My Shorts

Luigiman7 · 05-05-2008, 08:33 PM

LOL

Yeah, Ive been thinking for a while, and i've decided to to do my own shorts. Maybe parody a thing or two. I don't know.

I had a little obsession with NC when I made these 3 years ogo. THEY SUCK, I know. But, I'll get more up soon.

Edit: OH NO I CANT SEE THEM WELL Can anyone else?

Redshirt · 05-05-2008, 08:41 PM

Can't read the words

Metal Man · 05-05-2008, 08:50 PM

Apparently, 3 years ago you also vacuum-packed your comix.

Dizzy · 05-06-2008, 06:53 AM

I figured out how to restore these:

Redshirt · 05-06-2008, 12:02 PM

I think they were better when I couldn't read them.

Dizzy · 05-06-2008, 07:02 PM

^Yeah, probably.

Seeking Attention is passe · 05-06-2008, 07:18 PM

They're O.K. but I would make them a bit funnier.

Luigiman7 · 05-07-2008, 08:19 PM

told you.

Dylan · 05-07-2008, 08:30 PM

Those effects are awful. And why is Fred purple?

Luigiman7 · 05-07-2008, 08:45 PM

its the Bugzy from the game. he was purple, right?

besides, purple rules.

Dylan · 05-07-2008, 08:56 PM

Sure, but Fred isn't purple.

Panfan · 05-07-2008, 09:04 PM

There are green Fred sprites on NC, last time I checked.

- Spraycan effects never work.
- Better grammar, please.
- 8 bit and 16 bit usually don't mix well.
- It's just not funny.

Luigiman7 · 05-07-2008, 09:06 PM

Made this one about AC.

Quality got messed up, somehow. BUTHEAD INTRANET

Seeking Attention is passe · 05-07-2008, 09:07 PM

Heh better.

Redshirt · 05-07-2008, 09:23 PM

An apple fell off the tree.

TheEvilDM · 05-08-2008, 11:04 PM

This topic = what in the blazes of all things stupid and drunken!?

Dylan · 05-08-2008, 11:04 PM

So...the last one...

Are you being serious here?

**Galefore** · 05-08-2008, 11:14 PM

thars sum ninja editin at foot

Seriously, stop posting comics from 3 years ago. Because you sucked then. Prove to us that you don't suck now, or we'll sustain that opinion.

NEVER use stick figures if you lack sprites. Either make your own or forget it.

And NEVER use hand-drawn backgrounds unless you're going for minimalism (ala NC, but even Jay used backgrounds every once in a while), or if you're good at hand-drawn backgrounds. Hell, I'll even accept them if they were meant to be funny. This one wasn't.

The punchline was alright, and the buildup was alright, but there needs to be more. Honestly, I want to see what you can do now.

05-05-2008, 08:33 PM	#1
Luigiman7 ~)´◡｀(~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: representin da bronx yo Gender: Posts: 17,304 Thanks: 1,099 Thanked 992 Times in 698 Posts Blog Entries: 8	My Shorts LOL Yeah, Ive been thinking for a while, and i've decided to to do my own shorts. Maybe parody a thing or two. I don't know. I had a little obsession with NC when I made these 3 years ogo. THEY SUCK, I know. But, I'll get more up soon. Edit: OH NO I CANT SEE THEM WELL Can anyone else?

05-05-2008, 08:41 PM	#2
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,607 Thanks: 683 Thanked 998 Times in 690 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Can't read the words

05-05-2008, 08:50 PM	#3
Metal Man Fairy-Slaying Maniac Join Date: Apr 2000 Location: 1592 Miles Away From Here Gender: Posts: 18,062 Thanks: 148 Thanked 683 Times in 482 Posts	Apparently, 3 years ago you also vacuum-packed your comix.

05-06-2008, 06:53 AM	#4
Dizzy A Real Sonic Hero Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18,214 Thanks: 1,670 Thanked 1,077 Times in 750 Posts Blog Entries: 111	I figured out how to restore these:

05-06-2008, 12:02 PM	#5
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,607 Thanks: 683 Thanked 998 Times in 690 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I think they were better when I couldn't read them.

05-06-2008, 07:02 PM	#6
Dizzy A Real Sonic Hero Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 18,214 Thanks: 1,670 Thanked 1,077 Times in 750 Posts Blog Entries: 111	^Yeah, probably.

05-06-2008, 07:18 PM	#7
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	They're O.K. but I would make them a bit funnier.

05-07-2008, 08:19 PM	#8
Luigiman7 ~)´◡｀(~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: representin da bronx yo Gender: Posts: 17,304 Thanks: 1,099 Thanked 992 Times in 698 Posts Blog Entries: 8	told you.

05-07-2008, 08:30 PM	#9
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	Those effects are awful. And why is Fred purple?

05-07-2008, 08:45 PM	#10
Luigiman7 ~)´◡｀(~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: representin da bronx yo Gender: Posts: 17,304 Thanks: 1,099 Thanked 992 Times in 698 Posts Blog Entries: 8	its the Bugzy from the game. he was purple, right? besides, purple rules.

05-07-2008, 08:56 PM	#11
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	Sure, but Fred isn't purple.

05-07-2008, 09:04 PM	#12
Panfan Analrapist Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I'm awesome, and I **** dolphins Gender: Posts: 18,540 Thanks: 1,384 Thanked 2,201 Times in 1,311 Posts Blog Entries: 15	There are green Fred sprites on NC, last time I checked. - Spraycan effects never work. - Better grammar, please. - 8 bit and 16 bit usually don't mix well. - It's just not funny.

05-07-2008, 09:06 PM	#13
Luigiman7 ~)´◡｀(~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: representin da bronx yo Gender: Posts: 17,304 Thanks: 1,099 Thanked 992 Times in 698 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Made this one about AC. Quality got messed up, somehow. BUTHEAD INTRANET

05-07-2008, 09:07 PM	#14
Seeking Attention is passe Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts	Heh better.

05-07-2008, 09:23 PM	#15
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,607 Thanks: 683 Thanked 998 Times in 690 Posts Blog Entries: 50	An apple fell off the tree.

05-08-2008, 11:04 PM	#16
TheEvilDM Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: the seventh layer of hell. Wisconsin Gender: Posts: 520 Thanks: 33 Thanked 31 Times in 16 Posts	This topic = what in the blazes of all things stupid and drunken!?

05-08-2008, 11:14 PM	#18
Galefore EXPLOSION GOD OF MUSIC Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Some studio somewhere Gender: Posts: 8,255 Thanks: 1,357 Thanked 823 Times in 532 Posts Blog Entries: 5	thars sum ninja editin at foot Seriously, stop posting comics from 3 years ago. Because you sucked then. Prove to us that you don't suck now, or we'll sustain that opinion. NEVER use stick figures if you lack sprites. Either make your own or forget it. And NEVER use hand-drawn backgrounds unless you're going for minimalism (ala NC, but even Jay used backgrounds every once in a while), or if you're good at hand-drawn backgrounds. Hell, I'll even accept them if they were meant to be funny. This one wasn't. The punchline was alright, and the buildup was alright, but there needs to be more. Honestly, I want to see what you can do now.