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 12-02-2006, 07:06 PM | #1 |
| Member  Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender:  Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 |  The Adventure of Dr. Donez!! Yeah, I found this one comic that I was working on a while ago. I think I might continue it, since this place has a comic fourm. Note: The first few episodes won't really be that good/funny. The newer episodes that I'm working on will be better. So, here is is!           Last edited by Totally Kennerson; 12-02-2006 at 07:16 PM. |
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| 12-02-2006, 07:33 PM | #4 |
| Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Land of Love Gender: Posts: 2,306 Thanks: 86 Thanked 74 Times in 58 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | It was completly out of the random. It didn't have to much of a story line... It was ok for a laugh. You might want to add a body, instead of stick figures. Other than that, it was alright. Keep em' coming. 7/10. |
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| The Following User Says Thank You to Link 456 For This Useful Post: | Totally Kennerson (12-02-2006) |
| 12-02-2006, 07:42 PM | #5 | |
| Calibrating...  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Centennial State Gender: Posts: 1,425 Thanks: 70 Thanked 84 Times in 51 Posts | Quote:
Seemed like a bunch of NC comix made into one. Pretty good. Last edited by Spritedude; 12-03-2006 at 01:41 AM. | |
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| The Following User Says Thank You to Spritedude For This Useful Post: | Totally Kennerson (12-02-2006) |
| 12-02-2006, 07:44 PM | #6 |
| Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | Really? It's...good?! Wow. This first parts just kinda...Well, it starts as a dream that Jay has, then he ends up going crazy. I'll get the next part up later tonight. Right now, I'm eating some cake or somthing. |
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| 12-02-2006, 09:06 PM | #10 |
| Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Land of Love Gender: Posts: 2,306 Thanks: 86 Thanked 74 Times in 58 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | I liked that. It was pretty good. Some things I did happen to see was: What was that thing in Dr. Donez's house? The thing that looks like a cut-off B. In your second post, on your first 3 panels, they were completly random. Other than that, Better than the prolouge. 7 1/2 /10 |
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| 12-02-2006, 09:18 PM | #11 |
| Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | The "cut-off B"...Are you talking about the window? Thats a window. The last panel of the first post and the first three in the second was Dr. Donez thinking where his robot is. |
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| 12-02-2006, 10:37 PM | #15 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender:  Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts | Terrible. It's completely incoherent, the jokes are awful and stolen from NC, there is a relatively high amount of spelling errors, and the .jpg format ruins the color information more than Jay's horrible .gif dithering did. Be less reckless about spelling, save using a better format, and for god's sake, stop ripping off of NC. |
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| The Following User Says Thank You to Mikhail Gorbachev For This Useful Post: | Totally Kennerson (12-02-2006) |
| 12-02-2006, 10:43 PM | #16 |
| Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | Thank you for being honest, Phonestheme. =) I'll make sure to work really hard on the next episodes. |
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| The Following 2 Users Say Thank You to Totally Kennerson For This Useful Post: | Dylan (12-03-2006) |
| 12-02-2006, 10:49 PM | #17 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts | I'm glad that there's someone making comics who's open to criticism for a change. Most people in the comix forum post a crappy comic, get panned for it, and then never come back. |
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| 12-02-2006, 10:52 PM | #18 |
| Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | I would rather be told I suck so I can improve and make good comics than be lied to and told they're good and continue to make sucky comics. |
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| 12-02-2006, 11:25 PM | #19 |
| Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1 | Episode 3 Thank God, the last old episode. I found out I made 1/2 of episode four, and not one part of it is funny, so I'll be re-doing it. So, it'll be a day or two before the next episode. Trust me, after seeing this episode, you'll want to know what happens next.           |
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