Metal Man's EXTREME Presidential Adventure - New NC Series - Part 1 Up

Metal Man · 01-17-2010, 08:31 PM

Part 1 is here!

This is my first attempt at a storyline thing, and of course, it has just begun, so, the best is yet to come, but here's my first part.

In any case, as you can see, I will be able to keep NC updated.

Dizzy · 01-17-2010, 08:36 PM

Your new nickname should be Tldr.

But otherwise, I like it so far. I like activity.

Redshirt · 01-17-2010, 08:38 PM

Great comic. Still hating on Wario I see, not I care annymoe after he fired me...

BTW: did you get the sprite sheet I sent you? I know you like to space out updates, just wana make sure you got it.

Metal Man · 01-17-2010, 08:46 PM

Yeah, I did.

And yeah, as you can see, my tendency for long sentences is quite silly.

I'll try and cut down on the long sentences for the non-Metal Man characters, but figured you'd guys prefer a handful of panels with long sentences so you can see the introduction now, rather than later. Then as the comic develops, I can figure out the right word-panel ratio for the other characters.

Gabriel · 01-18-2010, 12:09 AM

I'm liking how it looks so far. My favorite part has to be when Spoiler Below

Steve, after so many years, finally escapes that Extra-move prison thing, and how he's now bent on revenge. He might even just forget his name and go with Silence for a while. It's a kinda cool super villain name

. One suggestion I have is to make a list of Presidential Promises you have, just so I...er, uh THESE SIMPLETONS SURROUNDING US can follow along with what's going on.

Also, I didn't get that pun you wanted to kill me over.

Metal Man · 01-18-2010, 12:20 AM

Actually, me neither. I must have forgot to put it in there.

Not to worry, I'll point that out in the next episode.

Also, yer spoiler tags are not working, Gabe.

I forget what activates them.

Gabriel · 01-18-2010, 12:30 AM

^In fact I had misspelled the key, it should be singular, not plural. I made to fix the error, but I took so long you had time to post...haha.

Metal Man · 01-18-2010, 12:44 AM

Yeah, heh.

In any case, this seems to be a success, I will probably have another chapter by next month or so.

Perrin Aybara · 01-18-2010, 12:52 AM

Heh, that's funny, since for the longest of time I was planning on writing Bill and Fred 2: Spoiler Below

The Revenge of Silence.

Creepy.

I was also planning on having a subplot in that story with Dr. Donez vs. Dr. Pepper.

-jay

Gabriel · 01-18-2010, 01:13 AM

What could have been...sigh.

At least you're a lot more active around the forums now.

Metal Man · 01-18-2010, 05:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Perrin Aybara

Heh, that's funny, since for the longest of time I was planning on writing Bill and Fred 2: Spoiler Below

The Revenge of Silence.

Creepy.

I was also planning on having a subplot in that story with Dr. Donez vs. Dr. Pepper.

-jay

You won't be disappointed, as it seems I have read your mind.

Yes. Even on the second thing. Just with a different character than Dr. Donez.

You'll see.

Luigiman7 · 01-18-2010, 10:54 AM

WHAT A WACKY ADVENTURE

Looks good so far. Can't wait to see more and all that gibberish.

MeowMan · 01-18-2010, 06:16 PM

Ooh, fun, giberish..

Redshirt · 01-18-2010, 06:19 PM

I wish I could work on the deathmatch.

Romplayer · 01-19-2010, 08:24 AM

Why do you have to put yourself in every short or comic or anything you create?

Robotazy · 01-19-2010, 09:31 AM

Jay did that.

Redshirt · 01-19-2010, 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Romplayer

Why do you have to put yourself in every short or comic or anything you create?

He is the President of NC, so he would appear in NC comixs

Metal Man · 01-19-2010, 12:10 PM

Well, I don't HAVE to, but when I'm just starting out, it's a lot easier to use myself to get the ball rolling and then pick up speed and switch to more panels of the other characters.

Also, Codiekitty had no problem using herself endlessly in panels, and the Bill and Fred story had Jay appearing constantly.

Of course, it makes sense you'd ask, since no comic with that type of self-character use has occurred since I think Mario Busters.

Romplayer · 01-19-2010, 07:38 PM

Okay, I have to admit Jay did that too, even in multiple forms (Respo etc). But somehow I just think that this belongs to NC because... it was in NC comix since ever and... it's JAY!

Not very convincing, I know... so I just keep my mouth shut.
I just have the feeling, that the character (!) Metal Man is a bit over-present lately.

Apart from that: I like that you start a story by reactivating a character from one of the classics and so in some kind continuing the old plot.

01-17-2010, 08:31 PM	#1
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Metal Man's EXTREME Presidential Adventure - New NC Series - Part 1 Up Part 1 is here! This is my first attempt at a storyline thing, and of course, it has just begun, so, the best is yet to come, but here's my first part. In any case, as you can see, I will be able to keep NC updated.

01-17-2010, 08:38 PM	#3
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,607 Thanks: 683 Thanked 998 Times in 690 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Great comic. Still hating on Wario I see, not I care annymoe after he fired me... BTW: did you get the sprite sheet I sent you? I know you like to space out updates, just wana make sure you got it. Last edited by Redshirt; 01-17-2010 at 08:45 PM.

01-18-2010, 12:09 AM	#5
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,301 Thanks: 111 Thanked 102 Times in 79 Posts	I'm liking how it looks so far. My favorite part has to be when Spoiler Below Steve, after so many years, finally escapes that Extra-move prison thing, and how he's now bent on revenge. He might even just forget his name and go with Silence for a while. It's a kinda cool super villain name . One suggestion I have is to make a list of Presidential Promises you have, just so I...er, uh THESE SIMPLETONS SURROUNDING US can follow along with what's going on. Also, I didn't get that pun you wanted to kill me over. Last edited by Gabriel; 01-18-2010 at 12:29 AM.

01-18-2010, 10:54 AM	#12
Luigiman7 ~)´◡｀(~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: representin da bronx yo Gender: Posts: 17,300 Thanks: 1,098 Thanked 992 Times in 698 Posts Blog Entries: 8	WHAT A WACKY ADVENTURE Looks good so far. Can't wait to see more and all that gibberish. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

01-17-2010, 08:36 PM	#2
Dizzy A Real Sonic Hero Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18,192 Thanks: 1,670 Thanked 1,077 Times in 750 Posts Blog Entries: 111	Your new nickname should be Tldr. But otherwise, I like it so far. I like activity.

01-17-2010, 08:46 PM	#4
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Yeah, I did. And yeah, as you can see, my tendency for long sentences is quite silly. I'll try and cut down on the long sentences for the non-Metal Man characters, but figured you'd guys prefer a handful of panels with long sentences so you can see the introduction now, rather than later. Then as the comic develops, I can figure out the right word-panel ratio for the other characters.

01-18-2010, 12:20 AM	#6
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Actually, me neither. I must have forgot to put it in there. Not to worry, I'll point that out in the next episode. Also, yer spoiler tags are not working, Gabe. I forget what activates them.

01-18-2010, 12:30 AM	#7
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,301 Thanks: 111 Thanked 102 Times in 79 Posts	^In fact I had misspelled the key, it should be singular, not plural. I made to fix the error, but I took so long you had time to post...haha.

01-18-2010, 12:44 AM	#8
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Yeah, heh. In any case, this seems to be a success, I will probably have another chapter by next month or so.

01-18-2010, 12:52 AM	#9
Perrin Aybara Veteran Member Join Date: Apr 1999 Location: Alone....so terribly alone... Some... where... out... there... dies Gender: Posts: 12,760 Thanks: 194 Thanked 504 Times in 235 Posts	Heh, that's funny, since for the longest of time I was planning on writing Bill and Fred 2: Spoiler Below The Revenge of Silence. Creepy. I was also planning on having a subplot in that story with Dr. Donez vs. Dr. Pepper. -jay

01-18-2010, 01:13 AM	#10
Gabriel Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,301 Thanks: 111 Thanked 102 Times in 79 Posts	What could have been...sigh. At least you're a lot more active around the forums now.

01-18-2010, 06:16 PM	#13
MeowMan Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: If not here, Minecraft and/or with friends. Gender: Posts: 6,297 Thanks: 818 Thanked 202 Times in 127 Posts Blog Entries: 42	Ooh, fun, giberish..

01-18-2010, 06:19 PM	#14
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,607 Thanks: 683 Thanked 998 Times in 690 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I wish I could work on the deathmatch.

01-19-2010, 08:24 AM	#15
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 806 Thanks: 1 Thanked 10 Times in 7 Posts	Why do you have to put yourself in every short or comic or anything you create?

01-19-2010, 09:31 AM	#16
Robotazy PRESS ANY KEY TO PANIC! Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: A Tiny Shed Gender: Posts: 16,247 Thanks: 521 Thanked 1,238 Times in 885 Posts Blog Entries: 43	Jay did that.

01-19-2010, 12:10 PM	#18
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Well, I don't HAVE to, but when I'm just starting out, it's a lot easier to use myself to get the ball rolling and then pick up speed and switch to more panels of the other characters. Also, Codiekitty had no problem using herself endlessly in panels, and the Bill and Fred story had Jay appearing constantly. Of course, it makes sense you'd ask, since no comic with that type of self-character use has occurred since I think Mario Busters.

01-19-2010, 07:38 PM	#19
Romplayer Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Germany Gender: Posts: 806 Thanks: 1 Thanked 10 Times in 7 Posts	Okay, I have to admit Jay did that too, even in multiple forms (Respo etc). But somehow I just think that this belongs to NC because... it was in NC comix since ever and... it's JAY! Not very convincing, I know... so I just keep my mouth shut. I just have the feeling, that the character (!) Metal Man is a bit over-present lately. Apart from that: I like that you start a story by reactivating a character from one of the classics and so in some kind continuing the old plot.