A comic by me Called "The Lost World"

Mr. Andy_Man · 03-19-2007, 07:31 PM

A comic by me. Its called "The Lost World"

The Color is distorted a little.

Try Saving this pic and opening it in MS Paint to have a better look.

Panfan · 03-19-2007, 08:07 PM

You have Small Backgrounds, Small Sprites, Small Text, basically everything is small.

MC Luigi · 03-19-2007, 08:44 PM

I don't like it.
It's small, the ending was not funny, the color IS distorted, I have no clue why it's calm one second and Doom the next, and it's story remains untold.
The lazy joke was the only thing that keeps me on this page.
I am sorry, but

t3hDarkness · 03-19-2007, 09:12 PM

Drat, I was in the process of creating a doom sprite comic... Back to the drawing board.

Mr. Andy_Man · 03-20-2007, 06:39 AM

It seems that my work has not paid off scince everything has gotten smaller.

Panfan · 03-20-2007, 05:17 PM

Please save as .png instead of .jpg.

***Ace Mercury*** · 03-20-2007, 06:48 PM

I'd work on your presentation more. You have a comic, and it very well could be entertaining, but no one is going to download it, open it with MSPaint, and then zoom in on it. Learn the basics of image files, working with image files, and scaling sprites so that they're large enough to see. Plan the panels so that you don't have a haphazard layout. Learn to delay instant satisfaction by spending a little more time with it; it will show.

Mikhail Gorbachev · 03-20-2007, 08:43 PM

Isn't it "IF THIS IS TRUE?"

Mr. Andy_Man · 03-20-2007, 10:02 PM

Quote:

Posted by MC Luigi

I have no clue why it's calm one second and Doom the next

Well.. the Doom part is really the veiw from the guy with the red cap on(Havent chosen a name yet). And if you played a Doom game, most of the time its calm one second and then its total chaos and it leaves behind a bloody mess.

Anyway i fixed the small comic problem, but i had to cut down on all the panels.

Hope its better.

(Foot Note): Most of the sprites i got from the Spriters recource. And some from Shy guy Kingdom, I dont not claim these as my own and give all the credit to all the people who made/ripped them.

t3hDarkness · 03-20-2007, 10:03 PM

Superior!

Lilac DownDeep · 03-21-2007, 11:37 AM

Better than the other one!

Seeking Attention · 03-21-2007, 02:33 PM

The first comic was meh. The secend comic was better. Keep working on it.

Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit · 03-22-2007, 07:30 PM

I LOVE IT! Surely, only God could create such a great comic! I especially loved the joke where he said "I'm burning!". Who needs the people who actually take time to make a funny punchline when we have brilliant comics like these that simply say "I'm burning!". And this comic brings those "funny" comics to shame! Who needs comedy when you have something as magical as this comic?

Seeking Attention · 03-22-2007, 07:38 PM

Go away JJW.

Panfan · 03-22-2007, 07:38 PM

Not him again...

Lilac DownDeep · 03-23-2007, 04:49 AM

Uh oh. >.>

Mr. Andy_Man · 03-29-2007, 07:59 PM

Wait..I dont get it, whats so bad about JJW? I think he is the only person who actually likes my comic.

t3hDarkness · 03-29-2007, 08:04 PM

Spoiler Below

He was being sarcastic.

blaziken3 · 03-29-2007, 08:05 PM

NEEDS MORE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lilac DownDeep · 03-30-2007, 05:19 AM

-^ STFU noob.

JJW is a person who flames every comic he finds (except for Val's, probably because he's afraid that something negative will happen to him in the comic >D). Anywhom, all of his flaming is not helpful or constructive at all.

If he thinks HE'S so good, why doesn't he actually POST one of his comics? dumb@$$

03-19-2007, 07:31 PM	#1
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	A comic by me Called "The Lost World" A comic by me. Its called "The Lost World" The Color is distorted a little. Try Saving this pic and opening it in MS Paint to have a better look.

03-19-2007, 08:44 PM	#3
MC Luigi Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In YO FACE Gender: Posts: 1,033 Thanks: 41 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts	No No No No!!! I don't like it. It's small, the ending was not funny, the color IS distorted, I have no clue why it's calm one second and Doom the next, and it's story remains untold. The lazy joke was the only thing that keeps me on this page. I am sorry, but

03-20-2007, 06:39 AM	#5
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	It seems that my work has not paid off scince everything has gotten smaller. Last edited by Mr. Andy_Man; 03-20-2007 at 07:26 PM.

03-20-2007, 06:48 PM	#7
*Ace Mercury* Marshmallow Knight ☆ Supermod Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Southern Ontario Gender: Posts: 23,274 Thanks: 568 Thanked 3,297 Times in 1,582 Posts Blog Entries: 1	IF THIS IS SERIOUS THEN HERE IS WHAT YOU DO I'd work on your presentation more. You have a comic, and it very well could be entertaining, but no one is going to download it, open it with MSPaint, and then zoom in on it. Learn the basics of image files, working with image files, and scaling sprites so that they're large enough to see. Plan the panels so that you don't have a haphazard layout. Learn to delay instant satisfaction by spending a little more time with it; it will show. Last edited by Ace Mercury; 03-20-2007 at 06:54 PM.

03-22-2007, 07:30 PM	#13
Nintendo JJW: Mr. Biscuit Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Seattle Gender: Posts: 32 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	"Oh, Wah-ah-ah-ah!" I LOVE IT! Surely, only God could create such a great comic! I especially loved the joke where he said "I'm burning!". Who needs the people who actually take time to make a funny punchline when we have brilliant comics like these that simply say "I'm burning!". And this comic brings those "funny" comics to shame! Who needs comedy when you have something as magical as this comic?

03-19-2007, 08:07 PM	#2
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,804 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,247 Times in 1,337 Posts Blog Entries: 15	You have Small Backgrounds, Small Sprites, Small Text, basically everything is small.

03-19-2007, 09:12 PM	#4
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Drat, I was in the process of creating a doom sprite comic... Back to the drawing board.

03-20-2007, 05:17 PM	#6
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,804 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,247 Times in 1,337 Posts Blog Entries: 15	Please save as .png instead of .jpg.

03-20-2007, 08:43 PM	#8
Mikhail Gorbachev Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Gender: Posts: 9,659 Thanks: 31 Thanked 89 Times in 71 Posts	Isn't it "IF THIS IS TRUE?"

03-20-2007, 10:03 PM	#10
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Superior!

03-21-2007, 11:37 AM	#11
Lilac DownDeep Arceus the Almighty Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius Gender: Posts: 1,320 Thanks: 18 Thanked 37 Times in 25 Posts	Better than the other one!

03-21-2007, 02:33 PM	#12
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	The first comic was meh. The secend comic was better. Keep working on it.

03-22-2007, 07:38 PM	#14
Seeking Attention Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Go away JJW.

03-23-2007, 04:49 AM	#16
Lilac DownDeep Arceus the Almighty Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius Gender: Posts: 1,320 Thanks: 18 Thanked 37 Times in 25 Posts	Uh oh. >.>

03-29-2007, 07:59 PM	#17
Mr. Andy_Man Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Right Behind You with a Knife Gender: Posts: 99 Thanks: 12 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Wait..I dont get it, whats so bad about JJW? I think he is the only person who actually likes my comic.

03-29-2007, 08:04 PM	#18
t3hDarkness Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I weep oily black tears of joy. Gender: Posts: 7,590 Thanks: 119 Thanked 418 Times in 306 Posts Blog Entries: 5	Spoiler Below He was being sarcastic.

03-29-2007, 08:05 PM	#19
blaziken3 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Private Gender: Posts: 28 Thanks: 17 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	NEEDS MORE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

03-30-2007, 05:19 AM	#20
Lilac DownDeep Arceus the Almighty Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius Gender: Posts: 1,320 Thanks: 18 Thanked 37 Times in 25 Posts	-^ STFU noob. JJW is a person who flames every comic he finds (except for Val's, probably because he's afraid that something negative will happen to him in the comic >D). Anywhom, all of his flaming is not helpful or constructive at all. If he thinks HE'S so good, why doesn't he actually POST one of his comics? dumb@$$