The Ultimate Fight

Luigiman7 · 08-03-2008, 03:52 PM

good intro. It's way better than your others. The blood could use some work, though.

Also, If your making these in MS paint, save the image as a .PNG. It looks better on websites.

Robotazy · 08-03-2008, 03:53 PM

Um....another Mario Vs. Luigi Comic?

<_<

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 03:55 PM

Thanks! And the next sprite comix will be saved as a .PNG.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tazy_10

Um....another Mario Vs. Luigi Comic?

<_<

No. More like, a Mario versus Vader comic.

SephirothKirby · 08-03-2008, 03:58 PM

Get rid of the ugly white space around the boxes.

Dylan · 08-03-2008, 04:07 PM

1. Center your text. All of it. It looks better when it's centered.

2. Line up your panels and text boxes. It looks sloppy the way it is.

3. If someone's in the air bringing down a hammer, their posture isn't even close to that.

4. Work on your swinging and blood effects. Don't just make some blobs with the brush.

5. Toad? Where? I'm pretty sure that's a Goomba.

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 04:46 PM

He's talking about when the Toads come to him for help.

Oh sorry about that white space, I thought I cropped that out on Infranview.
Sorry....

SephirothKirby · 08-03-2008, 05:01 PM

I don't really get the joke, but you know, I won't say anything since people tend to go "ehhhh, ehhh, don't say it's bad because you don't have a sense of humor"

But like Dylan said, center your text.

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 05:02 PM

I'm working on that.

Luigiman7 · 08-03-2008, 05:11 PM

lol

Fix the bubbles, they're too thick. And there's this blue spot under the goombas. other than that, I don't really see anything wrong.

AND WHITE SPACE AT TOP

Crazybirdanimations · 08-03-2008, 05:15 PM

This is not the ultimate fight!

This is anything but!

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LuWEEGEEman

lol
And there's this blue spot under the goombas.

Sorry, that's part of the sprites, and can't help it. It's their shadow.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crazybirdanimations

This is not the ultimate fight!

This is anything but!

WE'LL GET TO THAT!!!

Lol

Luigiman7 · 08-03-2008, 05:54 PM

oh, ok.

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 08:18 PM

I sure am glad that I learned how to make the sprites blend in with the background.

Dylan · 08-03-2008, 09:25 PM

1. Line up your panels, yada yada.

2. Do you really need all that space on the side to credit the sprites? Seriously?

3. Why is Mario just falling from the sky with a hammer? For that matter, what's that black thing on his head in the third panel?

4. The sprites don't really match the background in terms of perspective.

5. The text inside the bubbles jumps around a lot. It should be centered.

1-up Salesman · 08-03-2008, 09:56 PM

yeah.... the black thing was supposed to be an angry eye-brow but... I'm working on the text.. Mario was I guess jumping with his hammer, that doesn't really matter I think..

1-up Salesman · 08-04-2008, 12:56 PM

Is anyone else going to post in this thread?

Luigiman7 · 08-04-2008, 01:01 PM

be patient. god.

Redshirt · 08-04-2008, 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LuWEEGEEman

be patient. god.

that

1-up Salesman · 08-04-2008, 01:21 PM

Alright Alright

08-03-2008, 03:49 PM	#1
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08-03-2008, 03:52 PM	#2
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08-03-2008, 04:07 PM	#6
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	Needs work. 1. Center your text. All of it. It looks better when it's centered. 2. Line up your panels and text boxes. It looks sloppy the way it is. 3. If someone's in the air bringing down a hammer, their posture isn't even close to that. 4. Work on your swinging and blood effects. Don't just make some blobs with the brush. 5. Toad? Where? I'm pretty sure that's a Goomba.

08-03-2008, 04:46 PM	#7
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	He's talking about when the Toads come to him for help. Oh sorry about that white space, I thought I cropped that out on Infranview. Sorry.... Last edited by 1-up Salesman; 08-03-2008 at 04:51 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

08-03-2008, 05:11 PM	#10
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	lol Fix the bubbles, they're too thick. And there's this blue spot under the goombas. other than that, I don't really see anything wrong. AND WHITE SPACE AT TOP __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

08-03-2008, 03:53 PM	#3
Robotazy PRESS ANY KEY TO PANIC! Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: A Tiny Shed Gender: Posts: 16,483 Thanks: 529 Thanked 1,254 Times in 897 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Um....another Mario Vs. Luigi Comic? <_<

08-03-2008, 03:58 PM	#5
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	Get rid of the ugly white space around the boxes.

08-03-2008, 05:01 PM	#8
SephirothKirby Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Those who criticize our generation forget who raised it. Gender: Posts: 7,213 Thanks: 373 Thanked 760 Times in 447 Posts	I don't really get the joke, but you know, I won't say anything since people tend to go "ehhhh, ehhh, don't say it's bad because you don't have a sense of humor" But like Dylan said, center your text.

08-03-2008, 05:02 PM	#9
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	I'm working on that.

08-03-2008, 05:15 PM	#11
Crazybirdanimations Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: California Gender: Posts: 4,912 Thanks: 237 Thanked 222 Times in 175 Posts	This is not the ultimate fight! This is anything but!

08-03-2008, 05:54 PM	#13
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	oh, ok. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

08-03-2008, 08:18 PM	#14
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	I sure am glad that I learned how to make the sprites blend in with the background. Last edited by 1-up Salesman; 08-03-2008 at 08:18 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

08-03-2008, 09:25 PM	#15
Dylan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Teenage Wasteland Gender: Posts: 7,790 Thanks: 1,632 Thanked 1,816 Times in 773 Posts	1. Line up your panels, yada yada. 2. Do you really need all that space on the side to credit the sprites? Seriously? 3. Why is Mario just falling from the sky with a hammer? For that matter, what's that black thing on his head in the third panel? 4. The sprites don't really match the background in terms of perspective. 5. The text inside the bubbles jumps around a lot. It should be centered.

08-03-2008, 09:56 PM	#16
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	yeah.... the black thing was supposed to be an angry eye-brow but... I'm working on the text.. Mario was I guess jumping with his hammer, that doesn't really matter I think..

08-04-2008, 12:56 PM	#17
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Is anyone else going to post in this thread?

08-04-2008, 01:01 PM	#18
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	be patient. god. __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？

08-04-2008, 01:21 PM	#20
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