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 05-06-2008, 05:44 PM | #1 |
| Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender:  Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts | Mario and Kirby: The Comic Hi everyone. It's great to be back. I've brought a new comic series with me that will involve many characters. I'm not sure really what it's about yet but here it is.  I haven't sprited in a while so the first few will probably suck. |
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| 05-06-2008, 05:56 PM | #2 |
| Analrapist  Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I'm awesome, and I **** dolphins Gender: Posts: 18,540 Thanks: 1,384 Thanked 2,201 Times in 1,311 Posts Blog Entries: 15 | Not a big comic critic, but... - You might want to get backgrounds of the same size. - Red text box doesn't really look good - Large gaps in the text box don't either - And I know it's an intro, but it was just kinda "blah" |
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| 05-06-2008, 06:07 PM | #3 |
| Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts | Ok thanks. I wasn't sure what to put for the intro. And ill fix all bubbles for later. |
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| 05-06-2008, 07:44 PM | #4 |
| Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts | Sorry for double posting. New comic.  |
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| 05-06-2008, 09:02 PM | #6 |
| Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts | A comic. |
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| 05-06-2008, 09:13 PM | #7 | |
| Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts |  Quote:
Seriously, the background you used is awful. It's hard to tell where the separation between the ground and the wall is. It didn't help that you blended some of the panels together. And it made no sense at all. Where's the transition between the first and second parts? I have no idea what's going on. | |
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| 05-06-2008, 09:27 PM | #8 |
| Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Gender: Posts: 0 Thanks: 489 Thanked 185 Times in 153 Posts | Can you delete the thread please. Ill just make a different comic or something. Delete now please. Last edited by Seeking Attention is passe; 05-06-2008 at 09:39 PM. Reason: Stupid comic. |
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| 05-06-2008, 09:54 PM | #9 |
| Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts | I have a better idea: I'll just lock it. |
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| The Following User Says Thank You to Dylan For This Useful Post: | Seeking Attention is passe (05-07-2008) |
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