The Adventures Of Link And Mario! (Comic!)

SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs · 10-08-2007, 09:27 PM

This is my second comic. Heres the first comic strip!

Do you like it?

**Crazyswordsman** · 10-08-2007, 09:53 PM

Dylan is sad you didn't put it in his forum, and so am I.

-CSM

ZeldaGirl · 10-08-2007, 10:43 PM

^ZG has hopefully amended that.

**Valigarmander** · 10-08-2007, 10:50 PM

1) Why is there a second Mario in the fifth panel?

2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs · 10-09-2007, 07:16 AM

Oh, ill get rid of the second mario. I was deciding what to do for the last panel. T'was an accident.

Robotazy · 10-09-2007, 07:30 AM

....I like that tilting word bubble...

Though....is that Jpeg? cause you're sprites are really blurry.

Nice Punchline though.

**Valigarmander** · 10-09-2007, 09:16 AM

Yeah, Jpegs are a big no-no for sprite comics. Save them as GIFs or PNGs instead, it'll preserve the quality of the picture much better.

Speed · 10-09-2007, 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Valigarmander

2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

May I say that was mean and uncalled for

Typhlame · 10-09-2007, 09:35 PM

^This is a forum. Live with it.

Dylan · 10-09-2007, 09:48 PM

^^ and ^: Both of you shut up.

This comic is bad. Why does the background keep changing sizes?

Why doesn't Mario stay in one spot? He keeps moving on top of the block, then...his feet are inside it? What?

And why isn't it funny? I should be laughing, but I'm not.

C'mon, kid. You can do better.

-Dylan

ISA56 2.0 · 10-18-2007, 10:50 AM

Lemme see....
1. It looks JPEG'd.
2. Why is the second Mario in the panel not removed yet?
3. Mario moved in two of the diffrent panels.

4. The joke at the end isn't that funny.
These comics have the potential to be good comics. All you have to do is put more effort into it.

SephirothKirby · 10-18-2007, 05:39 PM

^ Number 4 isn't presented correctly. It's not even criticism. It's your opinion, so don't try to pull it off as a fact.

I'd like to see more of these, though. It could have an interesting story, but you have to continue it for it to have one at all, eh?

10-08-2007, 09:27 PM	#1
SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Adventures Of Link And Mario! (Comic!) This is my second comic. Heres the first comic strip! Do you like it?

10-08-2007, 09:53 PM	#2
Crazyswordsman This key doesn't work. Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Booyaville (yeah!) Gender: Posts: 10,791 Thanks: 1,019 Thanked 686 Times in 467 Posts	Dylan is sad you didn't put it in his forum, and so am I. -CSM

10-08-2007, 10:43 PM	#3
ZeldaGirl Awesome member Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Why do YOU want to know...? Gender: Posts: 15,896 Thanks: 1,130 Thanked 1,919 Times in 1,046 Posts	^ZG has hopefully amended that.

10-08-2007, 10:50 PM	#4
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	1) Why is there a second Mario in the fifth panel? 2) Did you get typing lessons from Saeed?

10-09-2007, 07:16 AM	#5
SuperHyperShadowSonicDjs Newbie Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Oh, ill get rid of the second mario. I was deciding what to do for the last panel. T'was an accident.

10-09-2007, 07:30 AM	#6
Robotazy PRESS ANY KEY TO PANIC! Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: A Tiny Shed Gender: Posts: 16,483 Thanks: 529 Thanked 1,254 Times in 897 Posts Blog Entries: 46	....I like that tilting word bubble... Though....is that Jpeg? cause you're sprites are really blurry. Nice Punchline though.

10-09-2007, 09:16 AM	#7
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	Yeah, Jpegs are a big no-no for sprite comics. Save them as GIFs or PNGs instead, it'll preserve the quality of the picture much better.

10-09-2007, 09:35 PM	#9
Typhlame Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 4,284 Thanks: 709 Thanked 155 Times in 110 Posts	^This is a forum. *Live with it.*

10-09-2007, 09:48 PM	#10
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	^^ and ^: Both of you shut up. This comic is bad. Why does the background keep changing sizes? Why doesn't Mario stay in one spot? He keeps moving on top of the block, then...his feet are inside it? What? And why isn't it funny? I should be laughing, but I'm not. C'mon, kid. You can do better. -Dylan

10-18-2007, 10:50 AM	#11
ISA56 2.0 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Fred's House Gender: Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lemme see.... 1. It looks JPEG'd. 2. Why is the second Mario in the panel not removed yet? 3. Mario moved in two of the diffrent panels. 4. The joke at the end isn't that funny. These comics have the potential to be good comics. All you have to do is put more effort into it.

10-18-2007, 05:39 PM	#12
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	^ Number 4 isn't presented correctly. It's not even criticism. It's your opinion, so don't try to pull it off as a fact. I'd like to see more of these, though. It could have an interesting story, but you have to continue it for it to have one at all, eh?