MY NC comic! -The S!

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:08 PM

Here it is...It's a bit good...I want to improve it...Tell me what you think...

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:11 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:14 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:17 PM

Crazybirdanimations · 09-09-2006, 09:20 PM

Dylan · 09-10-2006, 12:20 AM

1. You said it would be good. Liar.
2. Posting five times in a row? Seriously now...
3. It's called the FANCOMICS Forum for a reason.

-Dylan

**Crazyswordsman** · 09-10-2006, 12:46 AM

Saeed, you've improved a lot as a VGFer. Don't mispell. And use the Comix Forum.

Dylan, he posted five times in a row due to image restrictions. Although, to be fair, he could have made the entire comic an image.

Also, the comic isn't THAT bad... It's funny in its own way. It could have been a bit cleverer, though. -CSM

Codiekitty · 09-10-2006, 10:24 AM

WTF, mate, don't use bitmaps.

Arm? I thought that was a whip or something. Seriously.

Didn't Jay already make the "staring at a blank piece of paper" gag?

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Mikhail Gorbachev · 09-10-2006, 12:13 PM

Yeah, this should really go in the fancomics section.
Even the lines aren't done well. The outline of the table has holes in it, and the line in the background isn't even straight. Then is randomly changes to a line that is slanted and doesn't even go all the way to the left side of the panel. Seriously, how hard is it to make a line correctly? And what is with that disfigured arm? It's not even the same pixel density as the rest of Jay's body.
These should be .GIFs, they're 150-230 KB each with .GIF quality and color depth. They would be about 4-5KB each if you saved as .GIF.

Bandit · 09-10-2006, 02:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The S!

Here it is...It's a bit good...I want to improve it...Tell me what you think...

It wasnt an NC production. Liar! Anyway...that completley blew. Stick to the VGF comics. At least those are slightly enjoyable.

Crazybirdanimations · 09-10-2006, 03:05 PM

I KNOW it wasnt good. -_-
I wanted to know what was BAD about it.
I know the line wasnt straight. and I know it had alot flaws to it.
Anything else about the comic that's not good?

Mikhail Gorbachev · 09-10-2006, 04:14 PM

It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

Romplayer · 09-11-2006, 07:39 AM

I liked it.
But you really have to improve your graphic abilities!
I mean, NC never was a page with complex graphics. But more than a white background!
It's not hard to make it look better. Just put more time into your work.

Crazybirdanimations · 09-12-2006, 11:57 AM

Ok. I'll start making version 2. (No ketchup in eye, better background...And... more parts, I'll spend more time on it)

Codiekitty · 09-12-2006, 12:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by unrealistic cereal! OMG

It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

What he said.

Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

Bandit · 09-14-2006, 09:35 AM

Version 2? SWEET JESUS NO!

Luigiman7 · 11-11-2006, 04:47 PM

do it!

Lord_Zack · 11-11-2006, 04:59 PM

Well, not completely bad.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 11-11-2006, 04:59 PM

^^Don't bump old topics.

Frumie · 11-12-2006, 11:44 AM

09-09-2006, 09:08 PM	#1
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	MY NC comic! -The S! Here it is...It's a bit good...I want to improve it...Tell me what you think...

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Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	1. You said it would be good. Liar. 2. Posting five times in a row? Seriously now... 3. It's called the FANCOMICS Forum for a reason. -Dylan

09-10-2006, 12:46 AM	#7
Crazyswordsman This key doesn't work. Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 10,791 Thanks: 1,019 Thanked 686 Times in 467 Posts	Saeed, you've improved a lot as a VGFer. Don't mispell. And use the Comix Forum. Dylan, he posted five times in a row due to image restrictions. Although, to be fair, he could have made the entire comic an image. Also, the comic isn't THAT bad... It's funny in its own way. It could have been a bit cleverer, though. -CSM

09-10-2006, 10:24 AM	#8
Codiekitty Just Another Face in Red Jumpsuit Join Date: May 2001 Location: Lemmingland Gender: Posts: 19,142 Thanks: 121 Thanked 176 Times in 121 Posts	WTF, mate, don't use bitmaps. Arm? I thought that was a whip or something. Seriously. Didn't Jay already make the "staring at a blank piece of paper" gag? Where are these lemmings going? The Super Nintendo Super Shire! Hop in line and follow them there!

09-10-2006, 12:13 PM	#9
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	Yeah, this should really go in the fancomics section. Even the lines aren't done well. The outline of the table has holes in it, and the line in the background isn't even straight. Then is randomly changes to a line that is slanted and doesn't even go all the way to the left side of the panel. Seriously, how hard is it to make a line correctly? And what is with that disfigured arm? It's not even the same pixel density as the rest of Jay's body. These should be .GIFs, they're 150-230 KB each with .GIF quality and color depth. They would be about 4-5KB each if you saved as .GIF.

09-10-2006, 03:05 PM	#11
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	I KNOW it wasnt good. -_- I wanted to know what was BAD about it. I know the line wasnt straight. and I know it had alot flaws to it. Anything else about the comic that's not good?

09-10-2006, 04:14 PM	#12
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	It could be more original. It seems to just be jokes from NC regurgitated by a malfunctioning blender.

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Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	do it!

09-11-2006, 07:39 AM	#13
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 806 Thanks: 1 Thanked 10 Times in 7 Posts	I liked it. But you really have to improve your graphic abilities! I mean, NC never was a page with complex graphics. But more than a white background! It's not hard to make it look better. Just put more time into your work.

09-12-2006, 11:57 AM	#14
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	Ok. I'll start making version 2. (No ketchup in eye, better background...And... more parts, I'll spend more time on it)

09-14-2006, 09:35 AM	#16
Bandit Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: Your Pants Gender: Posts: 3,685 Thanks: 184 Thanked 165 Times in 91 Posts	Version 2? SWEET JESUS NO!

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Lord_Zack Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Gender: Posts: 778 Thanks: 30 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Well, not completely bad.

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