My first comic: Starring Luigi, Goomba and Zoldor the Shy Guy

TheEvilDM · 03-08-2007, 02:33 PM

Edit: Mature language ahead! If you don't care about the occasional drop of the Fbomb then read on, but if you have meek lil' virgin ears proceed with caution.
Also, I'm not sure how to censor the lang. w/out editing the actual images...
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Aight! It's time to show you guys my spiffy comic that I've been working on for the last couple of days or so. Go free time.

I decided that I liked the idea of taking screenshots (though in my later comics I begin to incorportate actual sprites a little more--more to be posted later on that topic) from Nintendo games to make a more "kinda 3d type comic thingy" It's my first one. Ever.

The storyline is from my RP group (tabletop two nights a week)- from a game we played from Sept of last year until just recently.

Splash page = page 0 and not part of the comic.

I couldn't get photobucket to put the images in order- hopefully I can figure that out later.

Ok, enough stalling. Here it is. Tell me whatcha think

Kefka750 - Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting

Seeking Attention · 03-08-2007, 02:54 PM

This is pretty cool. Do you like go on the web, take screens then paste the character in a background kinda thing?

TheEvilDM · 03-08-2007, 03:03 PM

Yup. I also have some origional sprites that I work with, or manipulate pre-existing ones as well as the screenshots, they appear in the story later though. The program I use is called the GIMP -- very similar to Photoshop.

Seeking Attention · 03-08-2007, 03:06 PM

Im getting GIMP soon so I might try somefin like this. Not right now though. Anyway continue but your going to have to censor the F and S words because the mods/admins will get mad.

TheEvilDM · 03-08-2007, 03:09 PM

Ooops

Guess I'll add a disclaimer to my first post.

Seeking Attention · 03-08-2007, 03:25 PM

From now on just put a * instead of a U in the F word or put a * instead of I in the S word.

TheEvilDM · 03-08-2007, 03:32 PM

Lol ok.

Wow, I got a quoting lesson AND a swearing lesson today!

**Valigarmander** · 03-08-2007, 03:43 PM

Looks cool. I'll try to read it soon, but right now I have to go.

Also, I'd suggest Smack Jeeves Webcomic Hosting.

Seeking Attention · 03-08-2007, 03:45 PM

Or try Tinypic. Tinypic NEVER shrinks the images but Photobucket will if its to big of an image.

SephirothKirby · 03-08-2007, 06:23 PM

Feh, it's kind of amateurish. Then again, there's not much else you can do with MS Paint, is there?

My question is- How is this based on D&D? It's actually a two part question.

1) It was a baseball campaign?
2) Classes? Was Mario a Fighter, and Magikoopa a wizard? Koopa a race?

Seeking Attention · 03-08-2007, 07:13 PM

t3hDarkness · 03-08-2007, 07:28 PM

I havn't seen any 3d style sprite comics before, and I can not really say I wish to any more. It most be nearly impossible to match up shaded without photoshop.

Spritedude · 03-08-2007, 07:30 PM

I couldn't really understand what the heck was going on. The panels are all smushed together and the word bubbles were kinda low quality.

Dylan · 03-08-2007, 09:55 PM

^ Agreed. It was almost impossible to read a lot of the text.

-Dylan

TheEvilDM · 03-08-2007, 10:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SephirothKirby

Feh, it's kind of amateurish. Then again, there's not much else you can do with MS Paint, is there?

My question is- How is this based on D&D? It's actually a two part question.

1) It was a baseball campaign?
2) Classes? Was Mario a Fighter, and Magikoopa a wizard? Koopa a race?

Storyline starts with a baseball game, but goes a completely dif direction.

Was based on a RP game with a system called BESM (Big Eyes Small Mouth- universal all purpose anime style RP.)- Not D&D.
Classes in this system are pretty much whatever you want it to be.

*Shrug* It was my first attempt at something I've never tried before. I didn't expect it to be great nor professional. I've also never used photobucket

Totally Kennerson · 03-08-2007, 10:10 PM

It was pretty good. The text could look better, though. I like the comic style though.

03-08-2007, 02:33 PM	#1
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	My first comic: Starring Luigi, Goomba and Zoldor the Shy Guy Edit: Mature language ahead! If you don't care about the occasional drop of the Fbomb then read on, but if you have meek lil' virgin ears proceed with caution. Also, I'm not sure how to censor the lang. w/out editing the actual images... __________________________________________________ ____ Aight! It's time to show you guys my spiffy comic that I've been working on for the last couple of days or so. Go free time. I decided that I liked the idea of taking screenshots (though in my later comics I begin to incorportate actual sprites a little more--more to be posted later on that topic) from Nintendo games to make a more "kinda 3d type comic thingy" It's my first one. Ever. The storyline is from my RP group (tabletop two nights a week)- from a game we played from Sept of last year until just recently. Splash page = page 0 and not part of the comic. I couldn't get photobucket to put the images in order- hopefully I can figure that out later. Ok, enough stalling. Here it is. Tell me whatcha think Kefka750 - Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting Last edited by TheEvilDM; 03-08-2007 at 03:11 PM.

03-08-2007, 02:54 PM	#2
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	This is pretty cool. Do you like go on the web, take screens then paste the character in a background kinda thing?

03-08-2007, 03:03 PM	#3
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	Yup. I also have some origional sprites that I work with, or manipulate pre-existing ones as well as the screenshots, they appear in the story later though. The program I use is called the GIMP -- very similar to Photoshop.

03-08-2007, 03:06 PM	#4
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Im getting GIMP soon so I might try somefin like this. Not right now though. Anyway continue but your going to have to censor the F and S words because the mods/admins will get mad.

03-08-2007, 03:09 PM	#5
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	Ooops Guess I'll add a disclaimer to my first post.

03-08-2007, 03:25 PM	#6
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	From now on just put a * instead of a U in the F word or put a * instead of I in the S word.

03-08-2007, 03:32 PM	#7
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	Lol ok. Wow, I got a quoting lesson AND a swearing lesson today!

03-08-2007, 03:43 PM	#8
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Looks cool. I'll try to read it soon, but right now I have to go. Also, I'd suggest Smack Jeeves Webcomic Hosting.

03-08-2007, 03:45 PM	#9
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Or try Tinypic. Tinypic NEVER shrinks the images but Photobucket will if its to big of an image.

03-08-2007, 06:23 PM	#10
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	Feh, it's kind of amateurish. Then again, there's not much else you can do with MS Paint, is there? My question is- How is this based on D&D? It's actually a two part question. 1) It was a baseball campaign? 2) Classes? Was Mario a Fighter, and Magikoopa a wizard? Koopa a race?

03-08-2007, 07:13 PM	#11
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	...

03-08-2007, 07:28 PM	#12
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	I havn't seen any 3d style sprite comics before, and I can not really say I wish to any more. It most be nearly impossible to match up shaded without photoshop.

03-08-2007, 07:30 PM	#13
Spritedude Calibrating... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: The Centennial State Gender: Posts: 1,425 Thanks: 70 Thanked 84 Times in 51 Posts	I couldn't really understand what the heck was going on. The panels are all smushed together and the word bubbles were kinda low quality.

03-08-2007, 09:55 PM	#14
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	^ Agreed. It was almost impossible to read a lot of the text. -Dylan

03-08-2007, 10:10 PM	#16
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	It was pretty good. The text could look better, though. I like the comic style though.