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Seeking Attention is passe · 03-12-2007, 09:11 PM

Ok this sucks dude. Dont make your characters say things like: U for you, R for are, 2 for two/too/to. Thats retard talk and this comic will be more retarded if you keep making "ur" characters talk like that.

Panfan · 03-12-2007, 09:12 PM

omg i dont c ne speelin or graemr erorz

Seeking Attention is passe · 03-12-2007, 09:15 PM

zomg retart tak

SephirothKirby · 03-12-2007, 09:20 PM

I can't tell if this guy really doesn't know how to type, or if he's just doing this on purpose.

In any case, please, gouge out my eyes.

BLUEDASH2 · 03-14-2007, 11:46 PM

kinda im kinda new w/ this stuff and my typing is supposed to fit my frames but at least luigi's fireball looks decent right?

got any ideas for the fight???

t3hDarkness · 03-15-2007, 12:44 AM

Wait one winute. You may have good intentions, but please work on a few things first.

You seem to be having trouble making text fit, therefore make your panels bigger.

Second your explosions are a bit blah (yes, Luigi's fireball looks fine). There are games and resources that will have these as sprites for you, just do not go overboard with them.

Third, please run everything through a spell checker first, better yet, sketch a storyboard freehand and make a script in Word.

I may not be a definative source, but these things should help you out a bit.

BLUEDASH2 · 03-15-2007, 02:45 PM

ill keep that in mind but what size should my panels be idk what size i like 10x10 but its to small so help!

BLUEDASH2 · 03-15-2007, 05:09 PM

heres part of the next one tell me if its better

md luigi stands for mack daddy luigi

t3hDarkness · 03-15-2007, 05:11 PM

Getting better, but try to use an easier to read font, maybe Veranda, Arial, or Comic Sans MS. Also, you do not need to tell us when he rolls his eyes, we can see that you took the time to change the expressions. This a vast improvement.

BLUEDASH2 · 03-15-2007, 05:15 PM

thank you but does anyone know where to get explosion sprites?

t3hDarkness · 03-15-2007, 05:25 PM

I have some fireballs from KoF, let me dig up a link.

Actually, I don't think those will fit, just google around for a while or check out your favorite sprite site.

Seeking Attention is passe · 03-15-2007, 06:53 PM

That was better then the others.

BLUEDASH2 · 03-15-2007, 08:47 PM

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j2...-mariospad.jpg heres my new panel (addition to second)

BLUEDASH2 · 03-16-2007, 01:13 PM

here it is strip 3 (keep in mind i changed the name to mvl wtf)

supersmashking445 · 03-18-2007, 01:26 AM

sorry guys i lost the fifth (technacly fourth) issue of mario v luigi wtf -bluedash2/supersmashking445

BLUEDASH2 · 03-20-2007, 10:53 PM

im almost done ill post the 6th strip tomorrow-- im actualy going to restart the series from schatch but i need an editor so if anyone will assist me email me at tippmannpro3@hotmail.com

BLUEDASH2 · 04-29-2007, 07:32 PM

here it is my remade first part of mario vs luigi wtf

if your wondring luigi is out of the last panel for a reson ill show you why in the next strip

Frumie · 04-29-2007, 11:19 PM

I can barely read what that was saying. Word balloons and better spelling please.

BLUEDASH2 · 07-22-2007, 01:07 AM

this comic is over my band is a more important priority you can lock this topic

Glyph Phoenix · 07-22-2007, 03:05 AM

I'm glad you made the right choice in the end. You are not the only one with vengeance long abated, and I may be tempted to return myself should you continue this. I was the scourge of this land once.

03-14-2007, 11:46 PM	#25
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	kinda im kinda new w/ this stuff and my typing is supposed to fit my frames but at least luigi's fireball looks decent right? got any ideas for the fight??? Last edited by BLUEDASH2; 03-14-2007 at 11:46 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

03-20-2007, 10:53 PM	#36
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	im almost done ill post the 6th strip tomorrow-- im actualy going to restart the series from schatch but i need an editor so if anyone will assist me email me at tippmannpro3@hotmail.com Last edited by BLUEDASH2; 04-29-2007 at 12:14 PM.

03-12-2007, 09:11 PM	#21
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Ok this sucks dude. Dont make your characters say things like: U for you, R for are, 2 for two/too/to. Thats retard talk and this comic will be more retarded if you keep making "ur" characters talk like that.

03-12-2007, 09:12 PM	#22
Panfan Analrapist Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I'm awesome, and I **** dolphins Gender: Posts: 18,540 Thanks: 1,384 Thanked 2,201 Times in 1,311 Posts Blog Entries: 15	omg i dont c ne speelin or graemr erorz

03-12-2007, 09:15 PM	#23
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	zomg retart tak

03-12-2007, 09:20 PM	#24
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,055 Thanks: 365 Thanked 737 Times in 433 Posts	I can't tell if this guy really doesn't know how to type, or if he's just doing this on purpose. In any case, please, gouge out my eyes.

03-15-2007, 12:44 AM	#26
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Wait one winute. You may have good intentions, but please work on a few things first. You seem to be having trouble making text fit, therefore make your panels bigger. Second your explosions are a bit blah (yes, Luigi's fireball looks fine). There are games and resources that will have these as sprites for you, just do not go overboard with them. Third, please run everything through a spell checker first, better yet, sketch a storyboard freehand and make a script in Word. I may not be a definative source, but these things should help you out a bit.

03-15-2007, 02:45 PM	#27
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ill keep that in mind but what size should my panels be idk what size i like 10x10 but its to small so help!

03-15-2007, 05:09 PM	#28
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	heres part of the next one tell me if its better md luigi stands for mack daddy luigi

03-15-2007, 05:11 PM	#29
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Getting better, but try to use an easier to read font, maybe Veranda, Arial, or Comic Sans MS. Also, you do not need to tell us when he rolls his eyes, we can see that you took the time to change the expressions. This a vast improvement.

03-15-2007, 05:15 PM	#30
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thank you but does anyone know where to get explosion sprites?

03-15-2007, 05:25 PM	#31
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	I have some fireballs from KoF, let me dig up a link. Actually, I don't think those will fit, just google around for a while or check out your favorite sprite site.

03-15-2007, 06:53 PM	#32
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	That was better then the others.

03-15-2007, 08:47 PM	#33
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j2...-mariospad.jpg heres my new panel (addition to second)

03-16-2007, 01:13 PM	#34
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	here it is strip 3 (keep in mind i changed the name to mvl wtf)

03-18-2007, 01:26 AM	#35
supersmashking445 Newbie Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Spring Valley Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	sorry guys i lost the fifth (technacly fourth) issue of mario v luigi wtf -bluedash2/supersmashking445

04-29-2007, 07:32 PM	#37
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	here it is my remade first part of mario vs luigi wtf if your wondring luigi is out of the last panel for a reson ill show you why in the next strip

04-29-2007, 11:19 PM	#38
Frumie Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Planet X Gender: Posts: 3,926 Thanks: 310 Thanked 221 Times in 147 Posts	I can barely read what that was saying. Word balloons and better spelling please.

07-22-2007, 01:07 AM	#39
BLUEDASH2 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Gender: Posts: 186 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	this comic is over my band is a more important priority you can lock this topic

07-22-2007, 03:05 AM	#40
Glyph Phoenix Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Gender: Posts: 1,774 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	I'm glad you made the right choice in the end. You are not the only one with vengeance long abated, and I may be tempted to return myself should you continue this. I was the scourge of this land once.