X-3's CrashMan Comics

**X-3** · 01-26-2007, 07:25 PM

Expect to see a actual background next time.

This is a test. If this fails very miserably, then this'll end.

Mushi · 01-26-2007, 07:26 PM

I expect it to suck. Don't expect anymore comments.

...Just kidding.

Mushi · 01-26-2007, 09:10 PM

I think this was funny, just don't use the fact that the spriting sucks as a means to make jokes so often, k?

**X-3** · 01-26-2007, 10:27 PM

Thank you for the criticism, MC.

New comic. Not much happens here, just introducing some of Crash's co-stars.

Mushi · 01-26-2007, 10:51 PM

You need to be more careful about text overlapping text, but besides that I get the jokes and they're funny. Keep it up.

**X-3** · 01-27-2007, 02:08 PM

Just showing the personalities of the co-stars.

This may be trouble for Crash...

Seeking Attention · 01-27-2007, 03:25 PM

Pretty good. Remember to use text bubbles for some scenes.

UltimateGamer178 · 01-27-2007, 03:26 PM

Pretty good.

**X-3** · 01-27-2007, 03:59 PM

CrystalMan has one big weakness...

**X-3** · 01-28-2007, 04:56 PM

I didn't really need to DP, but it'll get more attention this way.

**Valigarmander** · 01-28-2007, 05:15 PM

Cool comic. I wish I had played more than just one Megaman game.

**X-3** · 01-28-2007, 07:15 PM

Bum Bum Bum?

Mushi · 01-28-2007, 10:47 PM

dun dun dun/bumbumbum

Pretty good so far, keep it up, and soon you will have an entertaining series on your hands.

**X-3** · 01-29-2007, 08:02 PM

Who is this mysterious newcomer? What happened to MegaMan? What does Dr. Wily have planned?

Hell if I know.

Mushi · 01-29-2007, 09:15 PM

Rumpelstiltskin?

Mikhail Gorbachev · 01-29-2007, 09:55 PM

I'm gonna be honest here.
It's bad.
I'm not good at giving criticism. *rants about what if Glyph were here*
...but I'll give you some advice.
The panels are poorly done and the sprites often cut into the ground, or the ground cuts into the sprites. The red and orange parts of the fire cuts into the ground but the yellow doesn't. I see how this could make a 3d effect, but without the yellow it's terrible. In general, it's sloppy and there are stray pixels here and there. You could also put more effort into your backgrounds and effects. I don't think I would be able to tell that was a bush unless it was labelled. The textboxes need work as well. And... the plot seems... generic and incoherent. That's all I have to say about that.

**X-3** · 01-30-2007, 06:53 AM

^Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to get these to be better.

Right now, however, we'll have to do with this.

Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit · 02-18-2007, 01:48 AM

The sad thing is that even though I want to puke vicously, this is the best comic I've seen on this forum; including my comics, which still make me think about suicide.

I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason.

Also, If I'm correct, the reference to the "leet language" is a joke from "Bob & George"? If it's not, I'll be willing to admit my error and be known as the biggest retard in the Milky Way Galaxy.

FXGlobal · 02-18-2007, 01:52 AM

^Again, who the hell are you? And, check Vlaigarmanders VGF Chicanery; It's the bestest-est-est. Don't bump old topics.

**Valigarmander** · 02-18-2007, 10:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit

I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason.

I heartily agree.

01-26-2007, 07:25 PM	#1
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	X-3's CrashMan Comics Expect to see a actual background next time. This is a test. If this fails very miserably, then this'll end.

01-26-2007, 09:10 PM	#3
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	I'm making a double post to comment. Yay. I think this was funny, just don't use the fact that the spriting sucks as a means to make jokes so often, k?

01-27-2007, 02:08 PM	#6
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Just showing the personalities of the co-stars. This may be trouble for Crash... Last edited by X-3; 01-27-2007 at 03:20 PM.

01-28-2007, 10:47 PM	#13
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	dun dun dun/bumbumbum Pretty good so far, keep it up, and soon you will have an entertaining series on your hands. __________________

01-29-2007, 09:15 PM	#15
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	Rumpelstiltskin? __________________

01-26-2007, 07:26 PM	#2
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	I expect it to suck. Don't expect anymore comments. ...Just kidding.

01-26-2007, 10:27 PM	#4
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Thank you for the criticism, MC. New comic. Not much happens here, just introducing some of Crash's co-stars.

01-26-2007, 10:51 PM	#5
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	You need to be more careful about text overlapping text, but besides that I get the jokes and they're funny. Keep it up.

01-27-2007, 03:25 PM	#7
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Pretty good. Remember to use text bubbles for some scenes.

01-27-2007, 03:26 PM	#8
UltimateGamer178 Guest Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a pizza box under the Brooklyn Bridge Gender: Posts: 1,495 Thanks: 7 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Pretty good.

01-27-2007, 03:59 PM	#9
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	CrystalMan has one big weakness...

01-28-2007, 04:56 PM	#10
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	I didn't really need to DP, but it'll get more attention this way.

01-28-2007, 05:15 PM	#11
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Cool comic. I wish I had played more than just one Megaman game.

01-28-2007, 07:15 PM	#12
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Bum Bum Bum?

01-29-2007, 08:02 PM	#14
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Who is this mysterious newcomer? What happened to MegaMan? What does Dr. Wily have planned? Hell if I know.

01-29-2007, 09:55 PM	#16
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	I'm gonna be honest here. It's bad. I'm not good at giving criticism. rants about what if Glyph were here ...but I'll give you some advice. The panels are poorly done and the sprites often cut into the ground, or the ground cuts into the sprites. The red and orange parts of the fire cuts into the ground but the yellow doesn't. I see how this could make a 3d effect, but without the yellow it's terrible. In general, it's sloppy and there are stray pixels here and there. You could also put more effort into your backgrounds and effects. I don't think I would be able to tell that was a bush unless it was labelled. The textboxes need work as well. And... the plot seems... generic and incoherent. That's all I have to say about that.

01-30-2007, 06:53 AM	#17
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	^Thank you for your criticism. I'll try to get these to be better. Right now, however, we'll have to do with this.

02-18-2007, 01:48 AM	#18
Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Seattle Gender: Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	"You just had to stand there licking the jewel!" - Luigi, TPBA (12/24/03) The sad thing is that even though I want to puke vicously, this is the best comic I've seen on this forum; including my comics, which still make me think about suicide. I do like the "Yar! Me text be yellow!", for some reason. Also, If I'm correct, the reference to the "leet language" is a joke from "Bob & George"? If it's not, I'll be willing to admit my error and be known as the biggest retard in the Milky Way Galaxy.

02-18-2007, 01:52 AM	#19
FXGlobal Member Join Date: May 2006 Gender: Posts: 1,511 Thanks: 52 Thanked 41 Times in 34 Posts	^Again, who the hell are you? And, check Vlaigarmanders VGF Chicanery; It's the bestest-est-est. Don't bump old topics.