Super Mario World Adventures

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 02:19 PM

Tell me what you think. I have up to 9 done and will post them as I get comments.Click here

SephirothKirby · 03-03-2007, 02:26 PM

So you're name is...Fat Cat on SmackJeeves?

Then why do you have another one called "Irby?"

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 02:42 PM

Huh? I have one account there. Thats the Irby one... Oops link was wrong.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:07 PM

Okay, here's what I think:

It doesn't say very much about one's comic-making skills when, instead of having one strong comic, he has a dozen incomplete ones. I think instead of making a new comic every week, you should stick to one. What, you've already made Shy Guy Adventures, Evil Irby, Ice Warrior, and now this. I say one comic should be enough to occupy one's time.

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:08 PM

I still make Shy Guy Adventures but I dont bother posting it here. I stopped Ice Warrior and no one liked Evil Irby so we stopped that.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:10 PM

Why'd you stop Ice Warrior? And what's the point of making SGA if you don't even post it?

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:11 PM

I post SGA at another forum.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:13 PM

Ah.

Well, I ask again, why'd you stop Ice Warrior?

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:14 PM

No one really paid attention to it.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:15 PM

I did.

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:16 PM

I know.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:18 PM

Oh. I see. I don't really matter.

Well, that's okay. I'll just go read Lord Kenny's or SK's comic. Hmph.

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:19 PM

Ok....

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 03:20 PM

*sob* t3h sex moustache is no more... *sob*

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 03:21 PM

Dude I wasnt going to keep a comic running for one fan>_>

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 06:12 PM

Comic 2. Photobucket converted it to a stupid jpg. Mario tells Luigi to hit the block and eat the mushroom because he thinks Luigi is hungry. However Mario is impatient and hits the block for him and Luigi ends up eating a poison Mushroom and Mario leaves him behind because he thinks Luigi is annoying and doesn't want Luigi following him.

**Valigarmander** · 03-03-2007, 08:56 PM

Hey, look at me! I'm a critic!

It isn't as good when you have to explain what's happening.

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 09:33 PM

Yeah I know. I just didnt want anyone confuzzled. Some of the first few comics seem a bit rushed but I tend to do that sometimes. Im slowing it done though.

Totally Kennerson · 03-03-2007, 09:34 PM

It kind of suddenly stops at the end. Its like it was supposed to go on, but someone erased the ending. It could be a bit longer, too. You should try for at least 15-20 panels.

Seeking Attention · 03-03-2007, 09:41 PM

That was the ending of that comic. The next comic continues off of that comic. And I host these at Photobucket. If I made 15-20 panels Photobucket would make it smaller.

03-03-2007, 02:19 PM	#1
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Super Mario World Adventures Tell me what you think. I have up to 9 done and will post them as I get comments.Click here Last edited by Seeking Attention; 03-03-2007 at 02:43 PM.

03-03-2007, 03:21 PM	#15
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Dude I wasnt going to keep a comic running for one fan>_> Last edited by Seeking Attention; 03-03-2007 at 06:11 PM.

03-03-2007, 02:26 PM	#2
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	So you're name is...Fat Cat on SmackJeeves? Then why do you have another one called "Irby?"

03-03-2007, 02:42 PM	#3
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Huh? I have one account there. Thats the Irby one... Oops link was wrong.

03-03-2007, 03:07 PM	#4
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Okay, here's what I think: It doesn't say very much about one's comic-making skills when, instead of having one strong comic, he has a dozen incomplete ones. I think instead of making a new comic every week, you should stick to one. What, you've already made Shy Guy Adventures, Evil Irby, Ice Warrior, and now this. I say one comic should be enough to occupy one's time.

03-03-2007, 03:08 PM	#5
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I still make Shy Guy Adventures but I dont bother posting it here. I stopped Ice Warrior and no one liked Evil Irby so we stopped that.

03-03-2007, 03:10 PM	#6
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Why'd you stop Ice Warrior? And what's the point of making SGA if you don't even post it?

03-03-2007, 03:11 PM	#7
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I post SGA at another forum.

03-03-2007, 03:13 PM	#8
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Ah. Well, I ask again, why'd you stop Ice Warrior?

03-03-2007, 03:14 PM	#9
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	No one really paid attention to it.

03-03-2007, 03:15 PM	#10
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	I did.

03-03-2007, 03:16 PM	#11
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	I know.

03-03-2007, 03:18 PM	#12
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Oh. I see. I don't really matter. Well, that's okay. I'll just go read Lord Kenny's or SK's comic. Hmph.

03-03-2007, 03:19 PM	#13
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Ok....

03-03-2007, 03:20 PM	#14
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	sob t3h sex moustache is no more... sob

03-03-2007, 06:12 PM	#16
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Comic 2. Photobucket converted it to a stupid jpg. Mario tells Luigi to hit the block and eat the mushroom because he thinks Luigi is hungry. However Mario is impatient and hits the block for him and Luigi ends up eating a poison Mushroom and Mario leaves him behind because he thinks Luigi is annoying and doesn't want Luigi following him.

03-03-2007, 08:56 PM	#17
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Hey, look at me! I'm a critic! It isn't as good when you have to explain what's happening.

03-03-2007, 09:33 PM	#18
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Yeah I know. I just didnt want anyone confuzzled. Some of the first few comics seem a bit rushed but I tend to do that sometimes. Im slowing it done though.

03-03-2007, 09:34 PM	#19
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	It kind of suddenly stops at the end. Its like it was supposed to go on, but someone erased the ending. It could be a bit longer, too. You should try for at least 15-20 panels.

03-03-2007, 09:41 PM	#20
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	That was the ending of that comic. The next comic continues off of that comic. And I host these at Photobucket. If I made 15-20 panels Photobucket would make it smaller.