My latest sprite comic!

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 04:17 AM

The Doomsday of Nintendo. Trust me, it's a lot of work, and time (going back and forth between sprite sheets A LOT).

Can anyone see it?

Dizzy · 06-09-2008, 04:32 AM

Um... it's kinda small.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 04:46 AM

YES! it worked! Okay, Credit will be given out later, right now I must sleep.

Redshirt · 06-09-2008, 08:03 AM

Good job, but some of the text and sprites look blurry (especially the pink).

1-up Salesman · 06-09-2008, 11:33 AM

Yeah, but good job.

Panfan · 06-09-2008, 03:54 PM

1. Never, EVER save as a .jpg. PNGs are good.
2. Text would look bad even if it wasn't a .jpg
3. If you're going to put some stuff in text boxes, put everything in text boxes.
4. MSPaint backgrounds aren't good.
5. Blank space is a no-no.
6. That being said, lines between panels could be a little bit smaller. That may get you less blank space.

Dizzy · 06-09-2008, 04:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

4. MSPaint backgrounds aren't good.

Not necessarily. If you have good technique, you could make a decent Paint background. The key is finding a style that matches your sprites.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 04:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSHMAN

Good job, but some of the text and sprites look blurry (especially the pink).

Yeah, too light a background there.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

1. Never, EVER save as a .jpg. PNGs are good.
2. Text would look bad even if it wasn't a .jpg
3. If you're going to put some stuff in text boxes, put everything in text boxes.
4. MSPaint backgrounds aren't good.
5. Blank space is a no-no.
6. That being said, lines between panels could be a little bit smaller. That may get you less blank space.

1.Yeah, I've noticed how .jpg affects color. Yes, the rest of the comic is in PNG. I think.
2.Really?
3.What do you mean? Oh, yeah, I totally forgot. I thought the newspeople's text was clear, so I didn't think to put boxes there. :P
4.Yeah, it's just color?
5.Definitely.
6.Okay, I'll keep THAT in mind.

So what did you LIKE about the comic?

(Sidenote: where's the Mod? Did he post?)

Dizzy · 06-09-2008, 04:22 PM

Well, it had a nice joke.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 04:53 PM

Here, I'ved edited it now.

Dizzy · 06-09-2008, 05:05 PM

Hmm... better. Could still use some improvement, though.

Panfan · 06-09-2008, 05:42 PM

Might want to add another panel.

Also, some of the sprites look kinda bad close-up.

Dylan · 06-09-2008, 05:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tubba@Blubba

So what did you LIKE about the comic?

(Sidenote: where's the Mod? Did he post?)

First of all, no I didn't.

Second, you can't ask people to post what they like about your comic if they don't like it. Or if it's not very good. Both apply here.

Redshirt · 06-09-2008, 05:49 PM

I think it's a good start, and much better now that I can read all of it. You should consider making Luigi's text dark though.

1-up Salesman · 06-09-2008, 05:49 PM

I thought it was really good!

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 07:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

Also, some of the sprites look kinda bad close-up.

Yeah, that's true.

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSHMAN

I think it's a good start, and much better now that I can read all of it. You should consider making Luigi's text dark though.

YES, I will do that.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

Might want to add another panel.

What for?

Well, I've got part 2 ready. I edited it shortly a while ago.

I'll automatically answer a few questions:
#1. In panel 6, the Fly Guy was speaking.
#2. Panels 7-8, Peach ran to Mario when he was hit, and he stood up right in front of her.
#3. When Bowser's KCC transforms, Peach manages to be just offscreen, for the KCC moves towards Mario during transformation.

Panfan · 06-09-2008, 07:30 PM

Add panel because there's room for it.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 07:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

Add panel because there's room for it.

For WHAT!? Spare Panels would probably be asked to be removed, anyway.

Redshirt · 06-09-2008, 08:48 PM

^No, continue the story. No need to end it when you have another space.

Tubba@Blubba · 06-09-2008, 08:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MUSHMAN

^No, continue the story. No need to end it when you have another space.

But that part of the story is done. As it says, the fight is up next, and that takes dozens of squares.

06-09-2008, 04:17 AM	#1
Tubba@Blubba Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my own little world... Gender: Posts: 80 Thanks: 28 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	My latest sprite comic! The Doomsday of Nintendo. Trust me, it's a lot of work, and time (going back and forth between sprite sheets A LOT). Can anyone see it? Last edited by Tubba@Blubba; 06-09-2008 at 04:17 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

06-09-2008, 04:32 AM	#2
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Um... it's kinda small.

06-09-2008, 04:46 AM	#3
Tubba@Blubba Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my own little world... Gender: Posts: 80 Thanks: 28 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	YES! it worked! Okay, Credit will be given out later, right now I must sleep. Last edited by Tubba@Blubba; 06-09-2008 at 04:48 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

06-09-2008, 08:03 AM	#4
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Good job, but some of the text and sprites look blurry (especially the pink).

06-09-2008, 11:33 AM	#5
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Yeah, but good job.

06-09-2008, 03:54 PM	#6
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	1. Never, EVER save as a .jpg. PNGs are good. 2. Text would look bad even if it wasn't a .jpg 3. If you're going to put some stuff in text boxes, put everything in text boxes. 4. MSPaint backgrounds aren't good. 5. Blank space is a no-no. 6. That being said, lines between panels could be a little bit smaller. That may get you less blank space.

06-09-2008, 04:22 PM	#9
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Well, it had a nice joke.

06-09-2008, 04:53 PM	#10
Tubba@Blubba Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In my own little world... Gender: Posts: 80 Thanks: 28 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Here, I'ved edited it now.

06-09-2008, 05:05 PM	#11
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	Hmm... better. Could still use some improvement, though.

06-09-2008, 05:42 PM	#12
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	Might want to add another panel. Also, some of the sprites look kinda bad close-up.

06-09-2008, 05:49 PM	#14
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I think it's a good start, and much better now that I can read all of it. You should consider making Luigi's text dark though.

06-09-2008, 07:30 PM	#17
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	Add panel because there's room for it.

06-09-2008, 08:48 PM	#19
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	^No, continue the story. No need to end it when you have another space.