Bill and Fred's Average Adventure

Redshirt · 08-23-2008, 08:09 PM

Luigiman7 · 08-23-2008, 08:11 PM

oh no, the adventure begins!

Looks good! can't wait for more.

1-up Salesman · 08-23-2008, 08:57 PM

As soon as I saw that you posted your new comic I got really excited. Good job

Jailbreaker · 08-23-2008, 11:04 PM

As odd as it is, I laughed at 1-up's comic more. It's like wanting a pong instead of a wii... nah... more like dreamcast to xbox. BUT I DO.

I like the xbox better, but that's not the point.

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 08:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Jailbreaker

As odd as it is, I laughed at 1-up's comic more. It's like wanting a pong instead of a wii... nah... more like dreamcast to xbox. BUT I DO.
I like the xbox better, but that's not the point.

This part wasn't supposed to be funny, well except for the first panel. The next part will have more funny.

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 09:08 AM

Good. Why isn't the first comic ever funny in any series?

BTW You spelled prolouge wrong.

1-up Salesman · 08-24-2008, 09:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Jailbreaker

BTW You spelled prolouge wrong.

So did you.

It's spelled 'prologue'

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 09:22 AM

Y'know mushman, Jay isn't in his OWN comics that much. He's an important character now.

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 11:15 AM

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Originally Posted by Jailbreaker

Y'know mushman, Jay isn't in his OWN comics that much. He's an important character now.

Yeah he runs NC HQ

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Originally Posted by KING 1-UP SALESMAN

So did you.

It's spelled 'prologue'

fixed

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 11:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Mush Man

Yeah he runs NC HQ

I am well aware of that, but what difference does that make if he isn't even in his own comics as much as yours?

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 11:36 AM

He's in his own a lot more than mine, if you would actually read them you would know that.

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 12:13 PM

Ok, he's in them but not as a main character, and I have read them... I can't wait for the one and a half structures in LotW, In the quazi adventure they kill resop cause there is no reason to want his n64 (that's not really why but still) in mshroom wars wart takes over the mushroom kingdom... what else? I didn't read the sss crossover... ah well I read the others. And all of the NC shorts.

He's only in more of his than yours cause you have two and he has like eight.

also his don't have much plot, so you might want to put less plot into this one.

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 02:59 PM

Part #1 Starting a Loan.

Spoiler Below

Was Luigi's line just a throwaway or was it important to the plot?

Spoiler Below

Don't ask me I'm making this up as I go.

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 03:41 PM

Waiting for a funny...

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 03:48 PM

Yeah yeah, I need to get the story going.

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 03:54 PM

I GUESS that's a SORTA good reason....

Redshirt · 08-24-2008, 04:09 PM

I know what the problem is, I wrote most of my successful comic parts while at school(mostly in math class), but wrote these two at home.

Jailbreaker · 08-24-2008, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mush Man

I know what the problem is, I wrote most of my successful comic parts while at school(mostly in math class), but wrote these two at home.

That's pretty early for school to start. I don't get any for two weeks!

1-up Salesman · 08-24-2008, 07:40 PM

I'll look forward to more!

Luigiman7 · 08-24-2008, 07:42 PM

Luigi's line was important to the story.

IT WAS. MAKE IT SO NOOOOW

08-23-2008, 08:11 PM	#2
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08-23-2008, 11:04 PM	#4
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	As odd as it is, I laughed at 1-up's comic more. It's like wanting a pong instead of a wii... nah... more like dreamcast to xbox. BUT I DO. I like the xbox better, but that's not the point. Last edited by Jailbreaker; 08-23-2008 at 11:04 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

08-24-2008, 09:08 AM	#6
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	Good. Why isn't the first comic ever funny in any series? BTW You spelled prolouge wrong. Last edited by Jailbreaker; 08-24-2008 at 09:08 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

08-24-2008, 09:22 AM	#8
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	Y'know mushman, Jay isn't in his OWN comics that much. He's an important character now. Last edited by Jailbreaker; 08-24-2008 at 09:32 AM.

08-24-2008, 12:13 PM	#12
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	Ok, he's in them but not as a main character, and I have read them... I can't wait for the one and a half structures in LotW, In the quazi adventure they kill resop cause there is no reason to want his n64 (that's not really why but still) in mshroom wars wart takes over the mushroom kingdom... what else? I didn't read the sss crossover... ah well I read the others. And all of the NC shorts. He's only in more of his than yours cause you have two and he has like eight. also his don't have much plot, so you might want to put less plot into this one. Last edited by Jailbreaker; 08-24-2008 at 12:15 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

08-23-2008, 08:09 PM	#1
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Bill and Fred's Average Adventure Last edited by Redshirt; 08-24-2008 at 11:14 AM. Reason: Fix spelling

08-23-2008, 08:57 PM	#3
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	As soon as I saw that you posted your new comic I got really excited. Good job

08-24-2008, 11:36 AM	#11
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	He's in his own a lot more than mine, if you would actually read them you would know that.

08-24-2008, 02:59 PM	#13
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Part #1 Starting a Loan. Spoiler Below Was Luigi's line just a throwaway or was it important to the plot? Spoiler Below Don't ask me I'm making this up as I go.

08-24-2008, 03:41 PM	#14
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	Waiting for a funny...

08-24-2008, 03:48 PM	#15
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Yeah yeah, I need to get the story going.

08-24-2008, 03:54 PM	#16
Jailbreaker Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Not in jail anymore, yay! Gender: Posts: 3,482 Thanks: 1,074 Thanked 185 Times in 118 Posts	I GUESS that's a SORTA good reason....

08-24-2008, 04:09 PM	#17
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,699 Thanks: 704 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	I know what the problem is, I wrote most of my successful comic parts while at school(mostly in math class), but wrote these two at home.

08-24-2008, 07:40 PM	#19
1-up Salesman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Letting you guys know that I'm planning on continuing Attack of the Spammers soon. Gender: Posts: 4,095 Thanks: 2,162 Thanked 250 Times in 194 Posts Blog Entries: 9	I'll look forward to more!

08-24-2008, 07:42 PM	#20
Luigiman7 ヽ(◔ ◡ ◔)ノ.･ﾟ*｡･+☆ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ~)´◡｀(~ Gender: Posts: 17,605 Thanks: 1,134 Thanked 1,012 Times in 713 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Luigi's line was important to the story. IT WAS. MAKE IT SO NOOOOW __________________ ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ＷＯＮ’Ｔ　ＹＯＵ　ＢＥＣＯＭＥ　Ａ　ＭＡＧＩＣＡＬ　ＧＩＲＬ？