MY FIRST COMIC!

Mr. Andy_Man · 12-11-2006, 10:07 PM

This is my very first comic!

The color is a little distorted, sorry about that(Damn you GIF files!!

)

Dont crit badly please. This will be part of a seires.(at least I hope

)

(Put your mouse over the comic and a little button will pop up in the bottom right corner of it. Click it to make it larger)

I got the scorpion sprite from Mortal Kombat Warehouse: Ultimate Mortal Kombat 3: Scorpion

Mikhail Gorbachev · 12-11-2006, 10:11 PM

If I could see the comic, I'd comment on it.

t3hDarkness · 12-12-2006, 12:15 AM

Since that site has it, you can post it here too.

Mr. Andy_Man · 12-12-2006, 06:56 AM

I tried, its not coming up for some weird reason. So just click the link to see it.

Seeking Attention · 12-12-2006, 07:36 AM

I clicked it and nothing.Also don't use crappy sh*tway(ripway) use photobucket.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 12-12-2006, 08:31 AM

^^That's what I did in the first place. And, yes, ripway is terrible.

***Ace Mercury*** · 12-12-2006, 12:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nintedo_Freak!

The thing about this link is that it does not point to your picture. Instead, it points to a page which has your picture. This page requires us to log in on your account to view it. Therefore, it is a terrible link, and no one will see anything that you have created.

Mr. Andy_Man · 12-12-2006, 02:28 PM

Crap. Well ill just try and use the photo bucket thing Irby sugessted

Mr. Andy_Man · 12-12-2006, 02:38 PM

Photobucket worked!!

Thanks Irby!!

Seeking Attention · 12-12-2006, 03:12 PM

Your welcome! You seem to be new here so you probably don't know the rule about double posting.Don't double post it pisses people off.Use the edit button instead.Only double post when you want to bump a topic that you made.Anyway I can't wait to see the comic!

Frumie · 12-12-2006, 05:21 PM

Pros:

Stick Figures are awesome.
Cameo by a character who I think is from Mortal Kombat.

Cons:

99% of all characters are stick guys.
Terrible grammar.
Graphics are terrible.

3.5/10 Grinnies.

Totally Kennerson · 12-12-2006, 06:18 PM

I don't get it

Seeking Attention · 12-12-2006, 06:22 PM

The spriting was good I guess but could have used humour.

Totally Kennerson · 12-12-2006, 06:23 PM

Or maybe a actual story...

pikachu1 · 12-13-2006, 02:58 PM

it's cool

Mr. Andy_Man · 12-13-2006, 03:35 PM

MY SECOND INSTALLMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!

I added more humor

Totally Kennerson · 12-13-2006, 04:54 PM

Where?

Spritedude · 12-14-2006, 12:44 AM

Not bad, but not good either. Kinda random and messy. Noob Saibot FTW!

Dylan · 12-14-2006, 04:37 PM

- You need to work on your fire and blood effects.
- Try to avoid using those big eyes.
- In the panel where the Mortal Kombat guy gets stepped on, the stick figure's leg is skinnier close-up than it is pulled back.

Other than that, not too shabby. Keep up the good work.

-Dylan

Seeking Attention · 12-14-2006, 04:48 PM

I like the style of the comics.^_^

12-11-2006, 10:07 PM	#1
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	MY FIRST COMIC! This is my very first comic! The color is a little distorted, sorry about that(Damn you GIF files!! ) Dont crit badly please. This will be part of a seires.(at least I hope ) (Put your mouse over the comic and a little button will pop up in the bottom right corner of it. Click it to make it larger) I got the scorpion sprite from Mortal Kombat Warehouse: Ultimate Mortal Kombat 3: Scorpion Last edited by Mr. Andy_Man; 12-12-2006 at 02:37 PM.

12-11-2006, 10:11 PM	#2
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	If I could see the comic, I'd comment on it.

12-12-2006, 12:15 AM	#3
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Since that site has it, you can post it here too.

12-12-2006, 06:56 AM	#4
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	I tried, its not coming up for some weird reason. So just click the link to see it.

12-12-2006, 07:36 AM	#5
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I clicked it and nothing.Also don't use crappy sh*tway(ripway) use photobucket.

12-12-2006, 08:31 AM	#6
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	^^That's what I did in the first place. And, yes, ripway is terrible.

12-12-2006, 02:28 PM	#8
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Crap. Well ill just try and use the photo bucket thing Irby sugessted

12-12-2006, 02:38 PM	#9
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Photobucket worked!! Thanks Irby!!

12-12-2006, 03:12 PM	#10
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Your welcome! You seem to be new here so you probably don't know the rule about double posting.Don't double post it pisses people off.Use the edit button instead.Only double post when you want to bump a topic that you made.Anyway I can't wait to see the comic!

12-12-2006, 05:21 PM	#11
Frumie Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,926 Thanks: 310 Thanked 221 Times in 147 Posts	Pros: Stick Figures are awesome. Cameo by a character who I think is from Mortal Kombat. Cons: 99% of all characters are stick guys. Terrible grammar. Graphics are terrible. 3.5/10 Grinnies.

12-12-2006, 06:18 PM	#12
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	I don't get it

12-12-2006, 06:22 PM	#13
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	The spriting was good I guess but could have used humour.

12-12-2006, 06:23 PM	#14
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Or maybe a actual story...

12-13-2006, 02:58 PM	#15
pikachu1 Newbie Join Date: Dec 2006 Gender: Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	it's cool

12-13-2006, 03:35 PM	#16
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	MY SECOND INSTALLMENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I added more humor

12-13-2006, 04:54 PM	#17
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Where?

12-14-2006, 12:44 AM	#18
Spritedude Calibrating... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Centennial State Gender: Posts: 1,425 Thanks: 70 Thanked 84 Times in 51 Posts	Not bad, but not good either. Kinda random and messy. Noob Saibot FTW!

12-14-2006, 04:37 PM	#19
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	- You need to work on your fire and blood effects. - Try to avoid using those big eyes. - In the panel where the Mortal Kombat guy gets stepped on, the stick figure's leg is skinnier close-up than it is pulled back. Other than that, not too shabby. Keep up the good work. -Dylan

12-14-2006, 04:48 PM	#20
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I like the style of the comics.^_^