Shy Guy Adventures!

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 05:07 PM

Shy Guy Adventures is a comic series that I post on NSider and I decided to post it here too.If you have been to the Mario NSider boards you might have noticed the comic Shy Guy Tale.I use the same sprites and backgrounds and he let us use em so dont think this as a rip off.Yes I know there isnt much humour but im not good with humour when it comes to comics.
Prolog.:

Part 1:

I didn't use speech bubbles because it would mess up the comic.It shouldn't be to hard to read.

Edit: Irby isn't me.

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 05:44 PM

Hmm...It's ok, but you should use speech bubbles, especially in the town scene. It was sorta hard to read that part. The Prolog was a good introduction for the charatcers but nothing really happens in part 1. Irby just slaps a bad guy. It was funny, though.

Make sure to spell check and use correct grammer!

Hey, can I appear in your comic since I'm a Shy Guy? I can make you a Lord Kenny Shy Guy sprite that matches those.

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 05:55 PM

Sure.I can always use submissions! I can give you the sprite sheet if you want.A blank one.

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 05:57 PM

Ok! Just email it to me or somthing, and I'll give you the sprites later today. =)

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 06:07 PM

Ill give em to you later when im not lazy.

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 06:09 PM

Edit: Bah!

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 06:12 PM

Parts 2 and 3:

Part 3:

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 06:15 PM

Ok, now its starting to get interesting. Lemon Guy... Lime Guy... Is Citrus Man going to show up? =)

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 06:30 PM

I have up to part 12.

**X-3** · 12-03-2006, 06:42 PM

Needs improvement. Like text bubbles. And it needs a better plot/better humor(If this is a comedy).

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 06:57 PM

This isnt a comedy and speech bubbles would make the comic longer and harder to make.I have reasons.

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 07:00 PM

You don't need text "bubbles", but like, put them in a small, white box. This way, we can see the words better, and it will take up as little space as possible!

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 07:02 PM

Ill TRY and fix the speech problems but don't hold your breath because you might die.

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 07:05 PM

Part 4:

Part 5:

The orange Shy Guy is a user made Shy Guy.A submission.Same with Ghost Guy.Ghost Guy is a Guy who THINKS he is a ghost and Super Guy(The orange guy) is a Super Hero who always messes things up.

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 07:20 PM

You see, compare the text on the white backrounds to the text on the other backrounds.

The storys kinda...well, its not bad, but you could explain some stuff, like why Irby keeps teleporting in part 5, and why Super Guy dosn't save Irby.

Link 456 · 12-03-2006, 07:25 PM

There are a few Grammatical errors.
And another thing...

does Ghost Guy have to be that annoying?

Totally Kennerson · 12-03-2006, 07:27 PM

It's kinda funny how Ghost Guy stops acting like a ghost when Super Guy appears.

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 07:32 PM

The teleportation in this is random.

Ghost Guy isnt really a ghost and Super Guy sucks at Super Heroing.

Seeking Attention is passe · 12-03-2006, 08:12 PM

Part 6:

Part 7:

Character bio's coming soon!

Alex · 12-03-2006, 08:39 PM

Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! *gets slapped*

You should have, like, a Rhyme Guy! He should be purple.

12-03-2006, 05:07 PM	#1
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Shy Guy Adventures! Shy Guy Adventures is a comic series that I post on NSider and I decided to post it here too.If you have been to the Mario NSider boards you might have noticed the comic Shy Guy Tale.I use the same sprites and backgrounds and he let us use em so dont think this as a rip off.Yes I know there isnt much humour but im not good with humour when it comes to comics. Prolog.: Part 1: I didn't use speech bubbles because it would mess up the comic.It shouldn't be to hard to read. Edit: Irby isn't me.

12-03-2006, 06:09 PM	#6
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Edit: Bah! Last edited by Totally Kennerson; 12-03-2006 at 06:16 PM.

12-03-2006, 07:05 PM	#14
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Part 4: Part 5: The orange Shy Guy is a user made Shy Guy.A submission.Same with Ghost Guy.Ghost Guy is a Guy who THINKS he is a ghost and Super Guy(The orange guy) is a Super Hero who always messes things up. Last edited by Seeking Attention is passe; 12-03-2006 at 07:13 PM.

12-03-2006, 08:12 PM	#19
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Part 6: Part 7: Character bio's coming soon! Last edited by Seeking Attention is passe; 12-03-2006 at 08:20 PM.

12-03-2006, 05:44 PM	#2
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Hmm...It's ok, but you should use speech bubbles, especially in the town scene. It was sorta hard to read that part. The Prolog was a good introduction for the charatcers but nothing really happens in part 1. Irby just slaps a bad guy. It was funny, though. Make sure to spell check and use correct grammer! Hey, can I appear in your comic since I'm a Shy Guy? I can make you a Lord Kenny Shy Guy sprite that matches those.

12-03-2006, 05:55 PM	#3
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Sure.I can always use submissions! I can give you the sprite sheet if you want.A blank one.

12-03-2006, 05:57 PM	#4
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Ok! Just email it to me or somthing, and I'll give you the sprites later today. =)

12-03-2006, 06:07 PM	#5
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Ill give em to you later when im not lazy.

12-03-2006, 06:12 PM	#7
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Parts 2 and 3: Part 3:

12-03-2006, 06:15 PM	#8
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Ok, now its starting to get interesting. Lemon Guy... Lime Guy... Is Citrus Man going to show up? =)

12-03-2006, 06:30 PM	#9
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I have up to part 12.

12-03-2006, 06:42 PM	#10
X-3 No avatar, no justice, no dreams, no hope! Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,508 Thanks: 733 Thanked 1,158 Times in 751 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Needs improvement. Like text bubbles. And it needs a better plot/better humor(If this is a comedy).

12-03-2006, 06:57 PM	#11
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	This isnt a comedy and speech bubbles would make the comic longer and harder to make.I have reasons.

12-03-2006, 07:00 PM	#12
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	You don't need text "bubbles", but like, put them in a small, white box. This way, we can see the words better, and it will take up as little space as possible!

12-03-2006, 07:02 PM	#13
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Ill TRY and fix the speech problems but don't hold your breath because you might die.

12-03-2006, 07:20 PM	#15
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	You see, compare the text on the white backrounds to the text on the other backrounds. The storys kinda...well, its not bad, but you could explain some stuff, like why Irby keeps teleporting in part 5, and why Super Guy dosn't save Irby.

12-03-2006, 07:25 PM	#16
Link 456 Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Land of Love Gender: Posts: 2,298 Thanks: 86 Thanked 74 Times in 58 Posts Blog Entries: 1	There are a few Grammatical errors. And another thing... does Ghost Guy have to be that annoying?

12-03-2006, 07:27 PM	#17
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	It's kinda funny how Ghost Guy stops acting like a ghost when Super Guy appears.

12-03-2006, 07:32 PM	#18
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	The teleportation in this is random. Ghost Guy isnt really a ghost and Super Guy sucks at Super Heroing.

12-03-2006, 08:39 PM	#20
Alex Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Tally-ho! Gender: Posts: 2,727 Thanks: 130 Thanked 100 Times in 87 Posts	Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! gets slapped You should have, like, a Rhyme Guy! He should be purple.