total Points: 3,725.01 Donate	I liked it. But you really have to improve your graphic abilities! I mean, NC never was a page with complex graphics. But more than a white background! It's not hard to make it look better. Just put more time into your work.

09-12-2006, 11:57 AM	#14
Crazybirdanimations Platinum Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,625 Thanks: 233 Thanked 197 Times in 165 Posts Points: 10,695.47 Bank: 8,786.99 Total Points: 19,482.46 Donate	Ok. I'll start making version 2. (No ketchup in eye, better background...And... more parts, I'll spend more time on it) __________________

09-14-2006, 09:35 AM	#16
Bandit Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Your Pants Gender: Posts: 3,685 Thanks: 184 Thanked 165 Times in 91 Posts Points: 25,144.14 Bank: 1.38 Total Points: 25,145.52 Donate	Version 2? SWEET JESUS NO!

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