A NEWB SONIC COMIC

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:08 PM

heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time

the comp messed up the l in parallel

Chop Chop Master Onion · 07-26-2007, 08:12 PM

1. GRAMMAR.

2. WORD BUBBLES.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 07-26-2007, 08:12 PM

http://www.vgf.com/forums/comics-spr...wed-seriously/

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:13 PM

QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that

Chop Chop Master Onion · 07-26-2007, 08:15 PM

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:15 PM

where i want to know????

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 08:27 PM

I hate such comics as these.

Wonder Wario · 07-26-2007, 08:31 PM

It sucks. Please don't make any more.

Señor Lenny · 07-26-2007, 08:39 PM

Are you even trying anymore?

Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to!

The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:45 PM

dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

SephirothKirby · 07-26-2007, 08:48 PM

^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.

Maynard James Keenan · 07-26-2007, 08:48 PM

This comic is made of fail and lose.

Señor Lenny · 07-26-2007, 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anonymous-Children

dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

The intro dosn't state ANYTHING except for the fact the comic is going to go downhill in the following episodes. Yes, its an intro comic, but that dosn't make it okay for it to suck.

Also, here at VGF, we say our opinions about things. If YOU don't like that, LEAVE.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:00 PM

Mikhail Gorbachev · 07-26-2007, 09:01 PM

Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome.
Keep up the good work.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:03 PM

wooo a fan and im improving as i go

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 09:05 PM

wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha....

Not really. That sucked.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:07 PM

sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Señor Lenny · 07-26-2007, 09:12 PM

Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anonymous-Children

sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Trust me! That never works! I tried it!

07-26-2007, 08:08 PM	#1
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate	A NEWB SONIC COMIC heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time the comp messed up the l in parallel Last edited by Anonymous-Children; 07-26-2007 at 08:12 PM. Reason: because i needed 2

07-26-2007, 08:12 PM	#2
Chop Chop Master Onion KICK, PUNCH, IT'S ALL IN YOUR MIND Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Either UN's bed or Andre's bed. Gender: Posts: 13,963 Thanks: 982 Thanked 1,691 Times in 809 Posts Points: 96.02 Bank: 123,140.75 Total Points: 123,236.77 Donate	1. GRAMMAR. 2. WORD BUBBLES.

07-26-2007, 08:12 PM	#3
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,593 Thanks: 30 Thanked 82 Times in 65 Posts Points: 1,341.54 Bank: 132,290.67 Total Points: 133,632.21 Donate	http://www.vgf.com/forums/comics-spr...wed-seriously/

07-26-2007, 08:13 PM	#4
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate	QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that

07-26-2007, 08:15 PM	#5
Chop Chop Master Onion KICK, PUNCH, IT'S ALL IN YOUR MIND Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Either UN's bed or Andre's bed. Gender: Posts: 13,963 Thanks: 982 Thanked 1,691 Times in 809 Posts Points: 96.02 Bank: 123,140.75 Total Points: 123,236.77 Donate

07-26-2007, 08:27 PM	#7
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,721 Thanks: 233 Thanked 204 Times in 168 Posts Points: 1,188.95 Bank: 30,542.21 Total Points: 31,731.16 Donate	I hate such comics as these.

07-26-2007, 08:31 PM	#8
Wonder Wario Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Gender: Posts: 2,090 Thanks: 65 Thanked 36 Times in 22 Posts Points: 6,932.57 Bank: 1,309.80 Total Points: 8,242.37 Donate	It sucks. Please don't make any more.

07-26-2007, 08:39 PM	#9
Señor Lenny Señor Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 2,002 Thanks: 257 Thanked 225 Times in 101 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 161.00 Bank: 285,975.85 Total Points: 286,136.85 Donate	Are you even trying anymore? Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to! The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.

07-26-2007, 08:45 PM	#10
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate	dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

07-26-2007, 08:48 PM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Urine and his Aegis Erector. Gender: Posts: 5,481 Thanks: 255 Thanked 555 Times in 323 Posts Points: 3,977.41 Bank: 284,952.49 Total Points: 288,929.90 Donate	^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.

07-26-2007, 08:48 PM	#12
Maynard James Keenan Cooler than you and you **ing know it. Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Somewhere, being **ing awesome. Gender: Posts: 12,537 Thanks: 690 Thanked 1,143 Times in 769 Posts Blog Entries: 15 Points: 4,175.56 Bank: 36,453.89 Total Points: 40,629.45 Donate	This comic is made of fail and lose.

07-26-2007, 09:00 PM	#14
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate

07-26-2007, 09:01 PM	#15
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,593 Thanks: 30 Thanked 82 Times in 65 Posts Points: 1,341.54 Bank: 132,290.67 Total Points: 133,632.21 Donate	Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome. Keep up the good work.

07-26-2007, 09:03 PM	#16
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate	wooo a fan and im improving as i go

07-26-2007, 09:05 PM	#17
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,721 Thanks: 233 Thanked 204 Times in 168 Posts Points: 1,188.95 Bank: 30,542.21 Total Points: 31,731.16 Donate	wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha.... Not really. That sucked.

07-26-2007, 09:07 PM	#18
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Points: 476.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 476.00 Donate	sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

07-26-2007, 09:12 PM	#19
Señor Lenny Señor Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Gender: Posts: 2,002 Thanks: 257 Thanked 225 Times in 101 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Points: 161.00 Bank: 285,975.85 Total Points: 286,136.85 Donate	Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.