my first ever sprite

ROBERT2011 · 12-10-2006, 03:58 PM

I used the headbang smilie as a template and the star is from super mario bros.

Link 456 · 12-10-2006, 04:02 PM

It's not too bad. The least you could have done was changed the yellow to a skin-toned colour. You could have also connected a couple of body parts (The arm joints are not completly attached to the torso, for example)

Mikhail Gorbachev · 12-10-2006, 04:08 PM

Ugh. It's terrible. Jpeg, subpixeling, the pixel density differs...
Worst sprite I've seen in a very long time.

Spritedude · 12-10-2006, 04:45 PM

Ahhhh! It burns!

***Ace Mercury*** · 12-10-2006, 07:13 PM

It's... it's large.

Vapor · 12-15-2006, 07:24 PM

It doesn't really need to be that large, try shrinking it a bit and it might look less pixelated.

Beam Yosho the Drunkard · 12-23-2006, 04:35 PM

Face and arms copypasted from already existing smiley.

That's real lame, man

Frumie · 12-23-2006, 04:53 PM

(reffering to the sprites size) RUN! IT'S SPRITEZILLA!

**Galefore** · 12-24-2006, 01:06 PM

It sucks. Sucks badly. I'm sorry, but if MY sprites got torn apart by Glyph Phoenix and his cronies, yours will not see mercy. First off:

-The sprite is mainly copy past of other materials and is enlarged for 'effect'. No. Don't do that.

-The format sucks, but not many formats DON'T suck, so let that one slide.

- It looks choppy and done in five seconds. A REALLY good sprite could take weeks, and even a moderate one can take days on end.

- The body is unproportional. The legs and feet look like badly placed Mike & Ike candies. They collide with the clothing and come out to look unnatural. That is REALLY unnerving and loses you several points.

I would have given you points for trying, but you don't even seem to have given this ANY effort. Please do try harder.

1/10

Please take this as constructive critisism. Be a man. Improve. You have a bit of potential, buried somewhere down there.

**Valigarmander** · 12-24-2006, 01:56 PM

Luigiman7 · 12-29-2006, 08:38 PM

12-10-2006, 03:58 PM	#1
ROBERT2011 Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A magical place Gender: Posts: 1,139 Thanks: 29 Thanked 42 Times in 24 Posts	my first ever sprite I used the headbang smilie as a template and the star is from super mario bros.

12-24-2006, 01:56 PM	#10
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Meh.

12-29-2006, 08:38 PM	#11
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	wtf?

12-10-2006, 04:02 PM	#2
Link 456 Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: The Land of Love Gender: Posts: 2,306 Thanks: 86 Thanked 74 Times in 58 Posts Blog Entries: 1	It's not too bad. The least you could have done was changed the yellow to a skin-toned colour. You could have also connected a couple of body parts (The arm joints are not completly attached to the torso, for example)

12-10-2006, 04:08 PM	#3
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	Ugh. It's terrible. Jpeg, subpixeling, the pixel density differs... Worst sprite I've seen in a very long time.

12-10-2006, 04:45 PM	#4
Spritedude Calibrating... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Centennial State Gender: Posts: 1,425 Thanks: 70 Thanked 84 Times in 51 Posts	Ahhhh! It burns!

12-10-2006, 07:13 PM	#5
*Ace Mercury* Marshmallow Knight ☆ Supermod Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Southern Ontario Gender: Posts: 23,275 Thanks: 568 Thanked 3,297 Times in 1,582 Posts Blog Entries: 1	It's... it's large.

12-15-2006, 07:24 PM	#6
Vapor Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: WHERE IT'S AT Gender: Posts: 5,211 Thanks: 314 Thanked 413 Times in 249 Posts	It doesn't really need to be that large, try shrinking it a bit and it might look less pixelated.

12-23-2006, 04:35 PM	#7
Beam Yosho the Drunkard Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: The oversized rock of Hawaii. Gender: Posts: 5,670 Thanks: 5 Thanked 17 Times in 13 Posts	Face and arms copypasted from already existing smiley. That's real lame, man

12-23-2006, 04:53 PM	#8
Frumie Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,926 Thanks: 310 Thanked 221 Times in 147 Posts	(reffering to the sprites size) RUN! IT'S SPRITEZILLA!

12-24-2006, 01:06 PM	#9
Galefore EXPLOSION GOD OF MUSIC Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Some studio somewhere Gender: Posts: 8,275 Thanks: 1,361 Thanked 826 Times in 535 Posts Blog Entries: 5	It sucks. Sucks badly. I'm sorry, but if MY sprites got torn apart by Glyph Phoenix and his cronies, yours will not see mercy. First off: -The sprite is mainly copy past of other materials and is enlarged for 'effect'. No. Don't do that. -The format sucks, but not many formats DON'T suck, so let that one slide. - It looks choppy and done in five seconds. A REALLY good sprite could take weeks, and even a moderate one can take days on end. - The body is unproportional. The legs and feet look like badly placed Mike & Ike candies. They collide with the clothing and come out to look unnatural. That is REALLY unnerving and loses you several points. I would have given you points for trying, but you don't even seem to have given this ANY effort. Please do try harder. 1/10 Please take this as constructive critisism. Be a man. Improve. You have a bit of potential, buried somewhere down there.