A NEWB SONIC COMIC

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:08 PM

heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time

the comp messed up the l in parallel

**Valigarmander** · 07-26-2007, 08:12 PM

1. GRAMMAR.

2. WORD BUBBLES.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 07-26-2007, 08:12 PM

http://www.vgf.com/forums/comics-spr...wed-seriously/

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:13 PM

QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that

**Valigarmander** · 07-26-2007, 08:15 PM

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:15 PM

where i want to know????

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 08:27 PM

I hate such comics as these.

Wonder Wario · 07-26-2007, 08:31 PM

It sucks. Please don't make any more.

Totally Kennerson · 07-26-2007, 08:39 PM

Are you even trying anymore?

Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to!

The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 08:45 PM

dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

SephirothKirby · 07-26-2007, 08:48 PM

^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.

Panfan · 07-26-2007, 08:48 PM

This comic is made of fail and lose.

Totally Kennerson · 07-26-2007, 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anonymous-Children

dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

The intro dosn't state ANYTHING except for the fact the comic is going to go downhill in the following episodes. Yes, its an intro comic, but that dosn't make it okay for it to suck.

Also, here at VGF, we say our opinions about things. If YOU don't like that, LEAVE.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:00 PM

Mikhail Gorbachev · 07-26-2007, 09:01 PM

Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome.
Keep up the good work.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:03 PM

wooo a fan and im improving as i go

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 09:05 PM

wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha....

Not really. That sucked.

Anonymous-Children · 07-26-2007, 09:07 PM

sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Totally Kennerson · 07-26-2007, 09:12 PM

Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.

Crazybirdanimations · 07-26-2007, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anonymous-Children

sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

Trust me! That never works! I tried it!

07-26-2007, 08:08 PM	#1
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A NEWB SONIC COMIC heres the first part of the intro ill have more once i have the time the comp messed up the l in parallel Last edited by Anonymous-Children; 07-26-2007 at 08:12 PM. Reason: because i needed 2

07-26-2007, 08:12 PM	#2
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	1. GRAMMAR. 2. WORD BUBBLES.

07-26-2007, 08:12 PM	#3
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	http://www.vgf.com/forums/comics-spr...wed-seriously/

07-26-2007, 08:13 PM	#4
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	QUOTE SUPER MARIO BROS HQ where does sonic fit in that

07-26-2007, 08:15 PM	#5
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20

07-26-2007, 08:27 PM	#7
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	I hate such comics as these.

07-26-2007, 08:31 PM	#8
Wonder Wario Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Gender: Posts: 2,090 Thanks: 65 Thanked 37 Times in 23 Posts	It sucks. Please don't make any more.

07-26-2007, 08:39 PM	#9
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Are you even trying anymore? Seriously, put some ****ing effort into your comics. Write a script. Ask yourself "Is this funny?" before putting jokes in. I can't even read most of it because of the lack of word balloons. I can't tell who half of them are talking to! The only thing you got right was the name of the comic.

07-26-2007, 08:45 PM	#10
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	dude its a ***cking intro ill put in effort as i go the intro should state what this comic is about snd if you dont like it screw you

07-26-2007, 08:48 PM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	^ Incorrect amount of asterisks.

07-26-2007, 08:48 PM	#12
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	This comic is made of fail and lose.

07-26-2007, 09:00 PM	#14
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

07-26-2007, 09:01 PM	#15
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	Well, personally, I think this comic is awesome. Keep up the good work.

07-26-2007, 09:03 PM	#16
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wooo a fan and im improving as i go

07-26-2007, 09:05 PM	#17
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	wow, this is soooo funny, I'm laughing sooo hard that I think my guts are being re-arranged, your killing people with your comedy, I consider you a murderer, ahhhhhhahhahaha.... Not really. That sucked.

07-26-2007, 09:07 PM	#18
Anonymous-Children Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SSSSD! Gender: Posts: 76 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	sarcasm you always try to pull writers down so they give up but i just got to ignore the critisim and keep working if you wonder where i came up with the mono log kajin from the mystical forest zone XD

07-26-2007, 09:12 PM	#19
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Maybe you should actually LISTEN to the critisim. Maybe you'll learn somthing for once.