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| Wiggidy Wack  Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender:  Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50 |  First comic Please give constructive criticism  Bill and Churro sprites from NC I edited the Toad sprites myself other sprites from Spriters Resource Last edited by Redshirt; 10-21-2007 at 11:43 AM. Reason: Fix picture |
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| 10-20-2007, 12:56 PM | #2 |
| been dreamin', i've been waitin'  Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: a bomb-ass cloud house bachelorette pad Gender: Posts: 24,402 Thanks: 173 Thanked 1,179 Times in 716 Posts | Better then most. But work on punctuation and the like. |
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