Stranded Mario World

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 03:27 PM

SO this is my first post and my first chapter

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it looks like luigi is flipin mario off on the advance part

Redshirt · 11-09-2007, 03:42 PM

what's with the Advance?

They're off the island now so what's the next story about

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 03:47 PM

i cant do any more unless my other 2 are deleted........my comp is gay and made 3 of the same threads

Redshirt · 11-09-2007, 03:54 PM

Dylan's not goingto like that 3 of the same threads

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 03:55 PM

i know!!! i didnt try to make them i want 2 deleted how do u delete them
?

Redshirt · 11-09-2007, 03:59 PM

i don't think you can

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:02 PM

ah shoot!!! cant the mods and admins delete them?!!!

Redshirt · 11-09-2007, 04:04 PM

I think so, but if they could wouldn't they do that when theres an off topic thread instead of locking them off?

-MusnMan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:29 PM

ya i guess....but heres chapter 2

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this one is pretty cool

Dylan · 11-09-2007, 04:46 PM

THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now?

-Dylan

SephirothKirby · 11-09-2007, 04:48 PM

^ You're my favorite mod now.

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 04:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dylan

THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now?

-Dylan

srry my computer is gay and it made 3 i didnt mean to!!

Totally Kennerson · 11-09-2007, 04:51 PM

This is horrible.

-The first comic is almost unreadable. You NEED word balloons. Are you writing this with a cell phone? IDK what you were thinking with that.
-Both comics are not funny. At all. You just sprite-comic your way to a not-punch line.
-What the hell is the plot? They go from getting on a helicopter to playing tag on a beach! And where did those clones come from? A better question: Where did they go?? They did nothing and were there for no reason! It was just like they happened to be walking by!
-"IDK but whatever were on here for im no superman". What does this mean?? Thats not even a sentence! Gah!
-Did I mention its not funny?

You NEED to work harder on these. You can still save it. Try writing the script before you make the comic. Remember to spell check it, too.

***Ace Mercury*** · 11-09-2007, 04:51 PM

Based on his spelling, grammar, and overall attitude, he's probably, like, thirteen years old. He's just trying to have some fun. Some... annoying fun.

Dylan · 11-09-2007, 04:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SephirothKirby

^ You're my favorite mod now.

2007 VGF Mod of the Year, baby.

-Dylan

BLUEShyGuy · 11-09-2007, 05:01 PM

w/e man i am 13 and i like to write stupid stuff..................anywayz here is number 3 and dont petronize me and stuff

**Valigarmander** · 11-09-2007, 05:08 PM

That one... didn't make any sense at all.

I am nobody · 11-09-2007, 05:12 PM

What was that?

Dylan · 11-09-2007, 05:13 PM

It's like the acid trip in the movie I saw when I was on that acid trip.

-Dylan

TheEvilDM · 11-09-2007, 06:43 PM

^That was just "Fear and Loating in Las Vegas," and it made a lot of sense on that acid...

11-09-2007, 03:27 PM	#1
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	Stranded Mario World SO this is my first post and my first chapter [IMG] it looks like luigi is flipin mario off on the advance part

11-09-2007, 04:29 PM	#9
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	ya i guess....but heres chapter 2[IMG] this one is pretty cool

11-09-2007, 03:42 PM	#2
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	what's with the Advance? They're off the island now so what's the next story about -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 03:47 PM	#3
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	i cant do any more unless my other 2 are deleted........my comp is gay and made 3 of the same threads

11-09-2007, 03:54 PM	#4
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Dylan's not goingto like that 3 of the same threads -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 03:55 PM	#5
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	i know!!! i didnt try to make them i want 2 deleted how do u delete them ?

11-09-2007, 03:59 PM	#6
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	i don't think you can -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 04:02 PM	#7
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	ah shoot!!! cant the mods and admins delete them?!!!

11-09-2007, 04:04 PM	#8
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I think so, but if they could wouldn't they do that when theres an off topic thread instead of locking them off? -MusnMan

11-09-2007, 04:46 PM	#10
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	THREE threads? Are you kidding me? For a comic this bad? Can you imagine how much I hate you right now? -Dylan

11-09-2007, 04:48 PM	#11
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	^ You're my favorite mod now.

11-09-2007, 04:51 PM	#13
Totally Kennerson Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Falling down all these stairs Gender: Posts: 2,116 Thanks: 340 Thanked 406 Times in 136 Posts Blog Entries: 1	This is horrible. -The first comic is almost unreadable. You NEED word balloons. Are you writing this with a cell phone? IDK what you were thinking with that. -Both comics are not funny. At all. You just sprite-comic your way to a not-punch line. -What the hell is the plot? They go from getting on a helicopter to playing tag on a beach! And where did those clones come from? A better question: Where did they go?? They did nothing and were there for no reason! It was just like they happened to be walking by! -"IDK but whatever were on here for im no superman". What does this mean?? Thats not even a sentence! Gah! -Did I mention its not funny? You NEED to work harder on these. You can still save it. Try writing the script before you make the comic. Remember to spell check it, too.

11-09-2007, 04:51 PM	#14
*Ace Mercury* Marshmallow Knight ☆ Supermod Join Date: Jun 2000 Location: Southern Ontario Gender: Posts: 23,275 Thanks: 568 Thanked 3,297 Times in 1,582 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Based on his spelling, grammar, and overall attitude, he's probably, like, thirteen years old. He's just trying to have some fun. Some... annoying fun.

11-09-2007, 05:01 PM	#16
BLUEShyGuy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: UP YOUR MOTHER HUGGEN BUTT Gender: Posts: 90 Thanks: 9 Thanked 11 Times in 2 Posts	w/e man i am 13 and i like to write stupid stuff..................anywayz here is number 3 and dont petronize me and stuff

11-09-2007, 05:08 PM	#17
Valigarmander The Bee's Knees Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The land of rain and trees (Oregon) Gender: Posts: 29,755 Thanks: 1,649 Thanked 5,701 Times in 2,581 Posts Blog Entries: 20	That one... didn't make any sense at all.

11-09-2007, 05:12 PM	#18
I am nobody Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Over there. Gender: Posts: 5,515 Thanks: 309 Thanked 365 Times in 242 Posts Blog Entries: 7	What was that?

11-09-2007, 05:13 PM	#19
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	It's like the acid trip in the movie I saw when I was on that acid trip. -Dylan

11-09-2007, 06:43 PM	#20
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 32 Times in 16 Posts	^That was just "Fear and Loating in Las Vegas," and it made a lot of sense on that acid...