Valigarmander's VGF Chicanery Returns

**Valigarmander** · 08-23-2007, 04:39 PM

Yes, it's true. My comic has been unbanned from VGF on the grounds that I don't **** up again. Over my break, I've had plenty of time to think about why I messed up so bad. I started this comic to be funny, but over time I also wanted it to be shocking. So I started adding in the most painful jokes I could come up with and, surprise surprise, people were offended.

Anywho, now that I've looked ban straight in the eye, I realized that I should be making my comic so people will laugh, not recoil in shock and disgust. So, I bring my comic back to VGF. First of all, I've made the 100th episode of my comic, and in celebration I'm going back through the last 99 episodes and many episodettes and editting them. This means a lot of things. For one, more plot relevance, some changed dialogue, some different graphics, less offensive jokes.

Original:

Revised:

New sprites for some of the characters, and fixed dialogue.

Original:

Revised:

No more crappy MS Paint backgrounds, and lines between the panels in comics that didn't already have it.

Original:

Revised:

NO MORE JOKES OF THIS KIND, EVER. Honestly, I feel ashamed for doing this sort of this thing to get a laugh. I kind of had to put myself in your guys' shoes since I never knew Knux, and imagined what it would be like if some idiot was saying these sorts of things about one of my friends. If I Dylan, I would have banned this comic a long time ago.

But seriously, I'm really trying to amend my mistakes, and if you've got any suggestions, any help at all, I'd appreciate it. Also, please forgive me for taking things too far before. I'm people-challenged, so I have a hard time figuring out what's kosher and what's just wrong. I didn't do anything with malicious intent, just ignorance. So yeah, please accept my apology.

I can't upload the new comics just yet, because I can't get my donator code at Smack Jeeves at just the moment. But hopefully, I'll have them up by tonight. Peace be with you, friends, and thanks for the ~~second~~ another chance.

**X-3** · 08-23-2007, 04:53 PM

I'm glad to hear this.

I found the Knux jokes to be very bad(Except maybe for the one where after Andre pwns you, you start making black jokes and he pwns you again. Then again, that wasn't really funny because of the Knux joke at all...). The other jokes were funny for the most part, but sometimes got a little out of control.

I'm looking forward to seeing these edited comics, Val.

**Marchie** · 08-23-2007, 04:58 PM

Val grew up? Holy ****?

**Valigarmander** · 08-23-2007, 07:38 PM

Now, for the epic 100th episode.

Part A
Part B
Part C
Part D
Part E
Part F
Part G

The revised comics are coming up soon, comrades. I hope you're satisfied.

Wyborn · 08-23-2007, 07:56 PM

The expression on their faces at "ANNOY us to death" is pretty sweet.

**Valigarmander** · 08-24-2007, 01:03 PM

Here's the first five eps revised.

Dividers, some changed dialogue.

New graphics, fixed dialogue.

Compressed a two-part chapter into one.

Same thing as the last. Also, better make-out sprites.

No more crappy MS Paint backgrounds or special effects. Also, 2-part compressed.

That's all for the moment, stay tuned.

Dylan · 08-24-2007, 02:20 PM

I still think the countdown is made of win.

-Dylan

SephirothKirby · 08-24-2007, 02:59 PM

You still left him the same Black Mage is panel 2.

**Valigarmander** · 08-24-2007, 03:59 PM

Aw, damn it. Thanks for pointing it out.

Mushi · 08-24-2007, 04:14 PM

*eye twitch*

*MOAR EYETWITCH*

Oh Lord... THE LOVE BETWEEN PANFAN AND I HAS BEEN REKINDLED WITH BETTER GRAPHICS.

Typhlame · 08-24-2007, 05:00 PM

The Panfan-Mushui scene is just...

**X-3** · 08-25-2007, 10:57 PM

^It always has been, Ty.

And I agree with Dylan: That countdown was hilarious.

**Valigarmander** · 08-25-2007, 11:17 PM

The graphics are much improved.

Once again, big graphical improvement.

A little bit of plot change here to make it more relevant to the main story.

More big graphical improvements.

This chapter's been almost completely revamped. Enjoy.

Edit: Noticed a missed censor. Working on it.

Edit edit: Fix'd.

The Willful Wanderer · 08-26-2007, 01:30 AM

IMPROVEMENTS ARE VAST. THIS ARE HAVING MUCH BETTER. THAMBES UPPU GET. YOU HAVE CHANCE FOR SURVIVE, TO MAKE FROM BETTER MATERIAL. THAT IS ALL GENTLEMEN.

SEAL OF APPROVAL GET.

Rainbow Dash · 08-26-2007, 02:49 PM

When are we getting back to the people stuck with Ace?

SephirothKirby · 08-26-2007, 03:10 PM

Luigiman7 · 08-28-2007, 01:26 PM

lol. I have to keep up wih the story this time.

**Valigarmander** · 08-29-2007, 08:34 PM

Okay, new comics.

First off, I changed the "I didn't know" panel into a memorial panel. I think this one is much, much better. (Also, I didn't censor **** because I felt like it would affect the serious tone of the comic.)

Not much difference here.

Now, in this revision, I wanted to show people a little bit why everyone hates Cap'n Namechange so damn much. Also, I exchanged the "You have been chosen to stop Chicanery" plot into the "**** it, you might as well make yourselves useful" one. Remember, a lot of the old comics didn't have a lot of foresight into the later comics.

The famous installment that tells us how I am everywhere at once. Nothing new, much, but check out that awesome blood spray.

Little change here, just fixed some of Dylan's Spanish. Damn it, Dylan, why did I have to give you un acento de sexy?

Mtc.

SephirothKirby · 08-30-2007, 02:17 PM

"I don?"

Anyway, I like the upgrades.

**Valigarmander** · 08-30-2007, 05:08 PM

Damn it.

08-23-2007, 04:39 PM	#1
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Valigarmander's VGF Chicanery Returns Yes, it's true. My comic has been unbanned from VGF on the grounds that I don't ** up again. Over my break, I've had plenty of time to think about why I messed up so bad. I started this comic to be funny, but over time I also wanted it to be shocking. So I started adding in the most painful jokes I could come up with and, surprise surprise, people were offended. Anywho, now that I've looked ban straight in the eye, I realized that I should be making my comic so people will laugh, not recoil in shock and disgust. So, I bring my comic back to VGF. First of all, I've made the 100th episode of my comic, and in celebration I'm going back through the last 99 episodes and many episodettes and editting them. This means a lot of things. For one, more plot relevance, some changed dialogue, some different graphics, less offensive jokes. Original: Revised: New sprites for some of the characters, and fixed dialogue. Original: Revised: No more crappy MS Paint backgrounds, and lines between the panels in comics that didn't already have it. Original: Revised: NO MORE JOKES OF THIS KIND, EVER.** Honestly, I feel ashamed for doing this sort of this thing to get a laugh. I kind of had to put myself in your guys' shoes since I never knew Knux, and imagined what it would be like if some idiot was saying these sorts of things about one of my friends. If I Dylan, I would have banned this comic a long time ago. But seriously, I'm really trying to amend my mistakes, and if you've got any suggestions, any help at all, I'd appreciate it. Also, please forgive me for taking things too far before. I'm people-challenged, so I have a hard time figuring out what's kosher and what's just wrong. I didn't do anything with malicious intent, just ignorance. So yeah, please accept my apology. I can't upload the new comics just yet, because I can't get my donator code at Smack Jeeves at just the moment. But hopefully, I'll have them up by tonight. Peace be with you, friends, and thanks for the ~~second~~ another chance.

08-24-2007, 01:03 PM	#6
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Here's the first five eps revised. Dividers, some changed dialogue. New graphics, fixed dialogue. Compressed a two-part chapter into one. Same thing as the last. Also, better make-out sprites. No more crappy MS Paint backgrounds or special effects. Also, 2-part compressed. That's all for the moment, stay tuned. Last edited by Valigarmander; 08-25-2007 at 03:52 PM.

08-24-2007, 04:14 PM	#10
Mushi Derp Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Looking at you. I can read your mind. Gender: Posts: 6,982 Thanks: 179 Thanked 351 Times in 271 Posts	eye twitch MOAR EYETWITCH Oh Lord... THE LOVE BETWEEN PANFAN AND I HAS BEEN REKINDLED WITH BETTER GRAPHICS. __________________

08-25-2007, 11:17 PM	#13
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	The graphics are much improved. Once again, big graphical improvement. A little bit of plot change here to make it more relevant to the main story. More big graphical improvements. This chapter's been almost completely revamped. Enjoy. Edit: Noticed a missed censor. Working on it. Edit edit: Fix'd. Last edited by Valigarmander; 08-25-2007 at 11:24 PM.

08-26-2007, 01:30 AM	#14
The Willful Wanderer Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Aisle 12, between the kumquats and the radicchio. Gender: Posts: 2,325 Thanks: 168 Thanked 137 Times in 90 Posts	CATS SAY: IMPROVEMENTS ARE VAST. THIS ARE HAVING MUCH BETTER. THAMBES UPPU GET. YOU HAVE CHANCE FOR SURVIVE, TO MAKE FROM BETTER MATERIAL. THAT IS ALL GENTLEMEN. SEAL OF APPROVAL GET. Last edited by The Willful Wanderer; 08-26-2007 at 02:29 AM. Reason: Niftiness.

08-23-2007, 04:53 PM	#2
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	I'm glad to hear this. I found the Knux jokes to be very bad(Except maybe for the one where after Andre pwns you, you start making black jokes and he pwns you again. Then again, that wasn't really funny because of the Knux joke at all...). The other jokes were funny for the most part, but sometimes got a little out of control. I'm looking forward to seeing these edited comics, Val.

08-23-2007, 04:58 PM	#3
Marchie Pokeman Master since 1999 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Wiscaaaaaaaaaaansin/Michigan Gender: Posts: 16,647 Thanks: 1,442 Thanked 680 Times in 477 Posts	Val grew up? Holy ****?

08-23-2007, 07:38 PM	#4
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Now, for the epic 100th episode. Part A Part B Part C Part D Part E Part F Part G The revised comics are coming up soon, comrades. I hope you're satisfied.

08-23-2007, 07:56 PM	#5
Wyborn Zelda Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: All over the place Gender: Posts: 12,388 Thanks: 87 Thanked 469 Times in 281 Posts	The expression on their faces at "ANNOY us to death" is pretty sweet.

08-24-2007, 02:20 PM	#7
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	I still think the countdown is made of win. -Dylan

08-24-2007, 02:59 PM	#8
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	You still left him the same Black Mage is panel 2.

08-24-2007, 03:59 PM	#9
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Aw, damn it. Thanks for pointing it out.

08-24-2007, 05:00 PM	#11
Typhlame Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 4,284 Thanks: 709 Thanked 155 Times in 110 Posts	The Panfan-Mushui scene is just...

08-25-2007, 10:57 PM	#12
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	^It always has been, Ty. And I agree with Dylan: That countdown was hilarious.

08-26-2007, 02:49 PM	#15
Rainbow Dash been dreamin', i've been waitin' Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: a bomb-ass cloud house bachelorette pad Gender: Posts: 24,402 Thanks: 173 Thanked 1,179 Times in 716 Posts	When are we getting back to the people stuck with Ace?

08-26-2007, 03:10 PM	#16
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	WIN.

08-28-2007, 01:26 PM	#17
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	lol. I have to keep up wih the story this time.

08-29-2007, 08:34 PM	#18
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Okay, new comics. First off, I changed the "I didn't know" panel into a memorial panel. I think this one is much, much better. (Also, I didn't censor ** because I felt like it would affect the serious tone of the comic.) Not much difference here. Now, in this revision, I wanted to show people a little bit why everyone hates Cap'n Namechange so damn much. Also, I exchanged the "You have been chosen to stop Chicanery" plot into the "** it, you might as well make yourselves useful" one. Remember, a lot of the old comics didn't have a lot of foresight into the later comics. The famous installment that tells us how I am everywhere at once. Nothing new, much, but check out that awesome blood spray. Little change here, just fixed some of Dylan's Spanish. Damn it, Dylan, why did I have to give you un acento de sexy? Mtc.

08-30-2007, 02:17 PM	#19
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	"I don?" Anyway, I like the upgrades.

08-30-2007, 05:08 PM	#20
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Damn it.