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 07-19-2007, 07:41 PM | #1 |
| Senior Member  Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Listening to Seeking 7 Seven and giving out free hugs. :) Gender:  Posts: 6,862 Thanks: 2,433 Thanked 398 Times in 311 Posts |  giuildmaster's  It's oversizen time. The positioning 1 3 2 4 I don't know why i did it that way, but i did. It's my first 1. Last edited by Vgfian; 07-19-2007 at 08:14 PM. Reason: thingz |
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| 07-19-2007, 07:49 PM | #2 |
| been dreamin', i've been waitin'  Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: a bomb-ass cloud house bachelorette pad Gender:  Posts: 24,402 Thanks: 173 Thanked 1,179 Times in 716 Posts | 1: Megaman = overused 2: Where's the floor 3: Make your text bubbles white, not the background color 4: Even the panels out. |
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| 07-19-2007, 08:01 PM | #3 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Listening to Seeking 7 Seven and giving out free hugs. :) Gender: Posts: 6,862 Thanks: 2,433 Thanked 398 Times in 311 Posts | thanks for the -advice. I'll edit that right in. |
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| 07-19-2007, 09:22 PM | #4 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts |  No. No no no no no. Your hand-drawn backgrounds are terrible. If you can't draw backgrounds, don't. Get some actual backgrounds. Ones that don't suck. How about some consistency with the size of your panels? It looks like you didn't even try to enlarge your working space. What the hell? You humor is very lacking. Work on that. The text is still awful. Who's saying what? How about some grammar? You have a lot of work to do. Get crackin'. -Dylan |
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| 07-19-2007, 09:25 PM | #5 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Listening to Seeking 7 Seven and giving out free hugs. :) Gender: Posts: 6,862 Thanks: 2,433 Thanked 398 Times in 311 Posts | I didn't draw these by hand,if i did it would be much better. Thanx fur the advice though. |
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In what order do you read it down, over, up?
