Super Luigi Bros.

1-up Salesman · 06-20-2008, 02:06 PM

Sorry about some of the sprites not being the same size.

**X-3** · 06-20-2008, 02:32 PM

Not a horrible try, but could be better. I find Mario's last line somewhat funny, at least.

The huge white space to the right is very distracting, and shouldn't be there. Luigi's text is hard to read on a white background. The white background should be replaced with a proper background: if you could find the "ground", you can find a good background. And the sprites look...weird. Why are the like that?

Speed · 06-20-2008, 02:38 PM

All I see is a red x.

1-up Salesman · 06-20-2008, 02:40 PM

Huh. I can see it.

Redshirt · 06-20-2008, 02:42 PM

I can see it.

Typhlame · 06-20-2008, 03:14 PM

I can see it.

Speed · 06-20-2008, 04:32 PM

I'm on my mom's crappy lap top gimme a break.

1-up Salesman · 06-20-2008, 04:34 PM

'Kay.

Redshirt · 06-20-2008, 04:41 PM

I don't have a Kitkat bar sorry.

Panfan · 06-20-2008, 09:18 PM

1. What kind of file are you saving it as? It looks really bad. Especially the individual sprites.
2. Darker green for Luigi's text plz
3. You really need to get rid of that white space.
4. I feel like I'm repeating myself, you need to work on these things that have been pointed out so many times.

1-up Salesman · 06-20-2008, 09:23 PM

*sigh* Geez

Panfan · 06-20-2008, 09:31 PM

I apologize. That was out of hand. Your comic is perfect and it was wrong of me to point out things that you need work on to improve the quality of your comics.

Will you forgive me?

Redshirt · 06-21-2008, 08:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by March of the Covenant

IT'S TOO LATE TO APOLOGIZE

Joking.

To 1-up:
If you could get get the Super Mario Bros. 3 text why not use the whole background?

1-up Salesman · 06-21-2008, 08:38 PM

Sorry about that. Next issue I'll do that.

1-up Salesman · 06-23-2008, 11:48 AM

Sorry about the Link and Zelda sprites not looking very good. How do you get the frame around the sprite to go away? Using the fill bucket on it doesn't work very well.

Panfan · 06-23-2008, 11:58 AM

You need to put the fill in white before you put it in the comic. When moving the individual sprite in the frame, make sure you click the bottom choice (where the individual paint brushes would usually be) with the select button. (I assume you're using MSPaint)

Another pointer as well: You should keep the frames straight. It makes the comic look much nicer.

Oh, and remember to give credit if asked.

**Loot** · 06-23-2008, 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Masaharu Morimoto

I apologize. That was out of hand. Your comic is perfect and it was wrong of me to point out things that you need work on to improve the quality of your comics.

Will you forgive me?

Stop trying to help improve the quality of sprite comics, Panfan. We have no place for you in this forum.

06-20-2008, 02:06 PM	#1
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Super Luigi Bros. Sorry about some of the sprites not being the same size.

06-23-2008, 11:48 AM	#15
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Sorry about the Link and Zelda sprites not looking very good. How do you get the frame around the sprite to go away? Using the fill bucket on it doesn't work very well. Last edited by 1-up Salesman; 06-23-2008 at 11:48 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

06-20-2008, 02:32 PM	#2
X-3 Useful as an Owl Join Date: Jan 2004 Gender: Posts: 15,947 Thanks: 753 Thanked 1,213 Times in 790 Posts Blog Entries: 10	Not a horrible try, but could be better. I find Mario's last line somewhat funny, at least. The huge white space to the right is very distracting, and shouldn't be there. Luigi's text is hard to read on a white background. The white background should be replaced with a proper background: if you could find the "ground", you can find a good background. And the sprites look...weird. Why are the like that?

06-20-2008, 02:38 PM	#3
Speed Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: If there's a bright center to the universe I'm on the planet it's farthest from Gender: Posts: 3,747 Thanks: 1,598 Thanked 320 Times in 224 Posts Blog Entries: 1	All I see is a red x.

06-20-2008, 02:40 PM	#4
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Huh. I can see it.

06-20-2008, 02:42 PM	#5
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I can see it.

06-20-2008, 03:14 PM	#6
Typhlame Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Probably eating. Gender: Posts: 4,284 Thanks: 709 Thanked 155 Times in 110 Posts	I can see it.

06-20-2008, 04:32 PM	#7
Speed Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: If there's a bright center to the universe I'm on the planet it's farthest from Gender: Posts: 3,747 Thanks: 1,598 Thanked 320 Times in 224 Posts Blog Entries: 1	I'm on my mom's crappy lap top gimme a break.

06-20-2008, 04:34 PM	#8
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	'Kay.

06-20-2008, 04:41 PM	#9
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I don't have a Kitkat bar sorry.

06-20-2008, 09:18 PM	#10
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	1. What kind of file are you saving it as? It looks really bad. Especially the individual sprites. 2. Darker green for Luigi's text plz 3. You really need to get rid of that white space. 4. I feel like I'm repeating myself, you need to work on these things that have been pointed out so many times.

06-20-2008, 09:23 PM	#11
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	sigh Geez

06-20-2008, 09:31 PM	#12
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	I apologize. That was out of hand. Your comic is perfect and it was wrong of me to point out things that you need work on to improve the quality of your comics. Will you forgive me?

06-21-2008, 08:38 PM	#14
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Sorry about that. Next issue I'll do that.

06-23-2008, 11:58 AM	#16
Panfan AND HE PRAYS Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Grayskull Gender: Posts: 18,806 Thanks: 1,405 Thanked 2,251 Times in 1,339 Posts Blog Entries: 15	You need to put the fill in white before you put it in the comic. When moving the individual sprite in the frame, make sure you click the bottom choice (where the individual paint brushes would usually be) with the select button. (I assume you're using MSPaint) Another pointer as well: You should keep the frames straight. It makes the comic look much nicer. Oh, and remember to give credit if asked.