Scorch and Fang's Comix

Scorch and Fang · 07-04-2007, 01:01 PM

Uh.... Yo. This is my first first topic here on VGF.

But just cuz I'm a noob doesn't mean I don't know about these forums!

Like the topic says, each comic has there own rating!

G: Fine. Nothing horrible.
PG: Violence or some language.
PG-13: Stronger violence, blood, language
R: LOL. NEVER!

When I say language, I DON'T mean cursing. Something else.

COMICS!!!!
Character Sheet
Comic 1 PG
Comic 2 PG
Comic 3 PG
Comic 4 G
Comic 5 G
Comic 6 PG-13
Comic 7 PG
Comic 8 PG-13
Comic 9 PG-13
Comic 10 G
Comic 11 PG-13
Guest Stars:

Let me explain. Let's say you wanted to be IN a comic.

You P.M me what you'll look like and how many times you wanna be in the comics. P.M. me:
SpriteSheet link:
Personality:
Bad/Good?:
THAT'S a G.S.

ENJOY! I hope.

Rainbow Dash · 07-04-2007, 01:19 PM

The background hurts my eyes.

Scorch and Fang · 07-04-2007, 10:20 PM

Can't see much? (I knew it!)
I'll make the backround a little lighter in the next comics.

Chocolate Ninja · 07-05-2007, 05:41 PM

Err... text should be centered a bit better in the middle of the text-box. Also, I dunno if there's supposed to be a plot going on, but it's very hard to make out visually or textually what's going on in those first few comics. :P

TheEvilDM · 07-06-2007, 08:44 AM

^Yeah that.

Scorch and Fang · 07-06-2007, 10:15 AM

But the rest of the comics are fine?

I bet you're reading them wrong.

You read them from left to right.

TheEvilDM · 07-06-2007, 10:35 AM

Nah, I'm reading em correctly, but the images are really small.
Try a background site for something a little more concretely... not fuzzy.

Scorch and Fang · 07-06-2007, 04:22 PM

They aren't fuzzy to me, and the images aren't THAT small. Hmm..

Well actually, I wanted people's opinions about my comics.
~Cool
~Funny
~Weird
~Etc.

SephirothKirby · 07-06-2007, 04:34 PM

^ It's criticism, and you're going to get it whether you want it or not.

It's actually good for you, it helps you improve.

And this?

Quote:

Well actually, I wanted people's opinions about my comics.
~Cool
~Funny
~Weird
~Etc.

First off, they are opinions. "They are hard to read." is an opinion. Although it does kind of seem like a fact when they phrase it like that...

And secondly, No, dammit. What you just said basically implied

"i ment i wanted good reviews"

Would you like to try again?

And I must comment on this,

Quote:

But the rest of the comics are fine?

I bet you're reading them wrong.

You read them from left to right.

Now I'm not insulting, just commenting. Are you Japanese? Because I don't know why anyone would be grasping at that concept. However, if you don't come from a culture that reads right to left, this is an insult, because it implies we're stupid and we don't know how to read.

...Or that we're from/in Japan.

Scorch and Fang · 07-06-2007, 10:21 PM

I'm not Japanese. SephirothKirby, you insulted ME in that post.

SephirothKirby · 07-07-2007, 02:50 PM

^ Could you tell me which part insulted you?

07-04-2007, 01:01 PM	#1
Scorch and Fang Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Scale Forest Gender: Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Scorch and Fang's Comix Uh.... Yo. This is my first first topic here on VGF. But just cuz I'm a noob doesn't mean I don't know about these forums! Like the topic says, each comic has there own rating! G: Fine. Nothing horrible. PG: Violence or some language. PG-13: Stronger violence, blood, language R: LOL. NEVER! When I say language, I DON'T mean cursing. Something else. COMICS!!!! Character Sheet Comic 1 PG Comic 2 PG Comic 3 PG Comic 4 G Comic 5 G Comic 6 PG-13 Comic 7 PG Comic 8 PG-13 Comic 9 PG-13 Comic 10 G Comic 11 PG-13 Guest Stars: Let me explain. Let's say you wanted to be IN a comic. You P.M me what you'll look like and how many times you wanna be in the comics. P.M. me: SpriteSheet link: Personality: Bad/Good?: THAT'S a G.S. ENJOY! I hope.

07-04-2007, 01:19 PM	#2
Rainbow Dash been dreamin', i've been waitin' Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: a bomb-ass cloud house bachelorette pad Gender: Posts: 24,398 Thanks: 173 Thanked 1,179 Times in 716 Posts	The background hurts my eyes.

07-04-2007, 10:20 PM	#3
Scorch and Fang Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Scale Forest Gender: Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Can't see much? (I knew it!) I'll make the backround a little lighter in the next comics.

07-05-2007, 05:41 PM	#4
Chocolate Ninja Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Wouldn't you like to know? Gender: Posts: 55 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Err... text should be centered a bit better in the middle of the text-box. Also, I dunno if there's supposed to be a plot going on, but it's very hard to make out visually or textually what's going on in those first few comics. :P

07-06-2007, 08:44 AM	#5
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	^Yeah that.

07-06-2007, 10:15 AM	#6
Scorch and Fang Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Scale Forest Gender: Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	But the rest of the comics are fine? I bet you're reading them wrong. You read them from left to right.

07-06-2007, 10:35 AM	#7
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	Nah, I'm reading em correctly, but the images are really small. Try a background site for something a little more concretely... not fuzzy.

07-06-2007, 04:22 PM	#8
Scorch and Fang Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Scale Forest Gender: Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	They aren't fuzzy to me, and the images aren't THAT small. Hmm.. Well actually, I wanted people's opinions about my comics. ~Cool ~Funny ~Weird ~Etc.

07-06-2007, 10:21 PM	#10
Scorch and Fang Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Scale Forest Gender: Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm not Japanese. SephirothKirby, you insulted ME in that post.

07-07-2007, 02:50 PM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	^ Could you tell me which part insulted you?