Mario's Diabolical Plan of Kinda Unstoppable Evil!

Random User · 06-30-2009, 07:51 AM

Alright, here's my first coimc. I tried to fix the blurriness but couldn't. Either way, it's still readable, so enjoy!

Redshirt · 06-30-2009, 08:04 AM

Save as PNG.

The Flattest Pancake · 06-30-2009, 08:06 AM

Meh. It's okay.
But I like how you made that Mario bot!

Dizzy · 06-30-2009, 08:10 AM

1. The Mario sprite in the periscope looks like it's unevenly stretched.
2. It wasn't all that humorous, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and let you build your plot more before claiming anything.
3. That building Mario's on looks too much like a Paint drawing. Add just a little detail next time.
4. The giant Mario is an extremely stretched. Maybe use some bigger sprites for it. Like that Lou Albano sheet at the Shyguy Kingdom.
5. ...Heh, a BFAA reference. Just make sure you give credit to the original spriters if you use their sprites.

As for the blurriness, did you save as a PNG? If that doesn't work, then you might want to use a different image host, like Slide.

Random User · 06-30-2009, 10:46 AM

Whattaya know? Saving my coimc as a PNG worked. Thnks

Dizzy · 06-30-2009, 10:49 AM

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGRUDER!!!

Nicely done. And the graphics are noticably sharper. But make Kamek's text a darker color.

Random User · 07-01-2009, 09:16 AM

Oh yeah; Here's that sprite of Jay when he was leaving on the plane in #2;

Gabriel · 07-02-2009, 09:16 PM

Neat. That Mario robot's pretty cool. I wonder if you'll ever put in any other giant robots of mass destruction.

Robotazy · 07-02-2009, 10:09 PM

Um, remove the white space please.

It's unsightly

Random User · 07-03-2009, 04:54 PM

^k, i'll make sure to do that next comic

Random User · 07-03-2009, 06:32 PM

Oooooo... suspense!

Gabriel · 07-03-2009, 09:09 PM

Let it be known now that Donez has a weird looking brain.

Redshirt · 07-22-2009, 10:14 PM

Mmm brains...

Gabriel · 07-22-2009, 11:25 PM

Also, you should maybe separate the panels, 'cause it was getting kinda hard to differentiate halfway through. Otherwise, good job!

Luigiman7 · 07-23-2009, 09:59 AM

Yeah, use a black line or something.

06-30-2009, 07:51 AM	#1
Random User Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Equestrian Republic of Spanglidesh Gender: Posts: 3,559 Thanks: 320 Thanked 195 Times in 143 Posts Blog Entries: 4	Mario's Diabolical Plan of Kinda Unstoppable Evil! Alright, here's my first coimc. I tried to fix the blurriness but couldn't. Either way, it's still readable, so enjoy!

07-23-2009, 09:59 AM	#15
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06-30-2009, 08:04 AM	#2
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,698 Thanks: 703 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Save as PNG.

06-30-2009, 08:06 AM	#3
The Flattest Pancake Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: (insert something witty here) Gender: Posts: 1,391 Thanks: 97 Thanked 25 Times in 23 Posts Blog Entries: 8	Meh. It's okay. But I like how you made that Mario bot!

06-30-2009, 08:10 AM	#4
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	1. The Mario sprite in the periscope looks like it's unevenly stretched. 2. It wasn't all that humorous, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and let you build your plot more before claiming anything. 3. That building Mario's on looks too much like a Paint drawing. Add just a little detail next time. 4. The giant Mario is an extremely stretched. Maybe use some bigger sprites for it. Like that Lou Albano sheet at the Shyguy Kingdom. 5. ...Heh, a BFAA reference. Just make sure you give credit to the original spriters if you use their sprites. As for the blurriness, did you save as a PNG? If that doesn't work, then you might want to use a different image host, like Slide.

06-30-2009, 10:46 AM	#5
Random User Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Equestrian Republic of Spanglidesh Gender: Posts: 3,559 Thanks: 320 Thanked 195 Times in 143 Posts Blog Entries: 4	Whattaya know? Saving my coimc as a PNG worked. Thnks

06-30-2009, 10:49 AM	#6
Dizzy Podiaphobe Join Date: Oct 2007 Gender: Posts: 19,359 Thanks: 1,764 Thanked 1,161 Times in 804 Posts Blog Entries: 116	MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGRUDER!!! Nicely done. And the graphics are noticably sharper. But make Kamek's text a darker color.

07-01-2009, 09:16 AM	#7
Random User Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Equestrian Republic of Spanglidesh Gender: Posts: 3,559 Thanks: 320 Thanked 195 Times in 143 Posts Blog Entries: 4	Oh yeah; Here's that sprite of Jay when he was leaving on the plane in #2;

07-02-2009, 09:16 PM	#8
Gabriel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,752 Thanks: 206 Thanked 139 Times in 115 Posts	Neat. That Mario robot's pretty cool. I wonder if you'll ever put in any other giant robots of mass destruction.

07-02-2009, 10:09 PM	#9
Robotazy PRESS ANY KEY TO PANIC! Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: A Tiny Shed Gender: Posts: 16,483 Thanks: 529 Thanked 1,254 Times in 897 Posts Blog Entries: 46	Um, remove the white space please. It's unsightly

07-03-2009, 04:54 PM	#10
Random User Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Equestrian Republic of Spanglidesh Gender: Posts: 3,559 Thanks: 320 Thanked 195 Times in 143 Posts Blog Entries: 4	^k, i'll make sure to do that next comic

07-03-2009, 06:32 PM	#11
Random User Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Equestrian Republic of Spanglidesh Gender: Posts: 3,559 Thanks: 320 Thanked 195 Times in 143 Posts Blog Entries: 4	Oooooo... suspense!

07-03-2009, 09:09 PM	#12
Gabriel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,752 Thanks: 206 Thanked 139 Times in 115 Posts	Let it be known now that Donez has a weird looking brain.

07-22-2009, 10:14 PM	#13
Redshirt Wiggidy Wack Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: A place with things Gender: Posts: 16,698 Thanks: 703 Thanked 1,006 Times in 695 Posts Blog Entries: 50	Mmm brains...

07-22-2009, 11:25 PM	#14
Gabriel Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Pesterchum~ Gender: Posts: 2,752 Thanks: 206 Thanked 139 Times in 115 Posts	Also, you should maybe separate the panels, 'cause it was getting kinda hard to differentiate halfway through. Otherwise, good job!